Every Attempt To Write An Emotionless Character I've Ever Seen Has Failed If Just For The Fact That Humans

every attempt to write an emotionless character i've ever seen has failed if just for the fact that humans are so emotional by nature that imagining the truly "emotionless" is near impossible and they just end up writing a character who is super autistic instead

Sasuke Jinraiden

I'm working on a massive SasukexFemaleOC story that I'm calling "Sasuke Jinraiden" after the name of one of his light novels. I figured Naruto had Shippuden (Shippuden means hurricane chronicles which plays on his Uzumaki name) so it makes sense that Sasuke's story would be called Jinraiden (literally meaning Thunderclap Chronicles which is a play on his lightning affinity.) It starts from Shippuden and goes into the Next generation.

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A Meeting is Called (Sasuke x Female OC)

Like in canon Ay calls for a 5 kage summit meeting and he sends Kumo nin to Konoha requesting info on Sasuke. (Forgot to mention this in the previous post but those two Kumo nin came across the battle just like in canon and recognized Sasuke’s Uchiha insignia on his clothing.) Except this time there’s more tension as Ay believes that Sasuke killed Killer Bee (*Killer Bee is just playing hooky like he did in canon).

This arc plays out mostly the same as canon did: Sasuke infiltrates the kage summit, Zetsu reveals his whereabouts, Sasuke fights the 5 kage, he kills Danzo and is ready to go back to Konoha to kill everyone.

The differences I’m adding are more character related. For one, Chiasa doesn’t join Sasuke. In this fanon, Sasuke stays affiliated with the Akatsuki. He’s learning from Tobi how to tap into the power of the MS, and in particular how to use Susanoo. Around the time of Pain’s defeat and Danzo becoming the stand-in hokage, Tobi finally lets Sasuke in about what’s going on. Sasuke is shocked to hear that Konoha has been destroyed but like in canon he’s adamant to set out and kill Danzo. Tobi tells him that he can teleport Sasuke to Danzo’s whereabouts which is in the Land of Iron, as Danzo is attending a kage summit meeting (This was Tobi’s plan, he wants Sasuke to not only kill Danzo but refine his MS and hopefully take a few kages hostage, as in canon.)

So Sasuke heads out on his own and he tells Tobi to give Chiasa a message, explaining where he’s gone and telling her to wait at the hideout for him to return. When Chiasa wakes and is looking for Sasuke, Tobi tells her where he’s gone and tells her Sasuke’s message to her.

Alone Chiasa divines Sasuke’s current predicament as she’s concerned for him. She’s horrified to see him slaughtering the samurai at the kage summit. This vision makes up her mind to set out to the Land of Iron after Sasuke. But she’s intercepted by Zetsu (whose clone brings Tobi). Tobi tells her in a cruel tone that he thought he made it clear that she was to stay put. But Chiasa has made up her mind that she’s leaving.

Tobi says something like if she makes another step/crosses that line, she'll be an enemy of the Akatsuki. She contemplates the implications of what this means for her but still crosses it. Tobi thinks of killing her right there but decides not to because he thinks that Sasuke is still too fond of her, Sasuke still hasn’t sunken into enough darkness yet.

As Chiasa is speedily traveling to the Land of Iron, she occasionally uses her divination to glimpse at what Sasuke is doing. That’s how she sees things like Sasuke using Susanoo to have the ceiling drop on everyone, him attacking the 5 kage, and him fighting and killing Danzo.

team ‘i’m a prodigy that fucked up my little brother’s life really hard but if you touch him i will eviscerate you’

Separation (Sasuke x Female OC)

Just some snippets of how I'd see Sasuke and Chiasa separating go:

Sasuke is on the bridge where Danzo’s corpse lays. Chiasa has caught up to him there. He’s surprised to see her. He asks her why she’s come here. Chiasa says that she’s seen visions of Sasuke doing horrific things.

She no longer wants to find redemption for herself, all she wants is for Sasuke to not go down this path. She sees now that it’s not leading to anywhere good.

{insert something here that Chiasa says}

“Abandoning his vengeance won’t make things right. Only seeking out retribution will.”

“But at what cost? Sasuke, you’ll never be the same person again if you keep being an avenger. Don’t do this.”

“I won’t let Itachi’s sacrifice go unpunished. I will dole out the retribution upon Konoha that it deserves when I kill every last person in that wretched village.”

Chiasa is horrified. But she keeps reaching out to Sasuke, who in her mind seems to be slipping away before her eyes with each second. “What can I say to you to get you to stop this?”

“Don’t you see Chiasa, this is the redemption I told you about. I’m about to write a terrible wrong and purify the Uchiha’s name. This is how I’ll finally restore their name. No, even more than restore it, I will revive its name when I…{insert something about striking dread into everyone’s hearts when he displays the power of the Uchiha as he destroys Konoha for good}. And with you by my side, this redemption can be shared between us. We’ll finally be free of our pasts and free to create together a future for ourselves.”

“I wanted to believe that my visions were wrong. But they weren’t. This is really who you’ve become. You’ve fallen into darkness Sasuke.

Sasuke looks frustrated by her words. They sound so reminiscent to what his old team members used to say about his goals. This is something he doesn’t want to hear coming from Chiasa. “I don’t want to hear you speak about falling into darkness anymore. I’ve heard this before from others before you already Chiasa and I severed them from my life. Don’t you do the same thing. You’re different from them.”

With tears in her eyes Chiasa pleads to Sasuke “But how can I not? This is scaring me Sasuke. I can’t stay by your side anymore. This is a path I can’t follow with you anymore.”

This infuriates Sasuke. “Why are you choosing the side of people you don't even know!?”

Because they've done nothing wrong! They’re ignorant about a shameful secret but that’s no fault of there’s. They wouldn’t see your destruction as retribution, they’d only see it as terror released upon them. Don’t become the monster you used to swear you’d devote your life to killing!”

Sasuke walks over to her. He stares at her with an intensity.

“No one will get in the way of my vengeance.”

Chiasa stares back at him with an intensity of her own.

“I won't be intimidated Sasuke. I’m going to stand beside your home village and protect them from your wrath. I hope you’ll come to your senses. But if this is where our paths diverge, so be it.” And with that Chiasa walks away from Sasuke.

[setting: unnamed forest]

Chiasa initially was walking but as if to escape her feelings of sadness she breaks out into a run. So lost in her torrent of emotions, she barely notices another girl passing her by, who is running in the opposite direction. This girl is Sakura, running to catch up to Sasuke. Though it won’t be a reunion she expected. Sakura’s reunion-unfortunately for her-goes the way of canon.