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What I would feed HL characters and why
Because cooking food is the best love language

Sebastian Sallow - Beef bourguignon (French beef stew) with scalloped potatoes
(because that boy probably eats like a hobbit and Iâm all for it.) (And an Onion soup for starters and a warm caramel apple pie with vanilla ice for dessert. Heâs my favourite he gets the full course.)
Ominis Gaunt - Fraisier (French strawberry cake)
(because donât tell me that boy doesnât love sweets and especially fancy desserts. Heâd try to hide his love for cute desserts tho.)
Garreth Weasley - Fancy Grilled cheese with cheddar and onion jam
(he is the kind of guy to always enthusiastically compliment the food but never remember what it was. Just that it was good.)
Leander Prewett - Bento cake with words of affirmation
(because he needs some reassurance. Like « youâre doing great », or « good boy » to fit in the small space ?)
Amit Thakkar - Dakgalbi (Spicy stir-fried chicken)
(Iâm sure that poor boy suffers from being forced to eat British food everyday but I donât want to insult his palate with my poor knowledge of Indian cooking. So Korean spicy chicken it will be, I bet heâd be eager to discover a new cuisine.)
Poppy Sweetings - Onion tart and a muffin
(all vegan because that girl would be vegan, and she needs food easy to eat while out while she cares for beasts.)
Natsai Onai - Cinnamon rolls with a hot chocolate topped with whipped cream
(because Iâm sure her mother doesnât let her eat too much sugar but she loves it.)
Imelda Reyes - Cacio e Pepe pasta
(because she needs her carbs as a quidditch player and she must like simple things. And sheâd tell me I did it wrong, like Italians when you cook Italian food. Same attitude.)
Anne Sallow - Juk (Korean rice porridge) and brownies
(rice porridges in many Asian cultures are popular when sick, to give strength. And a yummy comforting dessert for that strong girl.)
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A Bouquet of New Beginnings: Chapter 26 "Peony II"
Summary: After the Scriptorium/2nd trial
Floriography: Life & Death
Full Chapter: [AO3]//6.9k words
Excerpt below:
The last of the leaves barely clung to the tree branches just outside Professor Figâs office windows.
âArtemis, are you sure that you are alright?â
Artemis nodded. Cotton was sandpaper and the chill resembled a ravenous bite. But these were exaggerations on what was normal; two weeks in the Hospital Wing was enough. Â
âYes, sir. Thank you, for your patience.â
âDonât thank me, Artemis,â said Professor Fig as his eyebrows furrowed. âFrankly Iâd prefer we delay this until the new year, but Iâm afraid the Keepers were right. That castle is swarming with Rookwood and Ranrokâs lot, and waiting longer could mean more trouble. Not the friendliest of alliances, but still. Come. Letâs head to the nearest spot to apparate.â
The moment the two of them reached beyond the anti-apparition perimeter, they disillusioned themselves â and she casted a pre-emptive Sensory Balancing Charm â before Professor Fig apparated them both to what appeared to be right inside the castle walls just behind a set of tents.
It appeared to be the edges of a courtyard, and in prime seating a heated conversation between Rookwood and Ranrok. The top hat wearing man paced back and forth, gesticulating as Ranrok remained stern. His armour looked⊠even more entrenched in the red globular magic.
âIf Iâd known your plan was to dig up half the country- â
âI wouldnât have to dig if you could simply manage to bring me that snow-haired child you disgustingly call a rabbit,â growled Ranrok.
Rookwood spat. âWe wouldnât need her if you hadnât sent a dragon retrieve the container, I spent months and countless Ministry favours tracking.â
âYou let them board the carriage.â Ranrok jabbed his finger.
âHave you not acquired enough power here?â Rookwood gestured around himself. âI allowed you to tunnel under my family home â â
âALLOWED ME?â Ranrok bellowed. âYou are here only because you are descended from a Keeper and may at some point inadvertently become valuable. We have an agreement. I will share with you the power that I discovered if you locate the stores of magic that are yet to be found.â
Ranrokâs shoulder pads and gauntlets glowered like heated iron or lava. Yet from his chest Artemis could see the faint waves of something red and black. Her skin prickled as the hairs on her arm stood.
