Pls Write Something About Quinn And Casual Dominance W Reader Makes Me Feral
Pls write something about Quinn and casual dominance w reader đĽ˛đĽ˛ makes me feral
a/n: OH MY GOD YES!
summary: Here are four times Quinn Hughes has embodied casual dominance.

1. Quinn walked into the apartment, dropping his bag by the door with a soft thud, his hand scrubbing over his face in exhaustion. His game that night had been intense from the first moment of the first period, but stepping into your shared home, all the tension seemed to melt away as the warmth engulfed him.
You were curled up on the couch, wearing one of his hoodies, legs tucked beneath you as you scrolled through your phone. You glanced up as he walked in, a soft smile immediately spreading across your face, eyes lighting up.
"Hey, you're home," you greeted, setting your phone aside and kneeling on the plush of the couch to face him.
"Yeah," he nodded, his voice a little hoarse from shouting on the ice. He walked over to you, resting one hand on the back of the couch and the other under your chin, gently tilting your head up to meet his eyes. "Miss me?"
You nodded earnestly, the way his touch lingered on your skin sending a spark through you running right down to your core.
Quinn always had this way of being in control without even trying. Just the way he looked at you, or touched you, made you feel like you were exactly where you belonged, in his arms, protected and loved by him.
"Good," he murmured, before leaning down to press a soft kiss to your lips. He lingered there, pulling back just enough to let his warm breath fan over your skin as his nose bumped affectionately off of yours. "I'm starving. You've eaten already, right?"
"I was waiting for you," You shook your head, smiling a little sheepishly, chin ducking down to your chest.
"I thought we spoke about this a few weeks ago," Quinn raised an eyebrow, his thumb tracing lightly over your bottom lip. "You don't have to wait on me, you know that."
"I know," you whispered, your heart skipping at the gentle reprimand laced in his voice. He wasn't mad, Quinn never really got mad at you, one look in your eyes had him crumbling, but there was something in the way he spoke that let you know he expected more from you. "Just wanted to spend time with you."
There was a moment of quiet as Quinn huffed out a small breath, eyes softening.
"Good girl for being honest," he quietly smiled, giving your chin a soft squeeze before straightening up. "But I need you to eat when youâre hungryâŚC'mon, let's get you something to eat."
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2.
You sat across from Quinn at the kitchen table, mindlessly scrolling through your phone, your bowl of multicoloured cereal left untouched while he ate what you called his 'crunchy-mom' breakfast.
He let his eyes linger on you for a moment, his brow furrowing slightly as you continue to type away, distracted.
In a swift move, Quinn reached over and placed his hand atop of your phone, gently lowering it until it was set down on the table. You blinked up at him in surprise, your mind hazy as you glanced down at the phone he had then switched off.
"Quinnâ" you began before he cut you off with a small shake of his head.
"Eyes on me," he spoke firmly, but there's no harshness in his tone. It's more of a command, one you instinctively want to follow. His gaze locks onto yours, calm but unwavering. "You need breakfast."
Your breath catches for a second, the look in his eyes almost drowning you. You sigh with a playful roll of your eyes, feeling your pulse quicken as you lean back in your chair.
"Okay," you spoke softly, a smile tugging at your lips.
"That's better," Quinn replied, his voice low and approving. He continued eating, as if nothing out of the ordinary had happened, but you couldn't help but feel a small thrill from how easily he took control of the situation.
"And don't think I didn't see you roll your eyes, pretty girl..."
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3.
You ran a stressed hand through your tangled hair, tears pricking in your eyes as you slumped onto the floor.
You'd been tasked with getting ready for a night out with Quinn for the Canucks and you struggled to decide what to wear.
What if you dressed too fancy? Too causal? Too grandma-like? Too slutty?
Clothes were scattered all over the bed and floor as your frustration built with each passing second. You buried your face in your palms, face hot and screwed up.
You heard the soft patter of Quinn walking in, along with the pause of his steps as you presumed he took the chaotic scene in.
Without missing a beat, he crouched in front of you, placing his hands on either side of your face, gently grabbing your wrist and pulling you to a stop.
"Hey," he began softly, his voice calm, but there was a firmness that immediately made you pause. "Look at me."
You did, your breath coming in short, anxious bursts. Quinn's hands moved to cup your face, his thumbs brushing over your cheeks as he forced you to focus on him.
"Breathe," he commanded, his thumbs still brushing softly over your skin. You did as he said, taking a deep breath in, and he nodded in approval.Â
"Stop," he softly murmured, yet an authoritarian tone was laced through his tone. "You're overthinking again."
