How I Feel After Finishing The Next Two Updates For The Crab Cult Instead Of My Actual Written Stories:
How I feel after finishing the next two updates for The Crab Cult instead of my actual written stories:

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hiii i cant waitt, im the anon that wrote you that long ass pargrapgh sorry lol im a lit student, im so excited and its so crazy that you alr had some of the ideas in mind for the story its like we share brain wavess. Anyway im soo excited for this new chapterr im inlove with this trope
you are amazingg
Omg don’t apologise, I love reading long paragraphs, especially from lit students 😭 I never got the chance to take any lit courses bc I’m in a STEM program, so to read the perspective of someone who’s actually experienced in lit is something I value so much (although idk how you guys can read all those run on sentences I have going on 🫣)
Yes haha I was reading ur ideas and they were so similar to some things I had planned lool. You may have to wait for chapter 4, but I’ll try my best to make the wait worth it
Thank you so much 🥺💜
next part of fools gold pleaseeeee i love itt.
Um you can totally ignore this and im really sorry if this is rude but um you should totally include more of oc being a badass and then when someone else comes along goes back to being ditzy and soft, i think people want to see more of that cuz it such an interesting take on a character because she has two different personalities and its totally crazy. Like you can have her try to kill jungkook again with force this time and then someone comes in the room and she hides the knife behind her back (that has blood on it. His and hers) and sweetly asks them about their day. I personally want to see her try to kill jungkook a bunch of times and then like the fifth time she realizes hes just as crazy as she her maybe even more abd kinda feels her heart swoon but pushes it deep deep down. Jungkook would be comepletely unfazed by the murder attempts and just go on with his day except for the entertainment and amusement he would get through out the day bcuz his tiny ditzy wife is trying to kill him and then at maybe an important event she would try to kill him and he'd get angry and show her some casual dominance and tell her to shape up cuz there are dangerous and important people there and she would listen yk cuz of the threats.
Btw ik he has dirt on her and is bkackmailing her to be a good wife but she can carry out the murder attempts in secret but he could 100% know whats going on but finds it super funny and just lets her do her thing.
But honey you do a great job alr and im not telling you how to write your story its just some ideas and im sorry if it offends you but i think you are amazing.
OMGG I don’t wanna spoil anything but there’s one scene that you described that I have planned for chapter 4. Not gonna say which one to keep at least some suspense but omggg you described it almost exactly lmaoo 😭
Ahh don’t worry you haven’t offended me at all! I guess I should mention that I’m very open to (respectful) recomendations and opinions as long as everyone keeps in mind that I’m not obligated to write the story the way they want. But aside from that I’m very interested in hearing what you guys think of the story so far, so don’t be hesitant or anything!
I don’t think I can say much in regards to the way oc will be without spoiling stuff, but I hope you guys will enjoy what I have planned. And tysm for the kind words 🥺
Anyways random little update: this ask motivated me to write 4.5k words in one sitting (yes my brain is currently fried), which means 8k words down and just 2 more scenes to go 🙏