Desange - #1 Yaoiblogger

subtle ways to include foreshadowing

one character knowing something offhandedly that they shouldn't, isn't addressed until later

the crow rhyme

colours!! esp if like, blue is evil in your world and the mc's best friend is always noted to wear blue...betrayal?

write with the ending in mind

use patterns from tragic past events to warn of the future

keep the characters distracted! run it in the background until the grand reveal

WEATHER.

do some research into Chekhov's gun

mention something that the mc dismisses over and over

KEEP TRACK OF WHAT YOU PUT. don't leave things hanging.

unreliable characters giving information that turn out to be true

flowers and names with meanings

anything with meanings actually

metaphors. if one character describes another as "a real demon" and the other turns out to be the bad guy, you're kind of like...ohhh yeahhh

anyways add anything else in the tags

an erotic poem:

leg so hot

hot hot leg

leg so hot u fry an eg

preserving this here bc op turned off reblogs

vriskat to me has the vibes of a teenage gay boy and a lesbian pretending to be a straight couple to fool their parents and go together to prom but they hate each other so much they start fistfighting in the middle of the ball and have to break up