You sigh, leaning forward into his chest, as his arms immediately enveloped you.
"I don't know what to wear," you shyly admitted, feeling slightly embarrassed as you nuzzled your head into his chest.
Quinn chuckled quietly, his hand gently smoothing over your hair before he pulled away and stood up, eyeing the pile of clothes on the bed. Your reddened eyes follow his every move as his eyebrows knit together in thought.
"Don't worry about it," he murmured, glancing back at you. "I'll pick something for you."
You watched as he casually sorted through your various options before he pulled out a black dress you hadn't even begun to consider an option. Seemingly satisfied, he held it up, giving you a small nod.
"Wear this one," he advised, hanging it up in the en-suite for you. "You look stunning in it and I'm wearing all black."
You smile, your hand slipping into his outstretched palm allowing him to gently pull you up off the floor.
Your head buried itself in his chest once more, your arms wrapping around his shoulders as he encircled your waist, his lips pressing a chaste kiss to the crown of your head.
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4.
The room was crowded, full of voices and laughter, and you could feel the anxiety rising in your chest. It was one of those nights where everything you wore tore at your skin and everything reaching your ears was simply too overwhelming, leaving you to shrink inward, trying to find a place to breathe.
Quinn noticed immediately.
He had a knack for sensing when you were feeling off, even in the middle of such a busy event. You were standing by the bar, nervously fidgeting with the hem of your dress when he appeared beside you.
"You alright?" he asked, his voice low so that only you could hear. His hand found the small of your back.
"I just...there's so many people,"Â you admitted, your voice barely audible above the crowd. "It's a lot."
Quinn nodded, understanding instantly and without missing a beat, he turned you towards him, his body shielding you from the rest of the room.
"Look at me," he instructed softly, his hand coming up to tilt your chin so that you met his warm, eyes. "You're with me," he reminded you, his thumb brushing lightly across your jaw. "Focus on me, okay? No one else matters right now."
The rest of the room dimmed as Quinn filled all of your senses as he guided your hand into his, squeezing it gently.
"Breathe in and out for me, nice and slowly," he murmured, his voice calm as you stiffly nodded.
You did as he said, feeling your heartbeat slow as you focused on the warmth of his hand in yours, the solid feel of him standing so close.
"Better?" he asked, a small smile tugging at the corner of his lips.
You nodded, feeling the anxiety that had been bubbling inside you begin to ease. Quinn leaned down, pressing a soft kiss to your forehead, his hand still tight in yours.
"Good," he whispered, his lips brushing against your temple. "If you need a break, just say the word and we can go get some air."
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found this on my phone from during the playoffs. Good things are coming, friends đđ§Ą
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The Wanderer
jeremy frazier x fem oc.
chapter one: hey, sadie, itâs 1999.

From Jeremyâs window, you get a good view of the town. The trees all turning brown and gold, the leaves which fall from them in varying shades of reds and yellows. Some are dead, with only branches to spare. Then there is the winding road, of course, and the small stores that tunnel it.
From Jeremyâs window, people are putting together Christmas decorations on their houses, string lights in multicolours, and Santa Claus signs in the yards.
From Jeremyâs window, she stares down into his backyard. Her backyard. Their backyard, as it has been for so long. Thereâs the stolen bike propped up on the inside fence, waiting for the cops. There is the eyesore pile of leaves laying crisp in wait for the kids from next door to come and dive into when theyâre feeling daring. There is Jeremyâs childhood treehouse, its paint red and faded but standing strong. And sitting at its edge, strumming a guitar, is Jeremy himself. His long fingers dance along the guitar strings, long legs hanging over the edge of the doorway he sits in. Today, Jeremyâs dressed in her favourite teal sweater of his, and black jeans. His head is bent over the guitar ever so slightly, chocolate curls brushing his eyes. Itâs strange, how she gets the urge to grab his curls and slam his face into the treehouse wall. Strange indeed.
As if he can sense her watching, Jeremy raises his head and tilts back, lifting a knee up to his chest under the guitar. Milky skin is unchanged in the cool weather, darling pink lips turning up to a smile. A set of dark brown eyes meet herâs, and they set there. Heâs calm today, apparently. Heâs kind.
Sadie isnât.
Today she feelsâŚangry. Theyâre always conflicting emotions, the two of them. A match strikes inside her, and she raises a confident hand to her neck, swiftly moving it across in a slicing motion, clenching her teeth.
