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(Gone] A Poem By Me I Wish I Could Be Gone. Out Of This World. I Don't Know What Would Happen, But It

(Gone] A poem by me I wish I could be gone. Out of this world. I don't know what would happen, but it would possibly be peaceful, my family would most likely be in grief, but maybe I send them some sort of I'm okay message, I don't know though, I'd maybe smile, I just wish. I could be gone, and in peace, I may be 'too young', but in my heart I'm not too young, I understand too much, and have been through hell, but that's where I live so, that's normal, so yeah. I just wish I could be gone. Gone. Gone. Gone.

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This has a lot of emotion! I like it.

What I think this shows how much you may want to disappear because no one may understand how you are feeling, and others may think you’re always ok.

I like the message showing that even if being gone would put someone at peace, and having a young but not so young mindset interpretation of things can cause others to not know what you’re going through.

Gone.

I think that ‘ gone ‘ is a good way of wanting to disappear and maybe wanting to know how others would feel if you were, or if anything would change.

Like how when this was stated, “ I don’t know what would happen, but it would possibly be peaceful, my family would most likely be in grief, but maybe I send them some sort of I’m ok message. “

This stands out to me because even if things go wrong or you want to disappear from wherever your are, you know that some may be extremely emotional about it and others may not notice, but wanting them to know that “ I’m ok “ so you know that they love you and you still love them is something that’s a good thing!

I’m not sure how deep into yourself and personal problems that this poem goes into, since I don’t deal with my own emotions well either, but I wanna say that what you’re stating is a good message! It’s also good to get your feelings out.

I hope you’re having a good day! :3

Poem by @sketchys-korner !

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