Lees-chaotic-brain - Lee's Chaotic Brain

Hi Lee 💞 for the ask game I'm curious about L, O and P? Thank you

hi monika!!! thanks for sending in an ask :)

L: How many times do you usually revise your fic/chapter before posting?

this is embarrassing. zero. no i will not be taking further questions. next.

O: How do you begin a story–with the plot, or the characters?

well, for fanfics normally i start with the character i want to write for, then flesh out the plot points. however for my own personal novel i'm working on it's all plot and no characters T-T

P: Are you what George R. R. Martin would call an “architect” or a “gardener”? (How much do you plan in advance, versus letting the story unfold as you go?)

I think I'm a little bit of both. I need to have a basic idea for the plot beforehand, and normally spend a few days fleshing it out a bit in my mind, but once i sit down and start writing i just let unfold as i write.

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F & T for the ask game!!

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F: Share a snippet from one of your favorite dialogue scenes you’ve written and explain why you’re proud of it.

okay this is low key kinda long, but:

“Look at me.” He complies, his lovely violet eyes dark and hopeless. “You told me to look at you earlier. And I am. Do you know what I see?” A pathetic man who- You continue talking, ignoring him. “I see the man I fell in love with in high school. He’s grown up and changed, but at heart he’s the same person.” You caress his cheek, looking deep into his eyes. “His face has sharpened and become more handsome.” He shuddered against your palm as you brush your thumb along his cheekbone and jawline. “His eyes show that he’s seen and experienced indescribable horrors. He’s lost that innocence. But I love him all the more for it. Because I’ve changed too. I’ve lost my innocent belief that we are untouchable. I’ve become harsher, more pessimistic, and less emotional. But you know what’s in my heart?” You take his hand and place it on your chest. Quietly he watches you, and you can see that your words are starting to penetrate the self-hatred clouding his mind. “In here lives the silly teenage girl who thought that she and all her loved ones were untouchable, invincible. The girl who cared too much about anything and anyone. The girl who spent hours daydreaming about going on romantic dates with her white haired classmate that always had a mischievous spark in his eyes. The girl who kept a meticulous journal of her dream wedding to a boy with purple eyes and beautiful markings around his mouth.”

ugh i'm just really proud of this dialogue and the way it turned out because i feel like the love reader has for inumaki really shines through

T: Any fandom tropes you can’t stand?

don't come for me, but like cheating and yandere. no thank you.

fanfic ask game!

honestly even i dont edit my fics, and i dont think we are obliged to d that 🫂

(i only even go through the fic and fix any typos i can come across and the ignore the fic lol)

same bestie 🤝 i check for misspelled words and that's about it T-T

okay so this is circulating on twitter and i translated it via my phone and google translate

they better not do this to him

dont tell me out of all his life, after the war ended levi only had FOUR YEARS of peace before dying

this better be bs

somehow i managed to delete ur ask while answering lmao but yesss i would loooove to have u!! putting u down rn!!!!

ahhh yes i'm so excited!! no worries, i've deleted so many asks accidentally T-T i need an ask trash like in gmail that i can hunt through