Jeremyâs mouth only tugs upward, perfect white teeth on display. He tears his eyes away and down to the guitar strings, and begins to play again. The song is familiar, but sheâs never learned its name. He wonât tell her. She canât help but latch her eyes on his hand, strumming the strings like theyâre the most delicate things in the world. Memories cast phantom fingertips along her wrists, searching somewhat softly for a pulse. Sheâd had one, then, at that particular moment in time.
Which was why heâd swung the bat again.
âYou should come down!â His voice calling pulls her from the past. Itâs like honey, not at all uncaring, and it does the trick. âThe fresh airâll do you some good!â
Sadie scoffs harshly. Fresh airâŚIs he trying to be funny?
âMove away from the window, Sadie,â he chastises, he advises, he urges.
She folds her arms and waits heavily on one hip, tapping her fingers along her arms, and steps backward until sheâs definitely out of his vision. The street is busy, today, but the treehouse is just behind the fence and out of sight. She could really annoy him and open the window, throw herself outâthat usually gives him a bit of a shiver, at least. Or maybeâ
âI know what youâre thinking, Sadie! Stop plotting and come down!â
He knows her too well. Being house-bound for twenty years will do that to a person.
Tilting her head, she allows herself to consider the options:
Oneâleaving their room today would be a nice change of scenery. She hasnât left it in exactly a week, rotting in desperation and depression. Eyeing the movie posters on the walls, Sadie thinks of all of the things that could go wrong by going outside. Absolutely nothing, to be real. She just risks blowing up on Jeremy for the third time this week.
TwoâJeremy would try to serenade her with a sweet word and deescalation techniques, and she couldnât promise that she wouldnât try to throw herself and him out of the treehouse.
âWhat do you think, Prisoner Panda?â
Sadie turns to their bed. There are Jeremyâs old plushies of course, only an alien from the movies in Montana, and a blanket. But there is also her panda, a small and ragged thing left here by chance many moons ago. Heâs cartoonish and limp, now the stuffing has moved so much. But heâs still smiling, and he smells like home. Prisoner Panda is Prisoner Sadieâs only best friend.
The other one killed her.
Prisoner Panda does not answer her.
âI should go out, right?â Sadie nods to the inanimate object. âA change of scenery will make me feel better, huh? Yeah. I think so, too.â
She takes a jacket from the back of Jeremyâs desk chair and pulls it on over her outfit of red dress and tights. The next step is getting out of the bedroom. Jeremyâs music is still playing away from the yard, as Sadie slips through the hallway. The yellow patterned wallpaper smells faintly of cigarette smoke and baking, the smell of which only becomes stronger the closer she gets to the ground floor and the kitchen.
The staircase is somewhat creaky, the banister painted dark brown, like old varnished mud, and the steps are the same. She canât count the times she fell on these stairs, all the times Jeremyâs mom would help her with an ice pack to the knee, or the head.
As if she can sense Sadie thinking about her, Jeremyâs mother comes hurrying by the staircase just when Sadie reaches the bottom. Her long blonde hair is tied up today in a pretty bun, and stuck through with green sparkling pins. She has a rag and a bottle of cleaning detergent in her hand, peering at Sadie with her one good eye. She bursts into a bright smile exactly like her sonâs.
âMorning, Sade.â Her pale hands wipe down every inch of the walls. Always cleaning, is Sara. Obsessively so.
Youâd deduced together, you and Jeremy, that his parents were completely unaware that they were dead. To them, it was just another day. The kitchen utensil sticking through Jeremyâs motherâs eye was nothing to her, and the same for the one in his fatherâs head. The weapons their son had used didnât phase them in the slightest, because to them it never happened. Life went on as normal. Was it a coping method, she wondered? Or hadnât they reached the level of self-awareness in the afterlife of which she and their son had?
Passing by the living room, Sadie clears her throat. âMorning, Ted.â
Ted Frazier is by all means, a couch potato. While Sara cleans, Ted hogs the television. âMorninâ. Think Jeremyâs outsideâŚâ
Through the homely hallway, decked in frames of she and Jeremy in Montana, the last one at their graduation, and snapshots of Ted and Saraâs life together, including small images of baby Jeremy, and other family members Sadie only met the once. It smells strongly of lavender and lemon cleaning products, like a little trail of Sara.
Through the dining room, past Sara stress-polishing the table, Sadie strolls to the open back door, and out into the world.
Thereâs the plain garden fence, encasing the small bench on one side (where Jeremy canât reach), the red treehouse, and down to the open driveway.
