Revising Your Writing Is Just Like "is This Weird. Is This A Weird Sentence. Is This The Weirdest Most

revising your writing is just like "is this weird. is this a weird sentence. is this the weirdest most poorly-worded sentence ever written by anyone" and the sentence in question is "he walked across the room"

Basically, what these shifters who are against age changing are saying, is that when they grow so old and weak and frail, they won't reduce their age, they'll remain old and frail across all the realities they shift to. While I'm staying young cos I don't give a damn about their limiting beliefs.

The plot of one of the many fics i'm writing:

Tanaka Ryuunosuke who is convinced he is straight and in love with Kiyoko.

Sawamura Daichi: sits in front of him on a bus on a team trip to the beach Sawamura Daichi: smiles at him Sawamura Daichi: is shirtless Sawamura Daichi: mucks about in the sea with him Sawamura Daichi: talks with him Sawamura Daichi: breathes (Not very well he's asthmatic)

Tanaka: "...oh" *cue bisexual awakening/panic*

the :) AO3 gives you after telling you you’ve already left kudos on a particular fic is my archenemy because what do you mean :) ? what do you mean I’ve already left kudos here? have you read my favorite author’s work? look me in the eyes and tell me one kudos is enough. I’d give them a thousand kudos and my kidney plus my firstborn. what do you mean I can only give them one kudos??????

good boys