loyalnprecious - Written bits and writing pieces
Written bits and writing pieces

" Fiction gives us a second chance that life denies us" (P. Theroux) She/her - Writer on Ao3 (Jikook own me to the moon and back)

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Fandom: | Bangtan Boys | BTS

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
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Fandom: 방탄소년단 | Bangtan Boys | BTS

Relationships: Jeon Jungkook/Park Jimin

Rating: Explicit

Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings

Additional Tags: Alternate Universe - Soulmates, Korean War, Strangers to Lovers, Drama & Romance, Family Drama, Angst, Smut, Consensual Underage Sex, First Love, First Kiss, First Time, Period-Typical Homophobia, Internalized Homophobia, Blood and Violence, Slow Build, Two Timelines: One For Each Generation, Alternate Universe - College/University, Modern Era, Family Secrets, Miscommunication, Generational Misunderstanding, Reconciliation, Minor Character Death, Major Character Injury, Transgenerational Trauma,

Summary: 1949: when Sun Junghee sees his life uprooted and disrupted, little does he know it would lead to find such a unique and exceptional love, that would irreversibly change him. Harder still is it to imagine that his grandson, Jeon Jungkook, would experience the same kind of personal turmoil, 70 years later.

Two timelines, two generations, one love story: because nothing can prevent soulmates to meet, and meet again — not even stubborn History, cruel wars nor inflexible families. If they have to part in one lifetime, they'll meet again in the next, or the one after, despite the past wounds they carry along with them.

Because soulmates are meant to be, no matter how, where or when.

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5 years ago

Talking of stunning... Aka "show-stealer"

Jimin looks so hot i cant breathe

Jimin has many : he is graceful, elegant, refined, beautiful, hot, passionate, charming, sweet, talented, and yes, friends, he combines masculinity and femininity, having its own unique balance and bewitching charm. This all is Park Jimin. Unique human being.

Jimin Looks So Hot I Cant Breathe
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Jimin Looks So Hot I Cant Breathe
Jimin Looks So Hot I Cant Breathe
Jimin Looks So Hot I Cant Breathe
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5 years ago
👉👈 on Twitter
“can't wait for BV 4 💕💕 #jikook #kookmin https://t.co/IGcBOH3x1i”

I love the sun 🌞 

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I love mountain lakes 🏞️

I love boyfriends 👨‍❤️‍👨

I love boyfriends enjoying the sun by a moutain lake. My entire winter is made! ❤️ 

5 years ago

Always some precious help. Have to save this! Thanks!! 

Writing Dialogue in Stories: Some Tips and Advice

Writing dialogue can be tricky, but I found that I got better as I wrote more conversations. Here are some tips and advice I learned through practice: Disclaimer: Like I’ve said before, there are no absolute rules for writing. What works for me may not work for you. Feel free to experiment.

1. Condense

If your characters are going to say something, then it should be worth saying. Your dialogue will be smoother if you read it over and cut out the filler. Remove the redundant things and condense. Sometimes it’s better to remove a line entirely and replace it with an action or a description.

2. Listen to people, talk to people

One way to learn how to write great dialogue is to listen to people in real life. Sometimes we don’t realize that some phrases and lines that are often used in fiction might not actually be realistic(if you’re going for realism). Listening to people and talking to people help you understand the way conversations work. People can get distracted while they talk, they can let their emotions/state of mind affect their words, and they mix gestures and actions and expressions into their speech.

3. Read it out loud

This helps to fix the flow. Say the words, mouth the words. Judge whether or not a certain phrase would be a mouthful or if it would sound awkward.

4. Know that dialogue reveals character

The little details about people always manifest in their words. Sometimes people slip up or their wording hints at something without them realizing it. Let your characters take over. Know that even if they’re putting on a mask in front of other people, sometimes that mask can fall. While you can reveal character through words, don’t overdo it. Remember that the conversation should blend into the context. Sometimes using words that imply are more effective, and sometimes it’s better to have something dawn on the reader by using hints.

5. Know that dialogue reveals plot

Pick your words carefully. They can help you lead or mislead your reader. Again, don’t overdo it. There are some cases where it would be better to reveal plot in other ways. Dumping information on a reader’s head might make the scene dull or boring to read.

6.Try putting emphasis on actions instead of using fancy dialogue tags

I’m not going to be one of those people who says that all dialogue tags other than said are bad, but overusing different dialogue tags can slow down your reader if they have to consult a dictionary every few lines. 

Personally, I like to replace dialogue tags with actions. It helps ground the conversation and keep the scene in motion. The subtle things like our expressions and our actions are just as important as our words, and it builds layers on the scene when you add that to your writing. It’s likely that your characters aren’t just bodiless voices speaking in a void, so pay attention to the setting and the objects around them.

7. Plan what you can

I like to plan important conversations by writing down lines that should be said. Still, remember that if you’re forcing your character to say something, then it could come off as awkward. There have been points where I’ve had to omit details that I planned because I knew that they wouldn’t fit, and sometimes that happens because you have to accept that you can’t fully control your characters.

8. Keep the setting of your world in mind

Build the world of the story through dialogue by asking yourself questions like: What expressions were popular at this time? Do the people in this world have concepts of deities and/or heaven?(we often use swears having to do with the people we venerate/religion we practice) What words are considered inappropriate? What class of society does the character belong to and what is their educational background? There are many more, but these could be a jumping off point. Know the culture and history of the world you’re writing in. Then integrate that culture and history.

9. Have fun with it

Dialogue is one of my favorite things to write, so enjoy writing it and your readers will enjoy it too.

I hope this helped you guys. Happy writing!

5 years ago

This is so cute! Healthy and cute! ❤️

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5 years ago
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