The wind blows firmly today, but not enough to put her off coming outside. It kisses her skin like sheâs still alive, and the grass is cool under her feet, bare beside the material of her tights. Jeremyâs coat blows, forcing her to wrap it tighter with her arms crossed around the front. Sadie raises her gaze to the sound of strumming, the high notes blending softly together.
âHey, Sade,â his voice comes down, gentle, like heâs approaching a frightened animal. âItâs a nice morning.â
Across the damp ground she approaches him, staring from the bottom of the ladder at first. She wishes to scare him, get her own back. Not that she hasnât done so in the past twenty years, but itâs long overdue since the last time. Two weeks, exactly, since sheâd tried to throw him down the stairs. Jeremy had the upper hand, and pushed her over the banister instead.
âIf you came here to stare at me and say nothing Iâd say just go back inside,â he drawls. âYouâre being boring.â
âYouâre an asshole.â She spits, full of spite.
âYou said that last week. And then you couldnât get enoughââ
Quickly, she raises her hands and claps them around his thin ankle, feeling the bones grind beneath her fingers. And she yanks, hard on his weight. He shifts only once, enough to be startled, the guitar falling hard to the wood beneath, and then she pulls again, unforgiving this time. Jeremy yells in surprise and pain, body landing with a thump on the thick tree roots at the base. Groaning on his back, a hand stronger than it looks takes a fistful of her hair and twists, as her own balls up and pounds into the junction at his neckâright where he broke it.
âGet off!â Heâs angry, now. And good, she thinks, he deserves to feel what she is feeling, and slaps her palm across his face. Itâs only eleven in the morning, but theyâre about to have many, many fights today. âYou little psycho, go back inside!â
Sadie laughs, and then cries out. Jeremy slides his fingers through her hair to her temple, digging firmly into the place of injury.
âOw! Ow, fuck!â She lets go of his collar. Jeremy wrenches himself from her grip.
Theyâve had this particular back-forth situation happen a million times. She knows how to hurt himâdigging into his broken neckâand he does herâby pushing on the spot of impact.
âYou told me to come out!â She manages to yell, pushing a hand free between them both to take a dig at his bruised neck. âYouâtoldâme!â
âI thought you were feeling angry, not murderous! I can deal with angry.â
âShame I had to deal with murderous!â
She bites at his wrist, grazing it, and Jeremy laughs like he canât believe it, taking a handful of her hair to pull her away. Theyâve done this a million times, and he still acts shocked.
It makes her think of his twentieth birthday back in 2001, play-fighting in the front room. Theyâd just watched a rerun of some army movie and tried to replicate their moves. Surprisingly, sheâd had him on his back, watching in glee as he wrestled her over, hovering carefully between her knees and complaining about a girl being stronger than him.
Such a shame things went the way they did back then.
She doesnât stop fighting him because she wants to; they stop because of his mom. She yells from the doorway.
Sara sighs heavily. âJeremy! Not again, guys! Back To The Future is playing in five, donât you want to watch it?â
The two of them are quiet, just breathing hard, adrenaline running. Jeremy moves away slightly, giving her space. He lightens the hold on her hair, brushing the bloodied dip of her skull from the incident so long ago. His thumb brushes over it, a loving touch and a tender warning all the same.
âYeah!â He calls, stumbling back to his feet. âWeâre coming now.â
âWell, donât be late for it! You know what your dadâs like.â Sara laughs nervously, tittering in place. âIâm going to get started on lunch!â
Lying on her back watching the clouds float by, Sadie waits to catch her non-needed breath. After a few seconds, she sits upright, and uses the tree to get to her feet. Jeremy stands a little way off with his hands in the pockets of his jeans, observing her.
âFeel better, psychopath?â
She nods her head, and hums. âA little.â
Jabbing his thumb to the house, he lets that smirk appear. âCan we go watch a movie now? Youâre not gonna smash the television over my head are you?â
Sadie pushes him aside, passing. âDonât push your luck.â
They settle on the couch for the movie, and stay there until itâs nearly time for dinner. Thereâs no benefit of eating in the afterlifeâthe food is nice, but pointless. It has no nutritional value whatsoever, but Sadie does it to appease Sara, who has never known sheâs dead.
That night, in the dark coziness of their bedroom, tucked under covers and blankets galore, Jeremy presses a mirage of kisses along the impact zone on her skull, raining love along the violence. He noses at her neck, and breathes in the flat of her collar.
âIâm tired,â mutters Sadie, laying a warm hand against his bruised neck. She feels the blood pooled under his skin, tiny fragments of bones dancing around under there.
