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Anyway, AMAZING opening story! I really love the way you characterised the two, especially Raimon-cat. The whole near-death scene was done really nicely. Only some small little nitpicks from me, mostly regarding epithets and paragraphs, but nothing that detracts or devalues the story in any way, shape, or form.
Super well written, and a joy to read. Cannot wait to see more cats!!!
Domestic Stray (Hoshitele Cat AU)
TITLE: Domestic StrayÂ
Ship: Cat!Haruno x Cat!Matataki
Word count: 3188 words
A/N: Finally putting words down in a document to try to bring the Hoshitele cat AU to life! Just to quickly set expectations, what Iâve written will focus mainly on Haruno and Matataki, as cats! However, do note that these cats are INSPIRED by Haruno and Matataki and thus will not be completely the same. Iâll try to make them as in-character as I can while trying to connect stuff with the source material, but this is a cat alternate universe, so keep that in mind before you engage with this (100% self-indulgent, made for fun) work.Â
Just in case, TW for blood in this first scene lol but weâre mainly a cute slice-of-life/lowkey love story (on the slow side), and I would never have them harm each other, so rest assured. xDÂ
While writing this, I debated whether I should have honorifics (like -chan) or not, and I think I wonât. Since this is an AU, this is one of those things I wonât have because Harunoâs the only one whoâs gonna be using them anyway. xDÂ
If youâre ok with all that⌠Hope you enjoy!Â
I knew I shouldnâtâve trusted them.Â
That was the thought a certain light brick red-colored cat had as she forced herself to put one paw in front of the other, despite her entire body screaming at her to stop. With each painful step, a decent amount of blood would pool on the ground beneath her, forcing her to keep going unless she wanted to leave behind an even more obvious trail to where she was.Â
If I actually die from this, Iâll be so pissed off, she thought bitterly, biting back a hiss as she accidentally stepped on a small, pointed rock. Normally she wouldnât make such an amateur-ish mistake, but it was kind of hard to see with her vision going in and out, and the blood pouring into one eye from the gash on her forehead didnât help.Â
Quickly. She had to find somewhere to hide quickly just in case those other cats (who sheâd given a good beating to, thank you very much) decided to come back for more. With how much blood sheâd lost, she knew she didnât have much time left before she straight-up passed out, but if she could find a place to rest for just a little while, then there was still hope for her yet.Â
House cats didnât like it when anyone intruded on their turf, but house cats were also soft and typically unused to combat; she was pretty sure she could take one. And if she chose the right spot, then she wouldnât have to encounter a dog, a human, or a cat!Â
The scent of blood might be strong, but the smell of everything else in the neighborhood would be even stronger.Â
Taking a deep breath, the light reddish-brown cat forced herself to keep going, letting her nose guide her. She couldnât be too picky, lest she risk collapsing while still out in the open, so she chose quickly.
Small gap under the fence she could squeeze through? Check.Â
No strong scent of humans or cats in this area? Check.Â
Long row of bushes that would effectively hide her and help mask her scent? Check.
By now, her wounds had stopped bleeding as much, so there wouldnât be the equivalent of a giant bloody arrow pointing to where she was. This was perfect.Â
The light brick red-colored cat collapsed on the spot, shutting her eyes tight with a grimace as another wave of pain went through her from the impact.Â
Thatâs it, she thought firmly as she felt her consciousness rapidly slip away. If I survive this, Iâm not trusting anyone ever again.Â
â
Birds were chirping. And although her eyes were closed, she could tell that the light of the sun was shining on her face. Which meansâŚ
Iâm alive? Matataki thought, as her eyes snapped open. It took a second for her vision to adjust, but instead of seeing the green of grass or the dark green of the bushes sheâd taken shelter behind, what she saw was⌠A wall?Â
Huh?Â
Her heart sped up as the almost-too-familiar feeling of dread started to creep in. Without moving her body, she scanned everything she could see in front of her first: a wall, and above it, a windowsill, and on top of thatâŚ. A cat!Â
Matataki felt her hackles rise, but she didnât make any sudden movements just yet. The other cat was currently facing away from her, looking out the window, and it looked like they hadnât noticed her yet. If Matataki was careful, maybe sheâd be able to get away while the other cat was still distracted. After all, if there was a cat here, then maybe there was a cat door?
Very, very slowly, the reddish-brown cat tried standing up, but it was no use. Her legs immediately gave way, but instead of landing on the hard floor, she landed on a soft cat bed, which she just now realized she had been on top of. The sound had been muffled, but the other cat had been so close. There was no way they wouldnât have noticed, Matataki thought.