âSo, unless you want another demonstration of my power â a power that you one day hope to wield â bring her to me.â
With the final word â and glare â exchanged, Rookwood apparated away as Ranrok marched into the castle itself.
A few minutes passed before they broke their silence.
 âSo thatâs why theyâre digging under Isidoraâs house,â whispered Artemis.
âIt seems that way. Itâs also clear they both know about the Keepers. Highly disconcerting,â whispered Professor Fig. âFollow me; with all of the damage this castleâs weathered, thereâs bound to be an entrance through the battlements.â
The familiar scent of chai guided Artemis near her mentor through the battlements of the castle, and sure enough a bricked wall had weathered away into the upper levels of a severely beaten down central hall. Professor Fig held her hand as they apparated down to the lower level.
âProfessor, those buttons.â
âHm? You mean those bronze things? Wait, that symbolâŠâ
âYes, I recognise it from the library. Let me just ââ Artemis started as she sent off some basic casts toward the bronze buttons. The large door beyond the staircase glowed the typical ancient magic blue before it unlocked and opened forward.
âIncredible,â breathed Professor Fig. âThis is different from the first trial entrance. Though Iâm surprised it appears nobody used the door.â
âProfessor Rackham mentioned my regular magic already imbues ancient magic,â explained Artemis as she followed Professor Figâs footfall into what seemed to be a cellar. âPerhaps the symbol only reacts to my casts? Or, touch.â
âPerhaps. Though that leaves the question of how â oh.â Professor Fig paused as they entered the main part of the cellar. âI suppose that gaping hole explains how they got in. Drills.â
Dim sunlight poured into the dark cellar from a gargantuan hole in the ceiling. Bricks were strewn about haphazardly, clear that anything that had existed inside this portion of the cellar had been plundered.
âProfessor?â
âYes?â
âItâs⊠somethingâs glowing red down to our left,â whispered Artemis. âThe same glow as Ranrokâs armour.â
âAnd thatâs where the goblin tracks lead. Stay close.â
Only the sounds of their feet reverberated against the stone walls as they walked further down. In front of them opened a large, spherical cavern that seemed to have exploded. The earth was cracked as they reached closer to the source of red, and the hairs on the back of Artemisâ neck stood as her skin burned.
âThis must be the store of magic that they were arguing about; it looks empty,â remarked Professor Fig.
Before them was a gargantuan silver object split open. Red veins pumped in the earth around it â ancient magic.
âProfessor Rookwood mentioned that created ancient magic can be manipulated,â said Artemis as she ignored the pain. âWhy would they store ancient magic like this?â
âIâm not sure, perhaps they believed a Keeperâs home was the safest location,â mused Professor Fig. âYou said it is glowing red. Is the ancient magic still there?â
Artemis narrowed her eyes at the broken object in front of them as she ignored the way her skin cried for something to cool down.
âNot exactly. The magic itself seems to have been completely removed. It â itâs hard to explain. Um⊠itâs more like the fire kept in the hearth during the winter night.â
âHm. Perhaps they need this so that the magic in their armour can continue to be used? Iâll dig through Miriamâs notes some more when we get back. For right now, letâs move. Iâd rather not have another surprise run-in with Ranrok or Rookwood.â
âAgreed.â
âNow, where is that portrait⊠ah, perhaps that way,â said Professor Fig.
The pair followed through the hall and down the stairs; goblins and human tracks were both present. Her skin cooled the further they got from that object.
âHello?â
Professor Rookwoodâs voice rang from the empty frame.
âProfessor Rookwood?â Artemis asked.
Professor Fig and Artemis both dropped their disillusionment as the stout man appeared in the frame.
âOh thank Merlin. Artemis, we heard from Professor Fig. Are you alright?â
âIâm better, sir.â
She wasnât alright, but sheâd live.
