
Dev blog for My Inner Sins, a supernatural romance with mystery, told as an interactive fiction game.
301 posts
How Would The ROs React If They're Just Going About Their Day And Just Find The MC Sleeping In The Weirdest
How would the ROs react if they're just going about their day and just find the MC sleeping in the weirdest spot/location? (For example when I was younger my mom used to find me asleep in my grandmama's flowerbed, on the lower shelf in the garage, in cabinets, etc.)
When I was younger, I would sleep under my grandmother's table. LOL. I am guessing this is after the ROs know this is just a little quirk about the MC and that the MC is falling asleep in safe places.
💛 Marcel
Marcel found it endearing. Every time he would find the MC in the most random places around the house, he would smile, putting a blanket over them.
🧡 Margaret
Margaret would find it cute and a little odd, but when she spotted MC on the floor, she would tip-toe around them, not wanting to disturb MC's sleeping figure.
❤️ Owen
Owen would find it a little odd but just shrug, picking the MC up and bringing them to a comfortable bed.
💙 Rosemary
Rosemary would always wake the MC and coax them into bed. Where they are sleeping could not be comfortable.
🩵 Tai
Tai would sigh; that was bad for the MC's back. They should be in bed, not on the floor or where else they find themselves. Tai would wake MC up and order them to get into bed.
💚 Zane
LOL. Depending on his mood, either Zane will leave MC wherever they are, unbothered (then go lay out on the bed), or they will curl up with MC on the floor.
-
kaleema-kane liked this · 5 months ago
-
b-onja liked this · 6 months ago
-
darkkcreative liked this · 7 months ago
-
mattishell333 liked this · 7 months ago
-
ninoisy39 liked this · 7 months ago
-
rot-tly liked this · 7 months ago
-
needsleep296 liked this · 7 months ago
-
katerinayekaterina liked this · 7 months ago
-
ellamay-rain liked this · 7 months ago
-
mramku liked this · 7 months ago
-
ashcentaur liked this · 7 months ago
-
auramayu liked this · 7 months ago
-
vereya liked this · 7 months ago
-
troglodytepixieeater liked this · 7 months ago
-
palefireballoon liked this · 7 months ago
-
0spoiledsoup0 liked this · 7 months ago
-
sleepy-sheeps-posts liked this · 7 months ago
-
courtofcrescent liked this · 7 months ago
-
ryusie liked this · 7 months ago
-
lilz09 liked this · 7 months ago
-
night-ravens-blog liked this · 7 months ago
-
miss-synsi liked this · 7 months ago
-
turgpickens liked this · 7 months ago
-
segale liked this · 7 months ago
-
mothartsstuff liked this · 7 months ago
-
heyacris liked this · 7 months ago
-
shadowkisschy liked this · 7 months ago
-
kanri-chan liked this · 7 months ago
More Posts from Florencetypemaniacs
Hi, love the demo so far, very interesting and can’t wait for more. I was just curious if there was a reason all the ROs (except maybe Owen and Zain) and the MC are like 20 or 21? It just seems really young so I was curious? /lh
Thank you for reading and the ask. To answer your question, for your MC, it is a timeline thing. The lore of your family is very vast, and I decided that it would be easier to pick a set age. I wanted to do the early 20s because that is the age when the MC's powers start to show in the lore.
Zane's age was supposed always to be five years your senior in the timeline.
I have multiple reasons I made the ROs in their early 20s. First, it is closer to the MC's age, which I feel makes more sense and flows better. Second, in some of the RO's storylines, dying so young is a pivotal point in a lot of their angst and finding life after death with the MC.
Owen is older because it fits better with his backstory.
Hi i just would like to know : am i the only one who thinks that Oliver (depending on how with react with him during his scene) kind of possibly have a puppy crush on MC ? Same for Luis ? -sarah
Hi, Sarah. Thank you so much for asking!!! 😊😊
At one point, Oliver did have a puppy crush on you, but that was when he was way younger. It had to do with you being the pretty face behind the counter of a bakery that handed out free samples to kids. Or if you played field hockey when you were younger, he might have tried a little too hard to get your attention.
