Hello, Dear.

Hello, dear.

I just wanted to say that I just read your demo, and I love your writing. The concept of the seven deadly sins as ROs is absolutely incredible.

I'm having a hard time deciding between Marguerite and Tai 😭

You are incredibly talented, and I appreciate your great job!

I'm already excited for your next updates. 💜

Oh hello! I love your own writing as well. Thank you so much for the kind words. While I can't choose which RO is better than the other, I can say that both routes will pull on your heart strings.

Hi! Omgggg I love your interactive fiction and I was wondering if you were planning to let our werewolf MC have kids in the story if our vamp MC were to meet them. If not it is completely fine! No pressure but I am headcanoning in my head and vamp MC's kid and Werewolves MC's kid get together in the future. Ahhhh it's just so cute to me!!! 😆😆😆

My plan is to neither confirm nor deny whether or not Blood Moon MC has had children or not. I want players to be able to headcanon whichever outcome they prefer.

You can headcanon futures too. Have fun! Though, if you headcanon Blood-Moon-MC's-kid hooking up with Thicker-Than-MC's-kid and are picturing them having kids then those grandkids would have a 50% shot at being werewolves... while also having a vampire lord for a grandparent... and I kinda love the mess that that is.

Heeey Florence I hope you are having a splendid weekend ♥️ I took note and my nerdy heart laughed at seeing you refer to Tai as a bit of a Tsundere. Omg i love grumpy hard to romance characters.

Call me toxic but I love a bit of jealousy. My MC is a bit of a flirt himself so it got me thinking.

How would the ROs react to someone openly flirting with MC trying to ask them on a date like Literally infront of them during the crushing stage?

Thankkkk you 😇

Oh, we all want a bit of jealousy in our lives. Who doesn't? Now, how would the ROs react to the MC who was being flirted with.....????

CRUSHING STAGE:

💛 Marcel

Oh God, my poor baby. He really wouldn't know what to do, but in the end, he would make the sacrifice of turning around while you talk to someone who seems to have your attention or what it looks like anyway. He would be your shoulder to cry on or just a best friend in general. When looking at you, he doesn't need anything else.

Marcel is mature and would rather not make a fuss, but that doesn't mean he doesn't care. Oh no, he will totally be staying awake the whole night thinking of you, or maybe you will find that he made you a cup of tea the next morning. Just a little something to get you thinking of him.

🧡 Margaret

The first thought that comes to mind is nervousness. She might have a few thoughts, like:

Why did I feel like I wanted to punch that person in the face? That is not very nice.

Margaret would be upset, and she would probably go to one of her friends (Marcel, Rosemary, Owen, or even Tai) for help. When she is told that she is jealous, she will be a bubbling sunshine mess. She has feelings for you, and how could she not? You're awesome! She would burst through the café door and jump into your arms, telling you how she felt.

♥️ Owen

Snarky comments, for sure, towards whoever is flirting with you. Scoffing at their personal interests—basically anything they could make a comment about, they would. Owen is really clueless about love—well, not clueless; he just wouldn't realize that this was a crush; he would just think he felt something off about the person.

If you were to ask him about it, he would just shurg his shoulders and say, "I don't have a good feeling about them, Lass/Duck/Lad." But when he looks into your eyes, Oh Boy, does he feel the heart beating in his chest. It finally hits him like a truck going ninety miles per hour, and he might actually choke when talking to you. With a confused look on your face, he would leave the shop.

Not again. Not again. 

💙 Rosemary

Rosie wouldn't think it was a crush as well, but she was just upset that this person was taking her attention away.

Rosemary would gently touch your arm or whisper in your ear, making the person talking to you so uncomfortable. When you were to turn around, Rosemary would give the person a little death glare and pull you towards her, telling you that you looked like you were going to fall.

When the person gets their order and leaves, in no time is Rosemary crossing her legs with class, and just like that, the problem is gone. Now give her the attention she deserves.

🩵 Tai

Denial. Anger. He would keep a stern look on his face as he insulted the person; if you were to ask him about it, his line of fire would land on you. With a few insults, he would leave the shop, tears not forming until he knew he was alone.

However, he would soon realize how much of an ass he was being and apologize to you the next day, but his mask was back up. All you would get is a monotone, cold apology, but an apology nonetheless.

