Literally Me Whenever I'm Writing.

Literally me whenever I'm writing.

When I finally write the scene but it's an absolute garbage fire

Aha, so that's what that is (The parenthetical content is just the DLC of the sentence)!

It's 12:00 am so here's a weird question:

So, it's midnight as I'm writing this, so my brain is braining in some weird ways.

Anyways, I was thinking about writing cuz I'm working on a WIP right now and realized most if not all of my WIP's focus more on Kaminari than they do Jirou.

That in itself makes sense. I think it's because I just relate more to Kaminari's character growth/arc (or at least the one he should've been given and is still like kinda there) and, as anyone whose sen the art I've reblogged, relate to depressed Kaminari a bit to much in general.

But here's what I was thinking about: Is that a problem? Because obviously with me having several WIP's communication issues come up in a couple. But because it's written from Kaminari's "POV" (I mean I write third person, but the narrative follows him and his privy to his thoughts exclusively so like... I guess POV is the right term?) i think it ends up putting Jirou in the "at fault" position too much, simply because I never end up writing her "POV" (Or if I do, there's less of hers than Kaminari's). And that isn't sitting with me right right now.

For some examples: I have two fics out on Ao3 right now. In the first one I wrote (SPOILER ALERT IG) in the second chapter there's a slight mixup and it makes it seem like it's Jirou exclusively who's at fault for that, which like, doesn't seem right, especially as the first chapter was just shits and giggles. Then in the second fic I wrote the whole premise is on a miscommunication but it's only written from Kaminari's "POV", so it makes him seem entirely not at fault? Especially with the dialogue at the end of the fic, which I still think the dialogue makes sense for both characters, but like, it still makes out Jirou to be the only problem rather than blame on both sides? idk.

So, should I just try and write more stuff from Jirou's "POV" to fix that problem? Because if that is the solution I'm still afraid of just like doing a shitty job at it because I don't relate to the character as much and then it still seems like she would still go in the "at fault" position for miscommunications and other problems. Or is it that I just need to get better at writing?

Anyways, thoughts anyone?

Gotta say this one.

What song reminds you of Kamijirou?

Reblog if you think it’s okay to platonically say “I Love You” to your friends

Reblog if you think it’s okay to platonically say “I Love You” to your friends