âSo sleep,â he says.
For the first time in weeks, she does.
â
âWe really should put out the Christmas decorations. Iâll ask Ted and Jeremy to go get them down from the attic laterâŚâ
Itâs raining hard this morning of December seventh. The sky cries, presenting itself in dark blue. The stand mixer whirs, and so does Sara, spinning back and forth around the kitchen for the things she needs to make cupcakes. Sadieâs supposed to be helping her, but the Vogue magazine from 1999 that she has read a million times is just so damn interestingâŚ
Rain cracks down on the windows. Lifting her eyes, she watches the droplets slide down the glass, and pool at the dip in the window ledge.
âWhat do you think, Sade?â
She looks to Sara, now. The cooking utensil sticking out of her face used to bother Sadie greatly, but now itâs like looking at a friendâthe abnormalities donât bother her much anymore.
âWhat?â
Sara smiles but rolls her good eye. She waves the bowl of batter. âI said, vanilla or strawberry flavoring?â
âStrawberry,â she decides, looking back to page four. âWe had vanilla last week didnât we?â
âRight we did, Sade. Right we didâŚâ
Itâs boring, being dead. Trying to find ways to pass the time when youâre aware that youâre no longer living is difficult. At first, they tried everything, she and Jeremy. Football games in the yard (once they got past the initial hatred stage); moving household furniture around; and other things. But thereâs only so much time that being intimate and pushing furniture pieces around can fill.
They started to get creative.
By trying to kill each other again.
âBet this isnât what you thought came after death,â she told him once upon a time, trying to gather a bit of broken skull off of the floor.
âNot. One. Bit.â Jeremy seethed, trying to crack his neck back in place.
Itâs been twenty-two years since this Vogue magazine came out, but when she looks out of the window, the style is coming back around. The two-thousands never dies, it seems. Sheâs seen it come back about five times, now.
The chair shrieks across the tiles when she stands up. Sara grimaces and casts a look to the hallway, where Tedâs programme can be heard. It hasnât gone amiss that thereâs been a lack of arguing on Tedâs part this past weekâheâs bound to blow up anytime now. Every little noise Sadie makes is like pulling on the tense wire that is Saraâs nerves.
She leans down to the windowsill, her head down on her arms, watching the world go by. School kids wait for the yellow busses, a couple of teens bike on by, laughter high on the rain. The headlights on the newer cars shine down the street, whizzing past at a speed waaaaay over the limit. Longing pulls at her heart.
A shuffle somewhere behind her draws her eyes up, refocusing on the reflection of the lit kitchen in the glass.
âMorning,â Jeremy sighs, pulling a chair from underneath the table and sitting heavily. Heâs in black pyjama pants and a loose-fitting red sweater, and he takes the bowl of cereal his mom offers him, digging in straight away.
Ugh. Sadie looks away, out of the window again. This time, she swears a kid looks right at her. Probably notâJeremyâs always said living people canât see them one bit. Unless theyâre Lydia Deetz, but sheâs a bit of a folk story in their world. A could-be, whom people want to believe can give them a way out. There are whispers, and shouts, but nobody has proven her to be the real deal yet.
âDid you get a good sleep?â Sara lays a gentle hand in her sonâs curls, shifting them. âYour father and I didnât keep you awake yelling did we? I tried to tell him to quieten down; that heâd wake the two of you. ButâŚwell, you know how he is.â
As a matter of fact, yes, Ted did keep them awake. Something about slipping on the stairs because theyâd been polished too much. Unable to sleep, Sadie had turned on some alternative rock from Jeremyâs player, and watched the world go by all night at his desk chair, contemplating life and the afterlife. Nearly twenty-three years of the same posters on the walls, twenty-three years of Ted and Sara, twenty-three years of Jeremy sleeping with his back to her, tossing and turning, like he canât face the consequences of his actions.
In the middle of the night, governed by moonlight, she had even dug out Jeremyâs copy of the Handbook for the Recently Deceased and had a good old flick through. Hers had been thrown under the bed when she missed her target of Jeremy the week prior, and she couldnât be bothered to go crawl under there and grab it.
Seven-hundred pages of illustrated explanations, incantations in different languages of all kinds. Nothing particularly helpful, besides the whole âdraw a door!â thing it offered, for those who wanted to talk to a case worker.
