Ok So, Since This Is Gonna Be A Large Post Im Gonna Try To Divide It In Sections In The Next Order: Location,

ok so, since this is gonna be a large post im gonna try to divide it in sections in the next order: location, characters and motives, plot, changes and design. there may be some things here and there that slip, and since im planning on making this a big project im gonna try to not jump into spoilers that much

(has a note, some aspects may change has more games come out, so what i say in this post may be edited or no longer apply when those changes happen)

so, without much wait, let's dive into the rewrite!

LOCATION

The location where the game is taking place in the same place has canon (a kindergarten in Canada, Montreal) the state is not changing as it does not affect the characters other than their accent. The kindergarten however is changing in design both on outside and inside, as it is redesigned into a mansion that was repurposed as a kindergarten by the owner of this mansion. after the accident it fell in ruin, leaving it empty has some sort of urban legend

opila’s room will resemble the original, but more soft and less plastic. something similar to the reincarnated version, with tubes on the walls and a more cushion-like floor and the egg hunt will be the same as reincarnated (instead of feeding Opila, you put them in a nest).

now to the facility itself, it's similar to a hidden bunker, many levels leading down to a cave system, it being divided in sections, the first being floors like communication or information, the others being of testing and subjects rooms, and the lower ones being of extraction and collection of Givanium (i'll get to that in a second), has the lower it gets its more dark and slightly more claustrophobic.

CHARACTERS AND MOTIVES

Now this is the part where I explain some of the characters and their motivations, to not make it too confusing, I'm gonna only explain the characters up to chapter 2. so let's start with the most recognizable

BANBAN

I’ve changed a few things about Banban when speaking about his personality and motives. instead of being whatever he is right now (a smart guy thats melodramatic about his issues if i have to guess) and more for a cowardly but helpful in some sense, he still has his problems with his violent form, but acknowledges that is something he should fear and locks himself has far away as possible, giving instructions and opening doors from where he is.

im keeping the “he thinks he’s Uthman” to some extent, where he knows who his donor was, but cannot recall any clear memories from him, making him feel lost as to who he is and who is the “real” Uthman. his main motive is to get out, has he feels he doesn't belong there

BANBALEENA

Her personality and goals are somewhat similar to the original, “energetic but crazy teacher that went mad due to isolation”. she IS kind tho, is just all the bottled up trauma with the isolation and being a subject of experimentation, at some point in the plot she will turn neutral, not attacking the protagonist unless they do something.

OPILA

Simple, it's a bird and it's trying to protect its children. there's not that much character in her, after all she’s made to act like an animal, so she mostly acts on instinct.

JOSH

It's a similar case to Opila, acting more out of instinct like an animal rather than a person. The only thing I'm changing is him seeing the player has “dolls'' and him being some sort of giant baby monster. so he will be more of “giant unpredictable monster that is better to not provoke”

FLYNN

im changing more his personality than his motives (they’re still different but still connect), personality wise he’s more like a rowdy young adult rather than an all knowing elder god, he’s more naive and easy to anger, besides he shows his emotions pretty quickly. his goals are somewhat similar to the canon one, that meaning that he wants to get out, but the difference is that he doesn't want to do it at the expense of children, he would want more to find a way out himself and risk dying than putting innocent children in danger, so when he hears that they’ve been dragged down to the depth he’s fuming.

FIDDLES

he would take more the role of friend, as he has the mentality of a 3 year old therefore not knowing any better. it's not a big role but that's because i still don't know his role in canon, guess i'll have to wait for chapter 4 (this may be updated in some future)

SELINE

Despite her role being small I still wanted to expand on her a bit more, she’s someone who’s very scared and constantly in a fight or flight response, if she can't flee, she will fight her way out. She's more like an alarm for other subjects, as if she sees something that could be potentially dangerous she announces it or just stays for a second before leaving. 

NABNAB

Nabnab is something between his canon version and canon josh, as he feels lonley and wishes to have a friend, but also doesn't understand why his actions have negative consequences, as he was never taught or understood what it meant. his personality is awkward, stalking people and forcing them to go with him, not wanting to hurt anyone unless its demands are not met.

TOADSTER

Toadster is a little more complicated, despite his role still not being clear, his motives are very relevant to the plot, so i'm just gonna say he’s looking for someone specific. Meanwhile, his personality is somewhat distant and cold, not that big of a talker. He has some negative feelings towards the experiments, but that's something for later.

