Front Facing Egrets Making Me Lose Control Of Everything

front facing egrets making me lose control of everything

do you ever become obsessed with a character and you just go "of fucking course its that one" at yourself because you are so incredibly predictable

A tip for excellent writing I just learned: Don't introduce a character with their Dramatic Backstory. It makes readers go "oh alright this is the Dramatic Background Story Character" and establishes a baseline of Tragic, either for the story as a whole or this character in particular. With no contrast of light and dark, pure darkness isn't impactful, it just looks like the absence of anything to look at.

If you really want someone's dramatic backstory to hit the audience like a gut punch, let them get to know the character first. That way the dark backstory doesn't come off as a description of who they are, but an explanation to why they are the way they are. Bonus points for connecting it to something that's already been established as a part of the character - what a devastating blow to suddenly put together that hold on, that funny quirky thing that they always do is a fucking trauma response.

A cry For help form Gaza

My name is Rafat Al-Swaisi. I live in Gaza, where

there is real famine and deadly war. My home and my dreams were destroyed during this war. Now I think with a feeling of frustration when I tell you now that I intend to leave Gaza ,But in these harsh conditions, I do not have enough money to leave Gaza ,I hope everyone can help me evacuate my family from genocide.

Hala loved drawing and she loved life and drawing, and now her school and her life have been destroyed because of the war. We are looking for any way to get out of Gaza.

Hala is suffering from a lack of food, water and medicine. Hala's bird died because of the war. Hala's house is destroyed. We are left with...

Despite the suffering and hardships of this fierce war , your support and assistance ease us and grant us power and patience. Your contribution keeps a whole family safe, that is why i am asking you to donate whatever you can of at least share my link so that other donors can know about my tragedy and pain.

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My name is Rafat Al-Swaisi. I live in Gaza, where there is real famine and deadl… Rafat alswisi needs your support for help my family to get

WHO tf keeping pads with no wings in production?? Put it in your draws and by the time you walk out the bathroom it’s down the street buying scratch offs at the corner store. Like girl