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Commander Sans X GN!Reader FanFic

Soulmate, True love

Oh my god, guys! I’m so excited to post this! Sans and General Jinn are both my OC characters and I ADORE THEM!! Especially Sans!! He owns my heart 😭 Making this was so amazing, because I got to use my characters. I got to chose their story, because they didn’t previously have one. Wow, I really hope you all enjoy this!! It was just so amazing to write!!

AND LOOK AT THIS AMAZING ART OF SANS AS A KING BY @that-one-weeb-but-its-kny @that-one-weebs-art @that-one-weeb-but-starwars YOU’RE AMAZING!!<3💜 you inspired me to write this with your love of Sans so I hope you enjoy!!!

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Warnings:

None, I don’t want to spoil the story but it is SFW! There will be notes at the end as well!

Ever since the day he met you, Sans was in love. When you had walked into the room to meet the 17th battalion, your battalion, for the first time, he couldn’t take his eyes from you. When he’d heard your voice, he wanted nothing more than to fall asleep listening to your sweet tone every night while you held him. Everything about you had encapsulated him, drawing him in to never be released.

Of course, being the man he was, he was never shy about his crush. He constantly flirted with you from the start, taking any chance he got to try and make your cheeks flush. At first, it had worked, but soon you became immune to his words, much to his annoyance. But he didn’t let this stop him, he still kept shooting his shots, attempting to woo you into a date. Every time you playfully shot him down, and he would only be more determined.

The men under his command all teased him, but he didn’t mind, he even enjoyed it. Especially when Steele was the one poking fun at him. He took it lightheartedly and liked to try and convince them that he would win you over someday.

And your actions and affection towards him only made his crush stronger. You would show genuine love and care, always reminding him that you were there for him. That you loved him and would do anything for him.

His love for you was always growing, constantly. Every time you ran your fingers gently through his curls, holding him as he fell asleep on your chest, it blossomed. When you hugged him after being away for too long (too long usually meaning only a few days) and told him about how you’d missed him, (well, how you’d missed the whole 17th), his heart melted in his chest as you melted in his arms. When you took your clones on trips to your home, to Dohbar, and spent the evening watching the sunset and stars sparkle as you talked about nothing for hours, all he heard was your beautiful voice. He didn’t watch the same view you were. The sky was nothing compared to you.

And it was on another one of these trips that he made a decision. He was going to fully admit his love to you, because he desperately needed you to know just how much he truly did love you.

“Y/n,” Sans said, gaining your attention, “can I talk to you?”

“Of course,” you replied, standing up and following him out of the room. It was a beautiful evening, the sky painted stunningly with pinks, yellows, oranges, and purples, clouds dotting the horizon. The sunset had to be the most beautiful you had ever seen.

When you finally drug your eyes from the scene before you, your eyes met Sans’s gaze. It shocked you slightly. He had never looked like this before. There was so much love and determination in his eyes, and you could feel your heart beginning to break, because you knew what was coming.

“Y/n, I have to be honest with you,” he said, voice steady as he spoke. “I can’t keep this to myself anymore.”

“Sans-“

“Please, y/n. I need to say this.” His eyes begged you to let him speak, and you couldn’t deny him that. Though it broke you, you nodded your head.

“I’ve been in love with you ever since the second I laid eyes on you. When you entered that room, I knew that I was done for. It’s like I haven’t looked at a single person other than you since you smiled at me. And every day, I’ve tried to show you just how much I truly do love you, but I don’t think I’ve ever meant it like I do now. Every time I fell asleep in your arms, I didn’t have those nightmares. I dreamt of peace, life after the war with you. I dreamt of us having our own family. Y/n, I’ve never wanted anything more than this, to be with you.”

Sans took a breath before he gently reached out to lift your face, which you had dropped down.

“I’ve never been more certain than one thing, and that is that you are my soulmate, y/n Jinn, my true love, whatever you want to call it.”

You drew in a shaky breath, lungs crushing inside you as you heard his words. You shook your head softly and dropped it down again. After a few seconds, you let out a small laugh.

