Hi Hello I Really Like Your Story And I Was Hoping If I Could Get Some Tips For My Writings?

Hi hello i really like your story and i was hoping if i could get some tips for my writings?

Its for my first story.a very dark one.

Okay i will say that i pay too much attention on the movements of characters..i can't write feelings or thought and when i re read it..i just get bored..

My writing doesn't look like the author isn't telling a story.

I need tips on how to lessen the details on movements and more details on feelings, thoughts.

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hii ! so sorry for such a late response </3

unfortunately, i dont rlly know if i can help you much with that :(( i'm the complete opposite of you. 1: i'm a massive baby, and as you can tell from basically all of my fics, they're all super fluffy..maybe try looking for inspo in darker blogs ? getting bored re-reading also happens to me a lot, but it's mostly bc i re read ALOT to make sure everything looks right, so it gets tiring lolol im preetty sure thats normal (or atleast more common than you think)

im also really focused on dialogue, what i like to do is mostly just think about what i want the chara's to say first, and try to frame te actions and descriptions around them n if that helps a lil !

im sorry i couldn't be much help, but i wish u lots of luck on your writing journey ! much luvv <3

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