âSir, the ancient magic you had stored in in that odd silver container â it been taken by Ranrok and his Loyalists.â
âNo! Things are more dire than I could have imagined. I still donât understand how this Ranrok couldâve known-Â it cannot be.â
âProfessor,â cut in Professor Fig. âIf Artemis is to complete the trial now and not after the New Year like Iâd requested, I suggest we hurry so she can come back earlier and rest.â
Artemis blinked twice but smiled at the kindness Professor Fig offered. Professor Rookwood cleared his throat.
âRight. My apologies. This trial will ensure that you understand the power that you wield. Power without knowledge is dangerous indeed. In the wrong hands ââ
Artemis bit her inner cheek to hold back from interjecting that it was already in the wrong hands.
ââ We will simply have to outwit Ranrok â and my unfortunate namesake.â
Professor Rookwood waved his hand in the portrait; licks of ancient magic fluttered along her ankles before she revealed the hidden door. The ancient magic felt cooler as it erupted â a reprieve.
âI suppose this is where I must depart,â sighed Professor Fig. âArtemis. I know you are more than capable; Iâll be waiting in the Map Chamber for you. But please, please be careful. Take as much time as you need.â
 Artemis gave a final nod to her mentor before she stepped through the doors.
It was gaudier than the first trial, with notes of bright gold cracked through the walls and blue-green hues reflected on every surface. The floors of the high ceiling cavern were akin to stained glass; the interior seemed of a pristine castle meant for some sort of royalty.
<<Was this really necessaryâŠ>> mumbled Artemis as she continued forward.
Her legside bag had been replenished with healing potions, and she still had a few Flaming Frenzies. Spending two weeks in the Hospital bed had not been the plan, and it showed with her severe depletion of offence potions.
She did not run up the stairs or hurry on the path as she had last time. No, if this trial was anything like the first one, she needed to save her energy for the moving statues⊠and probably a gargantuan one at the end on the platform.
Admittedly, she appreciated the new puzzles with the hidden pillars; it meant that she could hide things using ancient magic itself. Or even hide entire spaces â was that the logic that Isidora used when she built the Undercroft?
She hadnât bothered to pull out her throwing knife as she continued, fully expecting statues to come attack. Instead, she swallowed an improved Thunderbrew and pulled out a few of the Chinese Chomping Cabbage seeds, ready to toss and grow. She was right.
âHerbivicus.â
Nurse Blainey had warned her that too many spells so soon after recovery â despite her physical injuries being healed â could lead to backlash. The Python Curse had coiled around her magical channels and constricted them, and there were some residual effects. With the way her skin reacted at just the proximity of the red ancient magic, she didnât want to risk being inoperable.
Surprisingly, the cabbages took care of the statues as the teeth seemingly sunk into stone. As if their fangs oozed of acid. They even took care of the invisible statues as some rolled beyond the awkward archway in the middle of the room.
Many short breaks, statues and puzzles later, she was faced with the unpleasant familiarity of the ground shaking, and a platform standing in the centre of the caverns. The only difference was that now it contained an archwayâ presumably for hidden spaces and the accompanying hidden statues.
<<Great. This is, great.>>
She pulled out her first Flaming Frenzy and pocketed it whilst knocking back another Thunderbrew and her Edurus. Her skin became black diamond itself, and the ever-pervasive pain numbed. Her wand was gripped tightly as the little plant seeds came out once more. Sheâd conserve her magic until the big one when she couldnât avoid it. She could do this. She was going to make it.
The Chinese Chomping Cabbages were unleased to reign chaos as she dodged the axes and swords swung by the statues, many of whom exploded from the storm that encircled her. A Sticky Solution was thrown to entrap a few as she flicked her arm, sending the gaudy Faberge egg objects to smash them into smithereens. The roots of harvested Devilâs Snare were unleashed as they strangled the stone off the ledges.
As the final statue crumbled, the platform shook violently. The centre of the platform bubbled as something in a gaudy gold and blue-green arose.
<<Why couldnât I be wrong?>> She muttered to herself as she threw the Flaming Frenzy right onto the fifteen-foot Pensieve Guardian.
Its ancient-magic cape lit ablaze momentarily as it was swallowed by the flaming tornado. She might not be at her best state spell-casting wise, but sheâd done this before. She would not break bones this time.
