So Originally Was Planning To Start From Orientation, But Now I'm Like Hm. Because Like, A Lot Of The

So originally was planning to start from orientation, but now I'm like hm. Because like, a lot of the stuff planned is unnecessary. So maybe I'll start from shippuden era, and have flash backs to show the few things from og naruto era? Idkk, I'll have to restructure everything, but I kinda like it better.

Questions to ask beta readers

General:

Were you confused at any point of the story?

What genre would you say this book is?

When did you put the story down?

Is the ending satisfying?

If you had to cut 3 scenes what would they be?

When did you feel like the story really began?

What was the last book you read before this story?

Characters:

Do you get any of the characters names confused?

Which character is your favorite?

If you had to remove a character who would you and why? (you don't have to remove the character, just make sure their role is meaningful)

Which character do you relate to the most?

Which character do you relate to the least?

Do the characters feel real?

Are character relationships believable?

Are the goals clear and influence the plot?

Are the characters distinct (voice, motivations, etc)

Setting:

Which setting was clearest to you?

Which setting was the most memorable?

Am including enough/too much detail?

Plot and conflict:

Are the internal and external conflicts well defined for the main characters?

Are the internal conflicts and the external conflicts organic and believable?

Are there enough stakes?

Are the plot twists believable but still unexpected?

naruto is good but only if you imagine the ways in which it could have been if like everything had been different

Has gone to the the top of my to read/watch list noe

Nina:

Kaz:

Wylan:

Jesper?:

please can we do inbox trick-or-treating this year. can we make that a thing on tumblr. please please please please please