This Is Something I Wrote In One Of My Fics ()

This is something I wrote in one of my fics (🔞)

"Typical French pastry that you can find in every respectable bakery, wherever there is a bakery, that is to say everywhere. What’s the éclair, I’m asking you, if not the ultimate proof that the French are dirty-minded in every aspect of their lives? I mean, the most basic pastry that every baker learns first is nothing less than a long, thick, full and firm cock. And the best way to eat it? With your fingers, shamelessly moaning and shutting your eyes as you take it into your mouth, even on the street, in front of everybody’s salad;"

And that was a real conversation I had with a real friend in real café, eating a very real chocolate éclair 😋

i'm from California, and I'm writing a character from California right now. Should I add in stuff that I do, when I talk, to this character? For example, I've been told that I say "like" a lot ("there was, like, ten of them") and I talk really fast. So should I add that?

Go for it! I’ve lived in various parts of Canada as well as a few other countries, and I love putting in details from here and there. Even if no one else notices, I know it’s there and it makes me happy. Like when I watch TV shows and see my neighbourhood :)

How the plot looks like in my brain:

How the plot ends up looking when I write:

No phone filter could have done it better. Can't beat natural beauty anyway 😍

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I can recognize a fact when I read one. 7 even.

why would i netflix and chill when i can ao3 and sin

The pleasure is mine too! Your talent is amazing! It makes the inspiration mutual 😉😘

Me and @loyalnprecious were talking the other day about KM, and they suggested them dancing, so this is the outcome! Thank you for always inspiring me ♥

Writing Body Language

How to Improve your writing

This is something that happens every day in your life. A shift of your eyebrow in skepticism, or the way your lip may twitch to a half smile cause you’re trying not to laugh. These behaviors are vital for writing in character, because not only do the allow you to visually see what is happening but it is also reaffirming whatever emotion your character is showing.

So why should you write it?

Much of human communication is non-verbal which means you need to also translate this non-verbal reaction in a post. It allows you to greatly enhance the emotions of another character and always another person to ‘visually’ see how they feel in a post. Most of all, this will add depth and volume to your post to make it feel more real. IT will make your character feel like a human instead of just another fictional person you look at from above.

Below you will find a list different type of emotions and what sort of body language can be exhibited to them.

Three ways to accent an action.

When writing about emotions, there are different ways to verbally write them out. Each one is unique in their own way, allowing you to show more about the emotion.

Emphasize the Emotion. But doing this, you are expressing both the emotion and the body language. We’ll use a simple example. It’s short and simple yet you can sense he is happy. John felt so happy that he was humming a tune while walking down the hall.

Complicate the Emotion. Sometimes, even when you are feeling one emotion, deep down rooted underneath the facade of it all, there is actually an underlining emotion they feel. This is something you have to truly express otherwise no one will know. John felt so happy that he was humming a tune while walking down the hall. However, it was obvious by the way his nose crinkled that he was disgusted by the actions beforehand. Instead, John covered it up by appearing pleased today.

Contradict the Emotion. This is a little different than complicate. Contradicting means that you are claiming one thing when in fact its the other. In many ways, this has a variety of uses, from inner depth of the truth to what you see in person, or someone creating a wall. It could be considered a lie, but when is anything that easy? John felt so happy that he was humming a tune while walking down the hall. In truth, once he was in the classroom, his shoulders slumped and a pout crossed his lips when no one was around, showing just how displeased he was with the situation.

Remember that you do not always have to contradict or complicate anything. Sometimes all you need to do is emphasize and that will be just fine. You don’t always have to have an underlining complicated for an emotion to make it more enhanced.

Do be afraid to use the Thesaurus to also improve an emotion. Such things as “happy” is a nice emotional word, but think of how much more powerful it is when you heard some is “overjoyed” or “content.” She how these emotions matched up with a body language can give two different styles of happiness? Mix and match to find what works best for your character at the time.

More In Depth Information

What I’ve stated above is more of a simplistic overview. IF you truly want to improve yourself, go to this

LINK HERE

To see just how much body language can reveal about a person. You will find things such as how a person lies, how the eyes reaction, the positioning of a person in personal space, mouth, and head body language and so much more.

Use these resources to greatly increase the reactions of your character to another and create a more life-like world.