I wouldn't say that Oliver has any romantic feelings towards you now; his attention towards you is coming from the center of an aspiration, especially if you played field hockey. Oliver has known you pretty much his whole life and sees you a friend.
For Luis, you are more of an older sibling. You and Camila are the same in his eyes. Now, if you want to be the protective or teasing sibling figure to him, that is up to you. LoL.
I hope you don't mind NSFW ask now. If not, feel free to just ignore this one.
After MC and their RO had some long and intense sex, MC sits up and goes "great warm up, now let's do it for real" to tease them, but if the RO doesn't notice mc was just teasing at first, how would the ROs react?
💛 Marcel
Marcel would be surprised and sit up to look at the MC, wanting to see the sincerity in the MC's eyes, which was hard in the darkened room.
"Again, my love?" Marcel shook his head, his body aching for rest. "While I admire your stamina, I am quite tired. How about I run a relaxing bath for us to enjoy together?"
Marcel would try to coax the MC into a more relaxing activity while still being able to spend time with them. Even though they can't go another round, it doesn't mean they want the night to end.
🧡 Margaret
Margaret's eyes would widen in surprise. "You can go… again? How? Is it normal for me to be so tired?" Margaret is very new to relationships, especially the sexual aspect, so she would not even question that the MC wants to go again. Although she knew her body needed rest so with an apologetic smile, she would ask if they could save it for tomorrow.
❤️ Owen
"Are you part rabbit?" Owen asked, looking at MC with a suspicious look.
While Owen was a little put out that he didn't completely wear the MC out, he would be turned on that the MC had a very high sex drive.
"Give me a few minutes, and we will get right back to it." He kissed the MC, pushing the hair out of their eyes and kissing their forehead.
"You're going to be the death of me," Owen said, kissing MC's forehead. MC was able to feel the chuckle vibrating through his chest, and he didn't sound that upset about it.
💙 Rosemary
Rosemary would raise an eyebrow, her body melting into the bed as she pulled MC close.
She would be the most suspicious; she was very good at her job, and for MC not to drift off to sleep was a miracle in his writing.
"I can get behind you being so jazzed; I think I am done for the night, Dollface/Angelface/Handsome."
Rosemary purred in the MC's ear. "But if you want to do all the work, I wouldn't mind watching."
🩵 Tai
Tai, like always, felt the need to sleep, which called him like a siren, and for once he was able to feel his eyes close. The exhaustion of letting go now that you were with him and his mind went blank.
But for once, he found that he was fighting to keep his eyes open, ignoring his muscles.
"You want to go again?" Tai would look MC over, he supposed it was possible. You weren't exactly human, but to still have that energy was mind-blowing to him.
Depending on how the MC acts, will determine how he will respond.
Shy! MC
Tai gives them a bewildered look before his eyes soften, and he kisses them. "You are full of surprises. How about tomorrow after some well-deserved rest."
Flirty! MC
Tai's eyes narrowed as he looked the MC over. "You aren't tired? How- You know what… I'm not going to even ask." Tai just pulled the MC closer. "You have worn me out. Now go to sleep so I can catch up on some well-deserved sleep. I need all the rest to put up with you." Tai whispered in your ear, there was no bite behind his comment.
💚 Zane
LOL. I honestly find this unlikely, just because Zane prides himself on his stamina in the bedroom.
Zane's eyes widened in pure disbelief before another look crossed their faces.
Determination.
Zane wasn't going to admit that he was exhausted. There was no way in the six hells that MC was going to have more stamina than him.
With as much energy as Zane could muster, he pinned MC to the bed.
"I'm just getting started."
He would take it as a challenge, push through for another round, and then wake up late.
I am in no way the best writer, but I try to improve every day and hope that I can give my stories the storytelling and writing they deserve.
WHY IS WRITING IS SO FUCKING HARD?