âReducto. Glacius. Diffindo. Confringo.â
One after another she casted her spells, each time feeling like her stomach twisted. An uncomfortable itch existed just under her skin as bile rose to her throat. Her veins sung as she reigned a tempest down upon the statue as it dropped to its knee.
It was only when the statue brought out the military flail when she swore.
âMother of Christ,â she sputtered as she just barely dodged its reverberating smash upon the ground. âEvanesco.â
The flail vanished momentarily, and as the statue remained confused, she pulled out her second to last Flaming Frenzy and flung it. The tornado inferno spun its dance of glory as magical shards shot out at her; she deflected each with a Protego toward the guardian that stood within the centre of the blaze.
As the statue melted into the ground with the dying flames, her lungs heaved, and her body folded as her stomach emptied its contents. Her skin was on fire and her body shook violently despite no chill in the air. Backlash.
Breathe in. Two. Three. Four.
Out. Two. Three. Four.
She managed a wiggenweld down her throat, the cool minty taste a soothing balm despite the way her hand shook. It was a full hour that she remained folded on her knees, unable to leave the ground as her body wracked of magical backlash. Slowly, she stood and made her way across the newly floating bridge, her footing steady out of willpower alone.
The giant statue of Rookwood loomed over, his hands on the floor in stoned, complicated swirls above the pensieve. A single, silvery tear fell from his eye and formulated the artefact once more.
<<Mine now,>> she whispered as she touched her wand.
The artefact became the size of a marble before being slipped into her legside bag, and she placed her face into the basin.
The memory was a direct continuation of Professor Rackhamâs memories, only this time she saw from Professor Rookwoodâs eyes. The Keepers had arrived to Isidoraâs home in Feldcroft and were led into her home. It was a simple, lovely home. Even through Professor Rookwoodâs gaze, Artemis appreciated the apothecary cabinet, the hanging dried plants, and the myriads of ingredients in the clear jars.
Artemis recognised a few of the ingredients as specialised components for advanced Healing potions â Isidora mustâve been a Healer before becoming a professor.
âWeâre ready,â called out Isidora as Professor Rookwood sat. âIâve something to show you.â
A man came out of the back room, and even through Professor Rookwoodâs eyes, she gasped sharply. It was the man in the first memory, the one that had supported the little boy. It must be her father, but his shoulders carried a heavy weight.
âFather hasnât spoken since my brother died. On my travels, I confirmed that which Iâve always believed: that we have the power to take away pain,â stated Isidora.
Artemis watched in a mixture of horror and intrigue as Isidora pointed her wand at her fatherâs chest. The man gasped as if heâd not had a single breath in years, and when her wand pointed back into that strange jar in her hand, she could see something in the jar. A red and black something. Globular.
Just like Ranrokâs armour.
âThis is uncharted magic, Isidora,â started Professor Rackham as he stood.
It was clear that the bearded professor was shocked, horrified even. Professor Fitzgerald appeared neutral, but Professor Bakar looked⊠intrigued. Professor Rookwoodâs own thoughts were in that it was something unknown, so many unknown variables.
âYou can only see what has been sealed in the jar â and we do not know what power that may hold. But the traces of that magic are different from what Iâve seen before.â
The memory concluded with the father, who had not spoken since Isidoraâs brotherâs death, uttered two words.
âThank you.â
Artemis gasped as she lifted her head back up. Why wasnât that memory from Professor Rackhamâs view?!
There mustâve been something other than just the red, floating magic that he could see, but Professor Rookwood wouldnât have been able to⊠no matter. She found the crystallised wall, now familiar, that would lead her back to the Map Chamber.
She added the crystallised wall, as well as forming invisible interdimensional spaces, onto the list of things she âknewâ about to be taught by the Keepers as she stepped through.
âArtemis!â Professor Fig exclaimed as his shoulders slumped and a smile spread across his features. âWelcome back. Are you alright?â
âIt was better than last time, sir,â she explained simply. Which was true, she didnât break any bones or get burned. Just, was very ill.