“Do you want to know the funny thing about soulmates and true loves?” You asked, voice quiet and unsteady. You lifted your head again, your gaze meeting his as he saw your tears rolling down your cheeks. “Soulmates and true loves can be the same person, or two completely different people. Soulmates are the people who are your match, the very person you were meant to know in this galaxy. But true loves are the ones you’re supposed to fall in love with. Sans-“ your voice broke, and you took a breath to steady yourself as a sob threatened to take over. “Sans, you are my soulmate, and I know that. I’ve never been more sure of anything than that.”

You saw his reaction to your words. His eyes lit up, and a smile started to take over. It hurt you to watch, because your next words were going to crush him.

“You’re my soulmate, Sans. But you’re not my true love.”

You only looked at him for a second before you dropped your head and rushed past him. You could feel how intense his heartbreak was, and you covered your mouth to silence your gasp at how strongly you felt it. You nearly fell over from the pain he was feeling. It was so much that it was almost a physical pain, ripping and tearing at your heart. You let out your own sobs when you were alone. You never wanted to break his heart, never wanted to hurt him in any way. But you had to tell him. He deserved to know.

~~~

It all happened so fast. Just seconds before, you, Sans, Hex, and Steele had been joking, leading your men as you wandered through the meadow. Another successful mission about to be wrapped up once you were back on the venator.

Sans had his arm around you like normal, the pain of his heartbreak not enough to stop him from being flirty and affectionate with you, though you could feel how it sometimes hurt him to be this way.

Steele had just finished telling another crude joke, earning a scowl from Hex and causing Sans to lean into you as he laughed, clutching at his armored body, before you were interrupted by his comm.

“Hold on, mesh’la,” he said, catching his breath, “I’m getting a transmission.” His arm slipped from your side as he moved to answer it.

“Commander Sans,” the figure said, “execute Order Sixty-Six.”

Something in Sans instantly changed. It was like his mind clouded over. He couldn’t control himself, and when he turned to look at his brothers, they nodded. His eyes moved to you as you stood looking at them curiously.

“What was it, boys?” You asked. “Was the council making sure we weren’t up to any funny business?”

“General Jinn,” Steele’s voice came out robotic and unemotional. “The Jedi have committed treason against the Republic. They have attempted to assassinate Chancellor Palpatine. You are under arrest, and will be executed immediately for your actions against the Republic.”

Your blood went cold as he stared at you. You couldn’t see his eyes under his helmet, but you could feel how they weren’t his. They weren’t soft and loving, they were cold and threatening.

“Steele, don’t joke like that,” you said, though you barely managed to reach more than a whisper. The three clones, your Commander, Captain, and Major, simultaneously raised their blasters to you.

“Please,” you breathed out, tears coming to your eyes.

“Blast ‘em,” Sans said.

You didn’t even try to run from it, you knew you didn’t have a chance. You also refused to raise your lightsaber to them. You wouldn’t kill your men, not the 17th, and especially not your three closest friends. Your best friends, the men you would sacrifice yourself for. You’d do anything for them, and taking their lives was not an option.

You’d been shot before. You’d been shot by droid blasters many times, training blasters, and even a stray blaster shot from running in front of a clone. But these shots hurt differently. They seared with the love you held for them. They burned through your heart and soul as they met your body. All you could do was watch as the men you would lay down your life for took it from you themselves.

When your body hit the ground, Sans slowly lifted his helmet off. Silent tears slowly rolled down his face as he knelt next to your body. You had always been the most beautiful person in the galaxy to him, and now he’d never see that beauty again. He’d never see that sparkle in your eyes, or hear your lovely voice. Your fingers would never toy with his curls again as he fell asleep in your arms.

The shot from his blaster was right on your heart. The heart he had fought so hard to win. The heart that he had made stop.

“I love you, mesh’la,” he whispered as he closed your eyes, leaning down to press his forehead to yours in a keldabe kiss.

“Commander, we should go. We’re needed back on Kamino,” Hex said, speaking in the same robotic tone that Steele had used. They both stood on either side of Sans, but they hadn’t removed their helmets. They hadn’t shed tears, and hadn’t felt the way Sans did- at least not that they could express.

Sans slowly stood, replacing his helmet and turning to the rest of the 17th.

“Let’s go home, boys,” he said, leading them back to the transports to be taken to the venator, and then back home to Kamino.

So, y’all still happy that I wrote a Sans fic? I NEVER SAID IT WOULD BE HAPPY😂 no but I really just had to go the angst route with him, it only felt right

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