For Yesterday's Part Of Radiohusk Week, "Confession/It's My Fault". This Is Kinda Au, As Most Things

For yesterday's part of radiohusk week, "Confession/It's my fault". This is kinda au, as most things that I draw are

Also more sketchy style, but hey, it's faster and more expressive

ARE YOU A BONE OR BLOOD PERSON.

ARE YOU A VOID OR ABYSS PERSON.

ARE YOU A ROT OR DUST PERSON.

Would You Hug Them?

Apparently a lot of people get dialogue punctuation wrong despite having an otherwise solid grasp of grammar, possibly because they’re used to writing essays rather than prose. I don’t wanna be the asshole who complains about writing errors and then doesn’t offer to help, so here are the basics summarized as simply as I could manage on my phone (“dialogue tag” just refers to phrases like “he said,” “she whispered,” “they asked”):

“For most dialogue, use a comma after the sentence and don’t capitalize the next word after the quotation mark,” she said.

“But what if you’re using a question mark rather than a period?” they asked.

“When using a dialogue tag, you never capitalize the word after the quotation mark unless it’s a proper noun!” she snapped.

“When breaking up a single sentence with a dialogue tag,” she said, “use commas.”

“This is a single sentence,” she said. “Now, this is a second stand-alone sentence, so there’s no comma after ‘she said.’”

“There’s no dialogue tag after this sentence, so end it with a period rather than a comma.” She frowned, suddenly concerned that the entire post was as unasked for as it was sanctimonious.

Cloud is probably the only one to actually ask Alastor if he is allowed to kill, though the clause about being permitted to kill is in the contracts Alastor offers. Employee benefits

Making Cloud work at the hotel is the ultimate punishment. Can you imagine working customer service for all eternity?

Truely, he is in Hell.

not-really-one-sided radioapple where lucifer "hasn't had a real friend that wasn't in his family or one of the deadly sins since before his fall" morningstar mistakes his overwhelmingly new platonic feelings for alastor for romantic love, and when he powers through his anxiety enough to confess to alastor, alastor is like [having aroace war flashbacks to vox] FOR THE NONEXISTENT LOVE OF G-D. IS IT ME? AM I THE FUCKING PROBLEM?? and then lucifer's like WAIT wait holy shit im sorry im just so lonely i think im overdosing on friendship IM SORRY I PROMISE IM NOT IN LOVE WITH YOU and they're fine