If Your Plot Feels Flat, STUDY It! Your Story Might Be Lacking...
If your plot feels flat, STUDY it! Your story might be lacking...
Stakes - What would happen if the protagonist failed? Would it really be such a bad thing if it happened?
Thematic relevance - Do the events of the story speak to a greater emotional or moral message? Is the conflict resolved in a way that befits the theme?
Urgency - How much time does the protagonist have to complete their goal? Are there multiple factors complicating the situation?
Drive - What motivates the protagonist? Are they an active player in the story, or are they repeatedly getting pushed around by external forces? Could you swap them out for a different character with no impact on the plot? On the flip side, do the other characters have sensible motivations of their own?
Yield - Is there foreshadowing? Do the protagonist's choices have unforeseen consequences down the road? Do they use knowledge or clues from the beginning, to help them in the end? Do they learn things about the other characters that weren't immediately obvious?
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not to enforce gender roles but a computer should NOT fucking have apps okay. if I wanted an app I'd go on my phone my laptop is for Programs. I mean this.
![Please, For The Love Of God, Please Dont Be This Person. No Matter How Long Its Been Since An Update,](https://64.media.tumblr.com/d1f9fb1a7839ed649e3ba4dbba12734a/e815351c1e6918a6-5e/s500x750/b525c563f47e6692903f984b3cb6b94579ca0355.jpg)
Please, for the love of god, please don’t be this person. No matter how long it’s been since an update, no matter how many unfinished stories are sitting on their account, no matter what - do not be this person.
Not only is it insanely rude, but you also do more damage than you think be being such a self-entitled ass about something someone created for free and for fun. “This author” can see what you say.
RIP decency indeed.
HEY!
Back up your computer!
Go get the external drive you bought specifically for this purpose and then left in a drawer somewhere and RUN A FULL BACKUP.
There are lots of posts that make the rounds reminding us to sit up straight, stretch, drink water, refocus our eyes, take our meds, etc. But while this may not be about your health, it’s still super-important.
Back up your whole-ass computer. If you can afford a second backup drive, buy one so that you have one SSD and one HDD, and back up to both of them (you can back up just the current important stuff to the SSD and let the HDD do the heavy-duty lifting).
Do not rely on ‘the cloud’ or the internet to keep jack shit.
AND BACK UP YOUR GMAIL AS WELL HOLY SHIT. The last thing you want is a catastrophic issue where literally every single thing you have in gmail is gone. It’s happened. It happened to a friend of mine and basically her entire life was in there and now it’s all gone. 20 years of it.
Reblog to save a life.
If you're on Windows 11 like I am for my "main" computer (in my case for school purposes and because I can't get Baldur's Gate 3 to play on Linux), then you might've seen this annoying piece of AI shit show up on your taskbar:
![If You're On Windows 11 Like I Am For My "main" Computer (in My Case For School Purposes And Because](https://64.media.tumblr.com/8d69755d713c026ac8f47fbb91ed0eca/9422a591678e8484-c6/s250x400/cb343bbc6cf7e5f9788d8471b0971a75a3ac8644.png)
This is Windows Copilot, and it's fulled by the same shit ChatGPT is fuelled by. There is currently no way to uninstall it, but there is a way to deactivate it completely, which I've linked below. It's very easy, and it took me like, 2 minutes to do.
![How to Completely Remove Copilot from Windows 11](https://64.media.tumblr.com/dbb96fbf7496da20319afd36e2bb17f8/9422a591678e8484-c8/s1280x1920/0886938f8c87b8a6b07883e595bff6f1dd4975d8.png)