Man, The Writing Is Actually Just So Bad For Both For An Array Of Reasons That'll Make People Look Back
Man, the writing is actually just so bad for both for an array of reasons that'll make people look back on this series years in the future and ask themselves "why the fuck was this so popular?" Lmao
The writing is actually so much worse in Helluva Boss than Hazbin, but it's so much more noticeable in Hazbin because there's actually bits and pieces of good writing from talented writers. It's frustrating to see bits of good writing just completely crushed by horrible execution. Helluva is just so much a dumpster fire that all the bad writing blend together to make it what you expect.
Vivzie has a lot of pride, it shows, it's not a bad thing, but it ultimately works against her. She hyperfixates on a few characters, giving them so much depth they're an absolute bore while completely ignoring others, fails to flesh out bits of the world that could be so great, and is honestly so bad at writing romance. She tries to make it way too cutesy and it's just. Bad. I should've loved the dynamic of Sir Pentious x Cherri Bomb, its one of my favourite character dynamics, instead I wanted them to just shut up. She has trouble knowing where to cut the line and discard ideas that just can't flow. Which sucks since she had such a great idea, she just needed to trust it in the hands of others more.
I think that's why Hazbin's pilot was so great. She had to trust a lot of the writing to others but then saw Helluva as an opportunity to prove herself as a sufficient writer
For shows being proud of and celebrating its diversity, Hazbin Hotel and Helluva Boss lack a lot of... diversity...
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