Can I Get Some Feedback On My Writing Lately? Do U Guys Think Its Actually Good Or Do I Sound Stupid

can i get some feedback on my writing lately? do u guys think it’s actually good or do i sound stupid… i feel like i can never tell if my writing is good or not ..

hi I absolutely adore your writing!!! who do think amon piwon is a more love st first sight kinda a guy?

love at first sight

pairings: ot6 p1harmony x reader

warnings: none!

a/n: in my fantasy world they all fall in love with me at first sight but i’m gonna be as realistic as possible based off of their personalities and things the members have said themselves .. i hope u enjoy <33

𓈒ིུ keeho

i think i remember that on kyo and jiung’s radio show they mentioned this topic once and keeho was a firm believer that love at first sight doesn’t exist, that attraction can definitely be sensed straight away but love is only something that you can experience as you get to know the ins and outs of someone. that being said, for keeho, i would say that although no, he doesn’t fall in love with you at first sight, he does feel a gravitational pull towards your energy and approaches you right when he sees you, internally passing it off as just “wanting to meet new people” when in fact, his subconscious is telling him to introduce himself to you. love at first sight is non existent with keeho, but he knows that it feels right to be around you, which later may blossom into something more than just a “pull”.

𓈒ིུ theo

doesn’t have a set opinion on love at first sight, but i do think he’ll experience it with the right person. doesn’t know if it’s your smile, your beauty, or your charisma that has been on his mind since his first encounter with you, but he knows that it was meant to be. i can see taeyang being frustrated with how he feels after just meeting you, because “love at first sight” doesn’t even occur to him as an option to consider, but as he gets to know you in your future encounters, he begins to understand that that is exactly what he felt. i can envision theo as completely shifting from someone pretty indifferent about relationships to someone who constantly daydreams about seeing you again. so yes, in my opinion, i think theo would experience love at first sight!

𓈒ིུ jiung

no, but just like keeho, the attraction is definitely there. when he first laid his eyes on you, he could place you in his mind as both intelligent and beautiful, and that intrigues him. ji is not a risk taker, nor is he someone to believe in cliches, so he would rather opt to get to know you as a friend at first with no other intentions until he eventually does fall in love with you. but i’m gonna say that jiung is the most difficult to imagine “love at first sight” with. he’s a thinker that needs to analyze all parts about you before allowing himself to open his heart to you. i don’t see this as a bad thing though! i think jiung, as a deep thinker, is definitely the type to value personality the most, so when he does fall in love with you, there isn’t any doubts in his mind, and he knows it was meant to be.

𓈒ིུ intak

intak is tricky but i’m going to say no, only because he’s a social butterfly and feels the need to make a connection with anyone he meets. i don’t think that would change as it comes to you, and like jiung, he wouldn’t have any other intentions than becoming your friend (that doesn’t mean he doesn’t get nervous around you due to your beauty!! but he doesn’t quite perceive that as love). however, i do see intak as someone to fall in love quite quickly, so even if it wasn’t “love at first sight”, it happens very fast. he’s a forward man!

𓈒ིུ soul

as a great judge of character, i think shota would! but the idea of that definitely intimidates him, and frustrates him more than anything. he can tell when he’s drawn to someone and when he meets you, he feels something deeper than his usual desire to get close to someone. it isn’t how he felt with someone like keeho, who he automatically sensed comfortability with in a platonic sense. the butterflies in his tummy scare him, and he doesn’t know what to do with them. however, his infatuation with you definitely forces him out of his comfort zone, which leads to him seeking out your presence wherever he bumps into you, and what happens after that is for you to decide :p

𓈒ིུ jongseob

yes yes yes! and i’m not just saying that because he’s my ult lol in my crush headcanons i also mentioned this but i think seob is so beyond his years that love at first sight is definitely something he could experience. i believe that he wouldn’t be aware of this himself, so he probably would try to downplay how he felt when he first laid eyes on you as just mere attraction to a pretty girl, but it begins to click in his head when he can’t get you off his mind for the rest of the night, despite never holding a conversation with you. confides in shota because he thinks soul is the only one who wouldn’t tease him for how he’s feeling. shota eggs him on to get your number eventually, and he comes to realize after texting you that you might feel the same way about him too <3

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rich boy keeho noticing you stranded on the highway because your car chose today of all days to break down, the summer heat making your sweat trickle between your breasts as you wave at other cars in attempt to get help from someone, anyone

rich boy keeho pulls over to help you, pretending that he isn’t picturing all the positions he wants to bend you into later as he fakes concern for your car, calling up his insurance company to tow the vehicle and bring it into his usual shop

rich boy keeho convincing you to let him drive you home in his ridiculously expensive g-wagon, to which you thank him and agree, getting into the passenger seat of his car under the impression that he just wants to be kind and help a stranger

rich boy keeho informing you of the price of fixing your car, to which you panic and explain that you cannot possibly afford the service, to which he proposes that you can pay him in another way

rich boy keeho pulling over to a vacant parking lot so you can bounce on his dick, sucking on your now exposed breasts and slapping your ass every now and then, informing you that you’re such a good girl, you’re taking him so well, and that you’re such a slut for fucking a random guy you just met

rich boy keeho dropping you home, but not without tucking your panties into his pocket and handing you his business card with a wink, one that reads:

“the repairs are on me, call me if you ever need a ride ;)”

and his number written on the back <333

I saw your hard hours were still open so can I request Jongseob missing you while they’re on tour? I think about this a lot and the thought of him being so desperate for some kind of relief literally makes me dizzy I can’t

just wrote something similar to this <3

however adding onto the subject i keep thinking about jongseob having a locked folder on his phone of amateur sextapes the two of you have filmed together, nude pictures he’s taken of you on his fancy camera, and videos you’ve sent him everytime he’s been away. this folder is his secret treasure, especially when he’s away from you for more than a few days and needs some material to properly get off.

mm and thinking about him being so horny one night that he’s pulling his cock out of his pajamas, hyper aware of shota’s snores on the other bed as he connects his airpods to his phone and unlocks his special folder of you. this particular night, he’s been constantly wondering how many times you’ve fucked yourself to the thought of him while he’s been away.. imagining you working your fingers in and out of your cunt, pinching your perky nipples and sighing out his name. the thought of you getting off to the mere thought of him sends blood rushing to his dick, and jongseob spits into his palm as quietly as he can as he starts to stroke the girth with one hand, the other hand tightly clutching his phone as he practically drools at the video he’s chosen to watch tonight. it’s one of the first intimate videos you ever sent to him, your face not visible as the camera is pointed to your bare pelvis rocking back and forth against your fluffy pillows.

this video has to be jongseob’s favorite. from your cute round tits jiggling from your ministrations, to the glistening wetness that’s forming a dark spot on your poor pillow, jongseob can’t help but grind his cock up into his fist as he pants heavily at the lewdness of it all. his vision goes white when he hears your soft moans captured on the dirty video, and within seconds he’s cumming all over his stomach and hand…

a/n: i wanna send jongseob a video of me fucking my pillow :(

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hi omg do you have any moots

nooo unfortunately :((((( not yet

IMPORTANT QUESTION!!!

Is soul a dom, a sub or a switch?

very important!! and personally in my brain he’s more dominant with a fem reader, i think there are moments that he can get really quiet and just want to be taken care of, but it’s not enough to the point where i would call him a switch. he’s not a mean dom either, loves to just embrace his girlfriend and live in the moment so he’s not one to tease.. i just think that he would be more dominant leaning which many people might disagree with but!! who cares!!!

and although i don’t write for male readers or male x male, i do think that if shota was in a relationship with a boy he would be the sub in that scenario :3