Theyâd done that in the early days, when the desperate need to escape became too much for even him. See, Jeremyâs death had been an accident. Hers, an unfortunate consequence. Wrong place, wrong time. In another life, she might have stayed home. Jeremy wouldnât have come out to the garden to find her. The cops would have found him in the house and arrested him before taking him to prison, and her life would have continued in a decent deal of shock, but at least it would have continued.
Jeremy had drawn a messily-etched door on the wall, tearing down his precious posters, and knocked three times. It materialised and opened up into winding hallways passing grotesque endings and frightful things. It was a whole cityâdry cleaners and police forces in terrible hues of reds and greens, dirty and depressing; a waiting room, and an immigration centre, for those wanting to reach the Pearly Gates, the Fires of Damnation, Elysium or the Great Beyond, governed by the dead. Their case worker, Juno, in her last year working, sat them down and explained the basics.
They were dead. This was the afterlife. No, Sadie, there hadnât been a mistake. No, Jeremy, he couldnât go back. But the good news was that they werenât stuck forever! Sadie blew her nose noisily at this on a tissue Juno handed over the desk as Jeremy side-eyed her, clenching his fists. This was not what heâd hoped for.
âOne-hundred-seventy years for you!â Juno slapped a stamp down on a business-like card, a bit of slip with Jeremyâs name in blood-red ink looped along the top line. âFor soul redemption, and per the guidelines.â She slapped it down in front of him. âDonât lose that, young man!â
She turned to Sadie next, human-looking with permed blonde hair and kind eyes. âSadie, darling, I know this is hard to comprehend.â She touched Sadieâs hand, before offering a glance to Jeremy, as if willing him to understand. âMurder victims are often the hardest to consoleâthe shock.â She picked up her pen with the other hand and began to write out another card.
âOnly fifty years for you, my dear. Your life review deemed it unfair to have you repent for his sins. But, per the guidelines, you also have a lot of reviewing to do.â
âWhat happens after the time is up?â Snapped Jeremy at her side. His foot tapped anxiously at the ground. âWhat does it mean?â
âYouâll come back here and head on over to immigration! Show them your passportsâtheyâll arrive in a few days, so not to worry about that. Youâll have a choice: reunion at the Pearly Gates with other family members. Damnation if the council decides you have more repentance to continue. Or the Great Beyond, if you would like another shot at life. We give significant wait times between your death and your departures overall to allow those who have passed into our current side the opportunity to really think through their choices.â
Jeremy shifts, leaning forward. When Sadie shifts her gaze away from Juno to her boyfriend, thereâs this look on his face. Anger, shock, mixed with a bit of terror that this is what the afterlife is.
âSo this happens to everyone?â He asks.
Leaning back, Juno shakes her frizzy hair. âNot everybody, no. Some people become ghosts, others donât. Luck of the draw. We arenât completely sure why only certain people end up in our state, but it happens more often than you think. The live people think itâs down to unfinished business. But youâd know all about that, wouldnât you, both? Youâre very new here. And oh, so young! TwentyâŚwhat an age! Not to worryâwe have some pamphlets I can give to you. We run acceptance classes on a Thursday night, all about accepting youâre dead. It helps some dead to make peace with their circumstances. And of course if you ever have any queries or complaints, weâre always here to help!â
Thunder cracked, and the book in Sadieâs hands slid from them, falling to the floor with a heavy thud. It fell open, face-up. She leaned down to it and examined its pages contents. The book only displayed the contents when it deemed the reader ready for them. The pages her book showed would not necessarily be the same ones as in Jeremyâs.
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The bed sheets ruffled, Jeremy rolling over in his sleep. Ted screamed at his wife two floors below, and Saraâs words came through among the sobs.
Creeping across the room on light feet, she sat down at her boyfriendâs side. âHey, JeremyâŚyouâve got to get up.â
He opened his eyes, seriously unimpressed, rubbing them.
Sadie leaned down, smugly smiling. âIâve got an idea.â
The following afternoon, residing in the same chair after a fight with Jeremy and an aching heart, Sadie thought back on her whole twenty-two years in this house. Her parents were somewhere out there in the big wide world, in their sixties. Her siblings would be grown with families of their own, having been to college, or travelled. Maybe she was a sad reminder in a photo frame on the mantelpiece somewhere, or a candle lit in memory on the anniversary of her death, or her birthday. She might be a story shared at Christmas, replayed every few years on the news. She missed them terribly.
She thought long and hard about the lead up to her death, and spiralled. For the rest of the afternoon and well into the night, curled up beside him, she thought over first encounter with Jeremy in the town, and a long drive into what became her new home.
She thought way back when, to 1999.
CHAPTER 2 -> to be published.