Sure enough, the other cat, who was a lovely vanilla yellow color, turned around. Her eyes, which were a more saturated yellow, at first looked surprised, before they shifted into something else.Â
âYouâre awake!â she exclaimed, and her voice sounded kind of⌠relieved?Â
âWho are you?â Matataki asked, eyes narrowed. And what do you want from me? she thought, but she decided to ask one question at a time.Â
âDonât you remember me?â the yellow cat asked, and Matataki took a moment to study her in more detail.Â
Horizontal black stripe on the top of her head that followed the shape of her head but ended at her ears. Perpendicular to that stripe was a vertical stripe that went down the back of the catâs back and flowed into a black tail, which Matataki had seen before sheâd turned around. And finally⌠The thing that set a wild cat like herself apart from a house cat: the black strip of fabric tied around the catâs neck, which ended at a neat bow behind the catâs neck. Â
âNope. Not ringing any bells,â Matataki said bluntly, with a deep frown. If this cat was trying to pretend they knew each other in order to get on her good sideâÂ
âIâm Haruno,â the blonde cat said warmly, seemingly unbothered by Matatakiâs cold reply. âI guess it has been a really long time since we last spoke to each other,â she added in a lower tone, as if speaking to herself. To Matataki, she continued: âI say hi to you sometimes when you pass by. Weâve never had a proper conversation or anything before, but, well. Itâs nice to meet you! Iâve always wanted to get along.âÂ
Unfortunately for Haruno, the brick-colored cat had stopped listening to her after âI say hi to you sometimes when you pass by.â Instead, those words had caused Matataki to dive deep into her memory to try to figure out if she remembered anything like that. In general, Matataki didnât speak to house cats, so it was 100% likely she had never spared the golden-colored cat a reply. But when it came to friendly house cats and the cats that lived in this neighborhood⌠Maybe something like that happened?Â
âMatataki?âÂ
Matataki snapped out of her thoughts and almost glared at Haruno. âHow do you know my name?â she asked, not bothering to hide her wariness.Â
Haruno blinked, obviously surprised once again. âYou donât know?â she asked. This time Matataki did glare at her, so she hastily explained: âI thought you would already know this, but youâre kind of famous around here. Like, from all of the things you know and can do. I heard youâre really good at using tools! And apparently thereâs no place that can keep you out if youâve decided you want in.âÂ
Haruno wasnât even bothering to hide the admiration in her tone as she praised her, and Matataki couldnât help but feel awkward from suddenly being showered with compliments. Being famous or whatever isnât a good thing, she thought darkly as she remembered what had happened to her. They only keep you around to use you and then try to get rid of you so they donât have to honor their end of the deal.Â
âWhatever they say about me, I donât care,â Matataki said, her tone harsh. âWhat do youâŚâ She paused as she glanced down at herself, finally noticing and registering the bandages on her body. â...did you do this?âÂ
âNope! Not me! My human did,â came the reply, which sounded happy and proud. âIâm glad I found you as quickly as I did, because it looked really badââ
âWait,â Matataki cut in. âWhat happened? What human?â she asked, her blood having run cold. Was that human still around now?
âMy owner. My caretaker,â Haruno answered. âWhoâs usually out of the house, by the way, so you donât have to worry about meeting them if you donât want to.â The vanilla-colored cat had read the panic and look of displeasure on Matatakiâs face and directly addressed it. âAs for your question about what happened, well⌠You were kinda out for three whole days. I was wondering when youâd wake up, but your breathing was normal, at least, so I knew you would eventually. Anyway, Iâm really glad youâre alright! You really gave me a heart attack out thereâŚâ
Once again, Matataki was drowning the rest of her words out in favor of focusing on what the other cat had just revealed. Three whole days, and sheâd been patched up by a human? It was good she wouldnât have to interact with it, but⌠Ugh⌠If she had to live with a human, then maybe it wouldâve been better if she hadnât been saved.
Pushing that thought out of her head, the light red-brown-colored cat tried to stand up again. She managed to succeed for a couple of seconds, but her legs were shaking too much, so she eventually opted to sit.Â
Okay. She was way too weak to leave, and even if she did leave, she might not last for long, especially if those cats were still out to get her.Â
âOkay, house cat.âÂ
âItâs Haruno.âÂ
âYeah, that.â Whatever, she almost added, but she decided being snarky to someone she was at the mercy of probably wasnât the best idea. âI assume thereâs probably a reason why you brought me in here, so just tell me your terms. You house catsâ er⌠House cats like you are usually more pacifistic, and I can at least pay you back for helping me.â Even though I didnât ask you to. âSo just tell me what you want, and we can settle this peacefully, without any issues.â As long as it doesnât involve any humans.Â
Matataki was met with a blank stare before Harunoâs eyes widened in surprise yet again. Looks like Haruno was as unused to dealing with her as Matataki was with house cats in general, who she tended to ignore altogether.