💚 Zane

Zane would be foaming at the mouth. Zane would be glaring at the person so hard that if looks could kill, then that person would be dead on the spot.

When you turn around to get something, Zane looks at the person and whispers.

"Mine" 

If the person got the hint and left you alone, then Zane would leave it at that, but if not, oh, then you might see a missing poster in a few weeks. Don't cross Zane.

Hi, so funny story I'm a sugarcube coder. But when I saw people asking for a save system and you wanting to deliver, but don't know how to, I wanted to help. So I studied the entire(not really just the important parts) harlowe documentation last night and made a whole template. And today I was gonna share it to you until I found out you were switching to sugarcube I was like "Welp... at least she got it covered".

Anyway, good luck with your if, I love it!

also uh.. the template I made https://diomhair.itch.io/harlowe-twine-template

OMG, thank you so much! I will still totally use this template; if not on this IF, then on others I create. If any of you have any coding materials, then please feel free to share them with me, SugerCube or not. I want to learn about the different systems.

Can I get a spicy scene with Zane....please 🙏

Of course.....WARNING OF NSFW

BEWARE: KNIFE PLAY/BLOOD TW

Zane bowed his head, your eyes opened, and he just gazed at you for a long breathless minute, frozen, stuck in a moment, in a forbidden thought, and then, with the lift of your chin, Zane bridged the distance with a sweet kiss.

But the sweetness didn't last long, the gentleness swiftly turning passionate and ravenous, sighs vibrating from both your chests and your bodies immediately scorching despite the fact that you felt his frigid body against yours. When you both drew apart, you felt his fingers slip beneath your shirt straps and slid it off your shoulders. "Get this off," he said frantically, and you quickly stripped for him.

Zane raised your head up and kissed you again before rolling to his side, and you followed, your long legs entwining with Zane's, and Zane tasted his own blood on your lips. Zane swiped a smear over your lower lip before pressing his own lips on the small cut on the left side of your throat.

Zane began to suck on your collarbone gradually, muttering wonderful compliments in your ear and splattering lip-shaped blood all over your body. You felt your body sink into the mattress as the whispers continued like a prayer.

When Zane moved his head, your sight was drawn to the location of the knife. However, with the first aid supplies and emergency kit on hand, however you could immediately feel your body recovering, like a warm coat aura pouring over you, the sting gone. However, Zane was still on top of you, refusing to let you go

..........and you were okay with that.

So I really like this so far but... I'm doing everything to be stoic and indifferent and i'm just not getting that vibe. MC described stoic as being distant (Yet doesn't act as someone who is distant without us having to choose it every time). We know that With stoicism people don't show much emotion or facial expressions, they basically keep both of those things in check and close to their chest at all times, regardless of how they feel on the inside; and on the rare occasion that they do show any, it's dry in nature. Leveled not really allowing a person to gauge the true Feeling behind the person's words, right? Basically detached.

Indifferent- We know of course, is not caring one way or the other . No emotions needed because you simply don't care enough to waste energy on the topic or situation...it's like Eh, whatever. This is Another form of being detached.

Basically MC seems to be a tad bit the opposite. Which isn't an issue per say but it def breaks immersion when you're going for a specific personality.

Like being outright comforting, caring etc. Those feelings could 100% be there when writing an MC who is stoic or indifferent but they'd do it in a more subdued way. More straight-faced or nonchalant. This is in reference to how MC seems to be okay with using comforting words and gestures(like touch) which is more the line of a friendly individual. Lol Not someone who was indifferent about their mothers death and didn't even want their own friend hugging them low-key.

Okay, sorry for that whole Novel. I hope it doesn't ruin your mood or anything. I definitely don't want that. I just thought maybe pointing it out now, you could add more stoic and indifferent behavior(for those with higher stats in that area), in the natural and linear interactions of the story in the future updates.

Either way I'm loving the story so far, I really like Tai but i'm purposely keeping my distance for now Lol.😅

Hi! Yes, I completely know what you mean, and this is something that my beta tester has also pointed out, and I completely understand where you are coming from. I do plan to make more stoic and indifferent choices in the writing if you were to choose stoic, where instead of voicing your concerns, you will be having more of a conversation in your own head. Where the MC will hide their emotions more.