OP Gets Thematic Shuake Dreams

OP gets thematic shuake dreams

I get stupid shuake dreams where they steal food from stores near me

Akira scaling a brick wall with his bare hands in order to steal a raw chicken from Walmart with his teeth... Akechi sleeping on the ground next to the liquor store while waiting for him

Took a nap and had a dream about akira not carrying out the 11/20 plan bc he has full trust in akechi to not actually kill him but he miscalculated

this is criminal

how to go from daydream to draft:

begin by daydreaming as you normally do, or just after you've finished doing so. write down every thought you have. one after another. do not reread. do not stop for spelling mistakes. just dump out every thought. this is called stream of consciousness writing. you can do this for every scene you need a first draft for.

struggling to draft the scene? try to daydream about it. start thinking about how it would look, feel, what the characters would say, act it out in your head and then write out the stream of your thoughts as they arrive.

by now you have a few scene dumps. you may be tempted to go back and edit. do not do this expect for obvious spelling mistakes. do not read closely and start thinking "i need to rework this sentence." that is for later. now you're in the zone. draft more scenes. or work out what the next scene needs to be, scaffold it with a few comments. this will be the inspiration for your next deliberate thought stream that you will write out. repeat this process until you have the whole draft.

now that you have a draft or part of a draft you get to do this very fun thing called revise until you're happy. sweep through your draft with specific goals each time. one sweep to fix spelling/grammar. another for character voice. another for plot. repeat until you're happy with it.

leave it alone. just leave it for a bit. at least a few hours or days or even weeks. forget it exists. this will allow you come back with fresh eyes. then you can do your revisions with an eagle eye. now you may realize you need to add/remove scenes. you know how to get the first version down. close your eyes and daydream at your desk if that's what takes!

remember that fiction writing is persuasive writing. you are trying to persuade the reader to care about what happens next, the character's, the world, the feelings. as you're revising, consider whether you are persuaded. is the feeling/thoughts you wanted to provoke being felt by you when you read it? when working with beta readers, be sure to communicate what you're trying to convey so they can tell you if you've been successful or not.

this got a bit beyond getting the first draft done. hope you found it helpful.

bonus tip: check the spellings of names and places and other nouns that are not typically used, like the name of a magic tool!

inspired by boop day, reblog this post if its ok for people to send you random asks and interact on your posts with no judgement. i want to talk to people.

Hate it when people grumble and are in constant pain. Like wdym

Considering vagueposting about my digestive system later

this is going viral on the tweeter currently so. for you also. miku is not ai!!

I started writing the Ame/Monika fic. No one can stop me now. It's what you'd expect based on the source material for both games, and is *technically* canon compliant with both! Warnings for the base games apply- hopefully I can update this fic with some regularity. I actually love psychological horror so much so let's see where I can go with this>:D