âTerms?â the blonde cat asked. She immediately shook her head. âNonono, you donât need to pay me back or anything! I didnât try to save you with an ulterior motive or anything.âÂ
During their whole conversation, Haruno had been sitting on the windowsill and Matataki had been either sitting or lying on the cat bed. Now, Haruno chose to jump down from the windowsill so that they were more or less on the same ground. With them sitting in front of each other, it was clear Haruno was more than a little bit bigger than the injured cat, which made Matataki frown.
âI didnât help you because I wanted something from you,â Haruno repeated, flicking her black tail. âWhen I see someone in trouble, I just want to help them. I couldnât just leave you like that,â she said, her eyes softening.Â
The yellow catâs eyes were a bit too earnest, so Matataki found herself immediately looking away from them. It didnât matter what others said. The only thing that mattered was how they actually acted in the end.Â
âAnywayââ the stray cat said, trying to continue to negotiate her exit, but she was interrupted by the sound of her stomach loudly growling. Before she could react, Haruno was already on her paws again, her golden eyes sparkling.Â
âHow inconsiderate of me!â the house cat exclaimed, yet she looked excited for some reason. âI have no idea when your last meal was, but you havenât eaten for at least three days! You must be famished!âÂ
Matataki opened her mouth to deny it, but after a second, she seemed to reconsider and closed it. There was no point trying to avoid looking weak in front of this cat. She had been too weak to stand properly, for goodnessâ sake.Â
Haruno seemed pleased with this silent agreement, if the smile on her face was anything to go by. âIâll be right back!â she announced, darting off. As Matataki watched her black tail disappear out of view behind a wall, she couldnât help but silently agree that Haruno seemed to really like taking care of others.Â
Iâm not trusting anyone ever again. The very last thought that sheâd had before passing out came back to her again, and she internally patted herself on the back for remembering what sheâd decided on. No matter how nice someone acted, they showed their true colors eventuallyâ especially when it was no longer useful to act nice.Â
Everyone is selfish, after all. In the end, the only one you can trust is yourself.Â
It took barely thirty seconds before Haruno was back. In her mouth was a bowl, which she proudly placed in front of Matataki and pushed towards her.Â
âSince youâre a patient here, we provide only the highest quality care,â Haruno said cheerfully in almost a faux-professional voice. âThis is my favorite! Wet food! I know wild cats hunt and all, but I bet youâve never tasted chicken before! Go on! Try it!â
Matataki looked at the contents of the bowl suspiciously. Brown mashed âstuffâ mushed together with pale light chunks mixed in and strange yellow-ish liquid coating everything and oozing out the bottom. She didnât know how cats would be able to get their paws on poison, but she couldnât rule the idea out.Â
âYou eat it,â she demanded. Even if she was hungry, maybe she could still find something else.Â
âBut itâs for you,â Haruno said, looking disappointed that her offer had been rejected. She seemed to look up in thought before finally nodding. âOh, I get it! You probably havenât eaten anything like this before, so you want me to taste-test it for you to show you itâs safe. Sure! Itâs really yummy, so Iâll take a couple of bites. But I really want you to try it too! Is that okay?â
âNo promises.âÂ
Haruno seemed to think this answer was good enough, so as promised, she took a couple of bites of the wet food. Matataki watched as she licked the rest of it off her muzzle and then sat back with a satisfied expression, looking at the slightly smaller cat expectantly.Â
Well. No cat would be crazy enough to consume poison in front of her, so after maintaining Harunoâs stare for a moment, Matataki finally gave in and decided to try it.Â
It⌠was better than anything sheâd ever tasted. Cooked food was much better than raw food, and the stray cat didnât often get the chance to eat it for obvious reasons. Either she was really hungry or she couldnât get enough because the food was gone before she knew itâŚÂ
When she looked up, Haruno was giving her a really kind smile, which really made her fur stand on end. It felt like sheâd lost somehow⌠Matataki was a stray cat! A wild cat at heart! And she would not be won over by house cat luxuries, even if they tasted better than her usual.Â
âYouâ you donât have to watch me while I eat! Iâm not gonna waste it!â the light red brick-colored cat snapped, mostly to hide her growing embarrassment.Â
âHehe, sorry,â Haruno said with a giggle, but she looked more amused rather than apologetic. Matataki didnât know how to react to someone reacting to her like that. As if to throw the injured cat a lifeline, however, Haruno changed the subject. âItâs not good to eat too much, so thatâll be it for now. The automatic cat feeder gives you the exact amount you need at the exact time you should have it. Convenient, right?âÂ