âWell, that is good. You do look a bit pale.â
âIâll be fine, sir. I just â thereâs a lot of questions I have after this time.â
âRight. Well, the professors are here as always. Come, hopefully theyâll give you the simple answers so you can hurry and rest,â said Professor Fig.
As they approached, the portraits looked up from their positions.
âYouâre back!â Professor Rackham exclaimed softly. âGood. When Professor Fig told us of your unfortunate run-in with the Python Curse, we were incredibly concerned.â
âAnd we are glad you made it back to us in one piece,â added Professor Rookwood. âIt is most fortunate that someone so competent is following this path.â
âI â right. Iâll keep the second artefact safe as youâve advised.â
âGood. Are you ready to move on?â
âThat memory â I only saw the red ebb of magic that appeared in the jar,â said Artemis as she looked toward Professor Rackham. âI imagine you saw more than that to horrify you so.â
The bearded portrait sighed. âIndeed. When Isidora pulled out the ââ
ââ pain â âcut in Professor Rookwood.
ââ The pain, yes,â continued Professor Rackham. âI saw a strand of blue, red and black connected between Isidoraâs fatherâs chest and the magic on the tip of her wand.â
âBut her father wasnât in any phys â.â Artemisâ eyes widened. âShe pulled out his grief?â
âWhat?â Professor Fig asked incredulously.
Her thumb rubbed against the glamoured scar on her palm.
âBut that doesnât make sense. Emotions arenât solid, and not ââ
ââ Artemis,â cut off Professor Rookwood. âIt shall be explained in due time.â
A wizened hand touched her arm; she bit her tongue and nodded.
Professor Rackham cleared his throat. âFor now, allow me to introduce former Hogwarts headmistress, Niamh Fitzgerald.â
 To Professor Rookwoodâs left, a woman appeared in academic regalia with her crowned, braided auburn hair. Her spine was completely straight as she looked down with kindly eyes.
âHow do you do? Itâs wonderful to finally meet you, Artemis Loreley.â
Professor Fitzgerald spoke with a heavy Scottish accent; her voice exuded wisdom.
âItâs a pleasure to meet you as well, Professor.â
âExcellent. Considering youâve already completed two trials, I am certain you are more than capable of completing mine,â said Professor Fitzgerald. âHowever, I must first â how shall I say â âprepareâ the location of your next trial.â
Artemis and Professor Fig looked to each other. Didnât they have everything prepared?
Professor Rackham cleared his throat. âWe trust your judgment, Professor Fitzgerald. You should know better than anyone how to manage the inconvenience of, well â â
â- a vainglorious and exasperating headmaster? Indeed I should.â
âHeadmaster Black?â Artemis asked aloud. Where could the trial be to warrant something â âHis office?â
Professor Fitzgeraldâs oil-painted eyes lit up.
âCharles was right â you are bright. Yes, well. I will see to it that the location is prepared.â
âProfessor Fitzgerald will require some time to clear the way forward. I suppose in the meantime, we shall resume our training now that you are fully healed?â
âActually,â Professor Fig started, âthe schoolâs term exams are coming up next week, and Artemis did only just recover from the harrowing ordeal. Iâd like to suggest that the trial be done, no matter how early, to be after the holidays. This applies to the ancient magic training as well.â
The oil-painted professors all hummed.
âWe agree,â said Professor Rackham. âBut if you hear anything about Ranrok or this Victor Rookwoodâs movements, please let us know. Until then, Professor Fig. Artemis.â
Artemis mutely nodded before she followed Professor Fig up to his office. The warm chai seemed slightly too hot between her palms as she sunk into âherâ armchair.
âHave you heard from Lodgok? About the helmet?â Professor Fig asked as he sat across from her.
âNot yet, sir. Though I donât imagine it would be a simple walk into Ranrokâs territory, especially since it seems like he defected,â said Artemis.
She was still stuck on the memory sheâd seen. Isidora had pulled grief from her fatherâs chest. Was that what she meant in the note when she said there were other way to help people? To heal people? To take away their grief?
âArtemis, you mentioned that Isidora pulled out grief out of her father?â
âYes. Thatâs the only thing I could imagine â Professor, how is that even possible?â
Professor Fig hummed into his cup as he fiddled with his scarf.
