Sushiwrote - ⩩𝓢𝐔𝐒𝐇𝐈𝐖𝐑𝐎𝐓𝐄 .. 🧸¥.

and if i start posting unfinished story parts ?

i too would like to be apart of the breezy community. 🙏🏼

Just sent you the invite my baby love ! I wish I had a more effective way to promote it. I wanna add more people. 😫

thank you for all of the feedback on the snippet i posted. i want to do the book. my only problem is… i do not feel like dealing with having to set the book up or do a cast page and things that go into the book but i know that i have to because other wise.. i think a lot of it is going to be lost on the reader. SO, i might have to cave and do one. setting books up is a damn job but the prologue is finished, if i wait to publish i could also have chapter one ready to go too since the chapters are relatively short, me thinks.

Writing Description Notes: Eye Contact/Eye Movements

Updated 26th May 2024 More description notes

Three sets of eyes honed in towards him.

Everyone collectively shifted their gazes towards him.

His eyes widened like they were about to burst.

His eyes widened like saucers.

Humor was twinkling in his eyes at the irony of the situation.

Emotionless eyes contrasted with charged words.

His gaze parted from hers.

She caught his gaze with hers

He glared daggers.

Her eyes were fierce, but still reflected compassion.

Her hilariously wide eyes.

Ensnared by a pair of eyes.

Jane bore down on her friend with her sharp eyes, but surprisingly the glare had no effect.

A flash of frustration creased her brow and sparked in her eye, letting him know that his sound wasn't appreciated.

Their eyes trained on each other and silence swept over them.

His golden eyes dissected her, seeming to examine every quirk of her expression.

He could feel her gaze cutting into him.

Once again, he turned back to her, and was rewarded with just a small smile and her warm eyes.

His sky blue eyes veiled towards the large window claimed by the freezing temperatures.

His eyes burned into her, the fire intent on destroying whatever it could catch but she was ready for it this time.

His eyes scoped out the make-shift battle ground searching for something, anything that could help him out.

Their stares remained interlocked, neither of them making a move to look away.

His golden eyes shone in the dim light, reflecting every insecurity within him.

Amusement danced in those green eyes.

Her gaze flitted between their blanket and him.

Shielding her eyes on instinct, Jane recovered with wary blinks.

Red optics bore into her widened, watering eyes.

He gave John a sidelong stare.

His optics settled on Jane as she raised her fist with cheer.

The stare was of one hurt and buried, as if they feared being vulnerable more than the cold reality they had manufactured and serviced.

His stare was as uncomfortable as a chorus-girl corset and had the same effect on Jane’s breathing, constricted and shallow. There was no life behind those eyes. Every move he made betrayed his intentions and none of them were noble.

His eyes searched hers, looking to find some shred of... emotion in them.

He rolled his eyes, a nonverbal expression of exasperation.

words to use instead of ______

"Very"

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"A Lot" (time)

Mild: often, oftentimes, sometime Moderate: frequently, usually, various, generally Bold: regularly, recurrent, persistent

"A Lot" (size)

Mild: many, much, several Moderate: numerous, bountiful, considerable Bold: multitude, profuse, vast

"Big"

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"Small"

Mild: slight, limited, trivial, minor, light, puny, superficial, undersized, dinky, negligible, faint Moderate: scant, petite, inconsiderable, microscopic, dwarf, unsubstantial, minimum, miniature, tiny Bold: insignificant, minute, meager, infinitesimal, ineffectual, undetectable, inconsequential

"Good"

Mild: acceptable, favorable, agreeable, pleasing, satisfactory, satisfying, super, able, relevant, accomplished, efficient, reliable, ample, useful, profitable, adequate, adept Moderate: great, honorable, admirable, commendable, sound, splendid, superb, valuable, wonderful, worthy, clever, proficient, qualified, apt, skillful, thorough, wholesome Bold: excellent, exceptional, gratifying, marvelous, reputable, stupendous, superior, exemplary, virtuous, expert, solid, advantageous, flawless, extensive, perfect

"Bad"

Mild: cheap, dissatisfactory, faculty, off, mean, wrong, unpleasant, unwell, low, grim, sour, regretful Moderate: careless, defective, inferior, imperfect, deficient, rough, ill-suited, inadequate, unsatisfactory, delinquent, sinful, unruly, wicked, rancid, grave, harsh, terrible, downcast Bold: awful, unacceptable, corrupt, dreadful, putrid, erroneous, detrimental, ruinous, vile, villainous, diseased, adverse, evil