She paused, as if she remembered something. âWater!â she exclaimed, her tail standing straight up. âIâll get you some water! And Iâll make sure not to spill it!âÂ
As if this was going to turn into a thing now, Haruno dashed off. This time, she took a little longer to return, but as promised, she carefully offered the other cat a bowl of water. Matataki hadnât even gotten a word in before the yellow cat had decided to act on her own, and once more, she eyed the bowl before doing anything else. She considered refusing since sheâd already been offered a handout earlier, but one glance at the taller cat reminded her that she should probably stay in her good graces, so she gave the water a cursory lick or two before moving back again.Â
âOkay!â With that word, Haruno curled her tail into a hook shape and circled Matataki as if she was examining a shiny new toy. In reality, she was just making sure the bandaged cat was in good condition and not in need of anything else. The smaller cat narrowed her eyes and regarded her uneasily as she did this, and Haruno took the hint and stopped.Â
âCan I get you anything?â the house cat asked, and Matataki shook her head.Â
The only thing Matataki wanted was to get out of here, but in her current condition, that was a horrible idea, so she was slowly accepting that she would be stuck here for a little while. But she probably couldnât have been stuck with someone even friendlier or more helpful than Haruno, so at least it wasnât worse.Â
âWhat are you expecting from me?â she finally asked, unable to articulate sentences like Is it fine if I stay and I canât leave right now so Iâm stuck here. The latter statement would reveal too much information (and vulnerability) to a cat who had the advantage over her, even if it was only a house cat.Â
âNothing,â Haruno answered easily, with a smile. âI just want you to recover and get better! So you need lots of rest, you shouldnât overwork yourself, and if you ever need anything, you can just ask me!â She curled her tail over her paws, her eyes sparkling beautifully like yellow topaz gemstones. âYouâre welcome to stay as long as you want. Youâre my guest.âÂ
Matataki almost let out a sigh of relief, but it just came out as a slow exhale. In her entire life, sheâd never been treated with as much grace and hospitality as this. It made the skin under her fur crawl because she knew it would all fall apart eventuallyâ it inevitably did, when it came to her relationships (or lack thereof) with other cats.Â
â...thank you,â she finally said. Even though she was incredibly out of her element and expecting the worst, it still felt like an important weight had been taken off her shoulders. She would do her best to avoid the human, but since she wasnât being left outside to fend for herself in her weakened state, it was still much better than nothing. She just hoped Haruno wouldnât force her to get along with her human, even if that human had possibly saved her life.Â
She didnât say anything else though. She just looked at the other cat, and Haruno was wearing the brightest smile sheâd had all day.Â
âYouâre welcome! Letâs get along from now on!âÂ
ENDÂ
A/N: Ok that was much longer than I expected and I kinda started writing at like 10:36 PM and now itâs 2:46 AM. So that took me like⌠about 4 hours to write! But it was really fun to me! :D I really wanted to write something for them and now Iâm glad and happy I finally did it! c:Â
Yes, if youâre wondering, I did look up cat facts whenever I needed them. I also looked up stuff about blood loss. Iâm thinking Matataki stays with Haruno for like a month, at the very least? And any other stories will be about them doing various activities or bonding.Â
I didnât think Iâd make the intro as long as it is (actually, I was planning to make it like maybe a 3-sentence scene or preview and go straight into the waking up scene, but it has important details I might like to reference later so you know what? Yeah, Iâll keep it like that.)Â
Iâm a Warrior cats kid so Iâm totally used to all the cat descriptions and stuff (paws, tail, muzzle, lol) but it might be weird for a non-cat person, I think. xD Anyway, Iâll upload this to AO3 on request but since this is just a niche thing for now, Iâll keep it on this blog only. This wonât be the last time I write about them, I think, âcuz I like this AU a lot, but hopefully I did a good job capturing their characters! I donât want Matataki to be too mean or Haruno to be too hyperactive/helpful or anything, but this is their first meeting and theyâre drastically different, so their differences get exaggerated a bit. If anyone ever feels like giving me feedback, Iâm totally open to it! Anyhow, I love cats. How did you know? xD
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