âMagic is very complex, and thereâs so much that we donât know.â Professor Fig placed his cup down and folded his hands together. âI believe we discussed that emotion is a powerful magic on its own. I imagine⊠if Isidora figured out a way to have certain emotions attach to latent magic itself, then it is possible. However unbelievable it may seem.â
Artemis sipped her chai; the spices warmed her throat.
âBut grief can be attached to so many different things. Memories of happier times. Sadness. Anger. ItâsâŠâ she trailed off.
She didnât know where she wanted to go with this. Professor Fig shook his head.
âI donât know, Artemis. But that doesnât mean that we canât find out. Hopefully, there will be other memories or research to clarify this.â
Artemis nodded. She needed to tackle that triptych after exams.

Structuring Your Fight Scene
adapted from <Writer's Craft> by Rayne Hall
Suspense
Show your characters gearing up, readying themselves.
The pace is slow, the suspense is high (use suspense techniques)
Provide information about terrain, numbers, equipment, weapons, weather.
May have dialogue as the opponents taunt each other, hurl accusations, or make one final effort to avoid the slaughter.
Don't start too early - we don't need to see the hero getting out of bed, taking a shower and having tea.
2. Start
Fighters get into fight stance: knees slightly bent, one leg forward, abdominal muscles tensing, body turned diagonally, weapons at the ready.
Each side will usually try to be the first to strike, as this will give them advantage.
The movements in this section need to be specific and technically correct.
3. Action
This section may be quick or prolonged. If prolonged, no blow-by-blow descriptions are needed.
Focus on the overall direction of the fight
Make use of the location to make characters jump, leap, duck, hide, fall, etc.
Mention sounds of weapons
4. Surprise
Something unexpected happens: building catches fire, a downpour, relief force arrives, staircase collapses, bullet smashes into the only lightbulb and everything goes dark, hero losses his weapon, etc.
Add excitement, raise the stakes.
5. Climax
Both sides are tired and wounded
The hero is close to giving up, but is revived with passion
Move to the terrain's most dangerous spot: narrow swining rope-bridge, a roof-edge, sinking ship, etc.
Don't rush the climax! Hold the tension
6. Aftermath
The fight is over: bes buddies lying dead, bandaging, reverberating pain, etc.
Use sense of sight and smell
The hero may experience nausea, shaking, tearfulness or get sexually horny
Fight scene length
Historical/adventure/fantasy: 700-1000w
Romance: 400-700w

Sloane is standing on the top landing, one hand on the banister to balance herself as she slowly glides down step by careful step. Sheâs wrapped in pale pink satin and sparkling tulle, the fabric flaring out from her waist and brushing the floor, the sleeves hanging loose around her shoulders. Sheâs something out of his wildest dreams, a fairytale princess come to life. A goddessâhis very own Venus floating down from the heavens. Sebastian blinks hard, grateful sheâs still there when he opens his eyes. Sloane tucks a loose strand of her ash-blonde hair back into place as she scans the crowd, and he swears her eyes sparkle when they land on him. He flashes a lopsided grin, trying to not appear overly eager. âYouâŠâ He forgets how to speak, flicking his eyes up and down her delicate form before meeting her stormy gaze. âYou,â Sloane mimics, her voice just as soft. She steps closer, reaching up to adjust his bowtie. âYou look very handsome.â âI do?â Sebastian knows he is blushing, the heat on his face increasing as she grazes her fingers through his hair, attempting to tame the dark, unruly locks. âWhat I mean isââ he clears his throat, wanting to appear earnest. âYou lookâŠbeautiful,â Sebastian hopes he isnât overstepping the blurry lines laid between them. âBana-phrionnsaâŠ.â The pink on Sloaneâs cheeks nearly matches her dress. âThank you.â
Realizing I never posted this before. But here's an (edited for context) excerpt from my fanfic, Magic, Madness, Heaven, Sin, a Sebastian x F!MC fic that you can read on [Ao3] and [Wattpad]
art by puri.dew






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