PROTAGONIST/SUNNY

now to the protagonist (who is my personal interpretation of it). She's a single mother that is looking for her missing son, willing to do anything so he (and the other kids) get back to their families safely. She's scared easily and very nervous, but she’s also stubborn and very protective, which is the reason why she decided to go this deep to find the children.

ZOLPHIUS

Zolphius has the same issue has Toadster, where he's very important to the plot to the point i cant speak about him too much, so better talk a out his personality. He's not evil or creepy or whatever, but rather more like a "incredibly nice and silly person who just turns out to look very fucking scary", he loves singing and dancing, he may appear here and there and give cryptic warnings, but overall he's not dangerous.

PLOT

The plot is gonna be the same as the original, a parent looking for their missing child in an abandoned kindergarten that has a dark secret. The things that i'm changing and adding about it are more centered around characters, with this i mean that things such as "Banban's identity crisis" and "what happened to the scientist" are gonna be more of subplots or things to give more background to the story. Some things like the Givanium and the note of the children will still be there, but those are gonna take a deeper role with Zolphius.

Something I've been thinking of but don't know if I will do is that I could jump between moments in time (like the hallucinations of Flynn, which I've decided to change so Zolphius gives them) to see a different perspective of it, but I'm not so sure.

CHANGES AND DESIGNS

Now to the good stuff, the changes to i made to the characters designs and things i've added to make them feel more unique

(Note that i may have changes some little things about the character designs before making this post)

EXPERIMENTS

The group of experiments all have their unique things, so before going individually I would like to point out some little things ive changed about the characters. I've changed it so there needs to be more than one genome, or else the subject would become unstable and not survive, therefore needing to add some animal genomes so it would become stable. this means that the experiments have some part of not only animal instincts, but also some animal characteristics

Some other details are scars caused by accessories made by the scientist (electro-shock collars) so they could be assured they would be in their best behavior. 

Another thing I changed, and is important to mention, is their roles. Their purpose still is to help teach kids, but their main role has been replaced from “teachers” to “entertainers”, by this I mean that they’re more of a circus or actors rather than actual teachers, they still teach stuff but their main goal is to entertain children.

ok now onto each individual character

BANBAN

I made him taller and have more animal-like characteristics, resembling something somewhat “human”. His main role was “acrobat '', being able to perform tricks in the air and those where it looks like you breathe fire. His feral form is more animalistic, running in all fours as he chases you and throwing everything on his way just to get you, this also relates to his facial expression. instead of having that goofy smile all the time he actually can emote, his tongue and smile only show up when aggressive. another thing i changed even tho is not that important, is that his alias is now “the goat man” instead of the devil, because it sounds less weird

BANBALEENA

Similar case has Banban, making her have more animal traits but keeping some human traits, her horns going inwards and giving it the appearance of bunny ears. Instead of being a normal teacher, she’s a ballet instructor that also teaches arts ‘n crafts, she retains most of her canon traits as stated before, but having a different aggressive form which is similar to Banban’s. She also runs on all fours and has more expressions, and I also replaced the object-students with mannequins.

OPILA

I turned Opila more bird-like, and made her taller and able to fly, as I felt the original was too goofy by how she was shaped. she’s in a constant state of aggression unless her husband (which i changed their name from Tarta to Doe has in John Doe) shows her the person is harmless. im retaining both ostrich and flamingo donors, has it would be scary if she killed you by kicks than by beak

JOSH

I changed his pose and some of his designs, making him more “strong” and look more like a dinosaur. His role was of the “strongman”, the scar of his face being by fire. i also changed his personality from i suppose is “mentally a child” to “alligator beast”, has i made his donors a gorilla and an alligator.

FLYNN

i made him an octopus, a jellyfish just didn't make too much sense for me, has how could he be so intelligent if he was an animal without a brain. he has most things of an octopus like changing color and squeezing in very small places, and he has 4 beaks that can come out of his eye, and has stated before, he can no longer put us in a hallucination.

FIDDLES

I made them look more like monkeys, while also giving them characteristics of children. they’re very similar to the canon interpretation we have where they’re just like 4 year olds, otherwise nothing much has changed.

SELINE

I made her slightly taller and had her eyes bend down as if she was hurt, also gave her small nub hands as I saw it fitting for her. i made her less likely to attack unless she doesn't have an escape route and made her look more beat up. otherwise nothing changed

NABNAB

I made him look more like Banban and Banbaleena, as he’s supposed to look like an evil version of them. The horns on his head are actually jaws and he can rotate his head so it's facing down, the stitches on his back are for keeping it shut, as there are another pair of arms inside of it. he cannot speak but rather just mimics voices and sounds.

TOADSTER

He's bigger than Banban and stronger, he has a shotgun not pictured and his badge hangs off his neck. most of his changes are based off his personality, has he’s more quiet and aggressive towards threats, but otherwise he’s just always annoyed and somewhat remorseful

and has of the other characters of chapter 3 (and maybe 4) i’ll still have to work on it, but i already got some ideas, they just need a little adjusting

and that's all for now!! Wow, that was longer than I thought. but i hope i made it clear what i wanted to change and how i wanted to change it. If you like it, that's great! if you don't that's fine too, and if you have any questions don't be shy and ask! I'd love to answer them!!

anyways, hope you like it!!

give em hell girlllll

your Legolas is definitely the prettiest 🥺♥️ the official Legolas for me even

What's funny is that even though I've been drawing brown-haired and -skinned Legolas since like 2005, the raccoon comic is definitely the dumbest I've ever drawn him. Normally I make him real heroic:

Here he is heroically patrolling a Mirkwood escarpment (2017)

And watching the destruction of Mt. Doom while favoring a heroically bowstring-burnt forearm (2019) and staring heroically into the distance in Rohan (2016)

Some ideas about Joana D'Arc in the universe of ROR:

⚠️( first of all, I rely entirely on the mythology behind the figure of Joan, I'm not here to disrespect other people's religions! this is fiction and an inspiration I took for an OC, leave me alone!!!) ⚠️

Oc x Canon.

My silly version of Joan D'Arc! (made in Eldarya)

-Joana was devoted to God, and claimed to be able to hear the voice of angels to save her people, but in the end she was only influenced by the church's propaganda about power and submission, and did not know how to deal with it. 

-She dedicated her life to the art of the sword, pretending to be a man most of her life, she wanted to prove to her God and people that she was worthy of such power the same power of the men who spoke for god.

-Gradually she lost her faith, when she noticed that everything she did only led to the fire, her death.

- When she learned that the gods wanted to end humanity, it was the last straw, did she fight so hard for this?  Unforgiven. 

-She no longer fights for the God who abandoned her, but for humanity that even with its flaws and evil is still worthy of something, she will show the gods and those who burned her!

-Is scared to death of fire, when her sword flashed in blue flames she almost had a heart attack.

  -Loves to eat, Joana was never a rich person, she has a very big appetite and eating is something that gives her pleasure, likes bluenfood alot. 

- Loki can't trick her, the woman is a statue.

-Figures from Christian mythology seem to have an interest in her that she is willing to ignore.

- Poseidon(Beelzebub any man fr): no man has ever beaten me.  Joana: jokes on you, I'm not a man.  -She has a soft spot for Sasaki and she doesn't know why. 

- Buddha forces her to eat sweets when she's down, imagine him shoving a macaron in her mouth while she pouts. 

- On the outside cold as ice but total princess energy inside, likes dresses and being girly.

-Same energy as Lady Oscar from Rose of Versailes. A woman who can also be a pretty prince.

-Beelzebub has a Stalker energy tords her, something about blasphemy and how devout she was to god only to turn against him.

-Selective mute that prefers to die than say anything...but sometimes out of nowhere she has attacks of screaming because she feels/thinks she is on fire again...and it goes back to being silent as if nothing had happened.

Summers coming to an end (Unfortunately) so why not post my OC bb before it ends!

Super proud of how this came out. Made it in June, but why not post it now?

SEE YA!

AAAHANSGSIS I LOVE YOUR SPIDER-MAN OC!! The wrestler-looking mask, the whole western feel, and he so handsome too!!

MEET PEDRO VÁL PARALES/PARKS!! One of my Spider-Man OC’s!! Yes he has two last names and I’m not explaining the lore behind it tee hee

I’ll post more about him and the world he comes from, including the story he’s in I made about the spider verse, but until then, here’s his ref 🦅🦅

Hope y’all like him as much as I do and if you have any suggestions to give about his design please let me know!! I love getting respectful feedback!