Ten types of fuckery that stop you from writing the thing:
1. Imposter syndrome
You think you're not good enough or everyone else is better than you and you're just winging it AKA ye olde imposter syndrome bullshit. Yeah nah you're fine. No really, you're exactly where you need to be right now, and you'll keep getting better and better so long as you don't stop. Chances are, if you're filled with doubt about your abilities it means you've actually improved to the point where you can really start to understand what makes good writing. It means you know where you wanna end up and goshdarn it you're gonna get there.
Read this: 4 tips to kick imposter syndrome in the face and also genitals
And also this: How to silence the inner critic
2. Fear of rejection and/or failure
Yeah, us too. It fuckin sucks. BUT. Not all rejections are equal. And rejection is a necessary part of the process. Sometimes it takes a rejection to realise that a story isn't ready. Sometimes a rejection is entirely subjective and has ZERO reflection on the quality of your work. But shying away from the very idea of possibly maybe hypothetically getting rejected is only going to hold you back from even trying. And knowing why you got rejected and how to learn from it is one of the most valuable writing skills.
Read this: The different types of rejection (and how to deal with 'em)
Then read this: How to cope with rejection
And also this: Writing lessons from Groundhog Day
3. Not enough planning / too much planning
Leaping into a new story with nothing but a glimmer of an idea is exciting as heck (and can sometimes be a great way to begin) but at some point you're gonna need some sort of outline or plan to keep you on track. HOWEVER. Planning your story to within an inch of its life can also sometimes be a hindrance - leaving you stuck in the hypothetical stage of the process where your story doesn't quite exist yet (and therefore avoiding the prospect of it sucking). The sweet spot is in the middle. Having just enough of a plan to know where tf you're going, but enough freedom and flexibility to let the story lead the way...
Read this: Planning vs pantsing
Then read this: Five plotting techniques
And also this: The perils of overplanning
4. Your WIP just isn't working
Sometimes things just fall flat. Sometimes you work on the same story for yeeeeears and then it just kinda... dies. Sometimes you have the best plans (see above) and the best intentions and things still don't work out. Sometimes it's just time to move on. And sometimes it's not! Sometimes a story can be revived, fixed or changed. Sometimes you just need time. Sometimes YOU'RE the one that's changed and this isn't the story you need to be writing right now. Many variables. Muchly personal. Read the things below for more advice cos this is a big question:
Read this: What to do when your WIP isn't working
And also this: Give it space - how to grow a story in your head
Or how about this? Editing 101
5. You keep deprioritising it
Ah the irony of writing being the thing you love/want to do most of all AND YET the thing you procrastinate over and avoid and shove to the very bottom of your to-do list all the freakin' time. Maybe it's the comodification of art destroying our freedom to create without pressure. Maybe it's late capitalism sucking up all our available time and energy. Maybe it's a lack of self-belief subconsciously telling us our 'little hobby' doesn't really matter. Maybe it's maybelline. Whatever it is, you have the power to reclaim and revalue your writing. To say, "I'm a fucking writer, goddamnit!" and mean it. To ringfence your creative time so nothing and nobody gets to interrupt it. To do that thing you love.
Read this: Prioritise your writing
Read this: How to write in 30 second bursts
6. Shiny Thing Syndrome
You know that feeling when you're just getting stuck into a writing project and then — SQUIRREL! — you get distracted by another, better, more shiny writing project? Or maybe you're deep in the editing phase and your current WIP just isn't feeling very shiny at all and pretty much ANYTHING seems more exciting? Or you simply can't decide which of the many squirrelly writing ideas to actually start? You, fine writerperson, may be suffering from Shiny Thing Syndrome (STS). But fear not! There are a few ways to combat it, depending on the cause, and most of them involve embracing the squirrel-brain and injecting a bit of fun into your writing, like so:
Read this: Shiny thing syndrome - a writer's malady
Aaaand read this: Get excited about your writing again
And also this: Write like a kid
7. Perfectionism/self-sabotage
Look. Writing is scary as shit. What if someone READS it? What if they don't like it? What if they see into your soul and gain a deeper understanding of you through your words? Writing your truth, being vulnerable, smearing your heart juice all over the page? No thank you. But also, that's where the good shit is, so actually yes please. Just make sure you smear responsibly. And rest assured, even the most 'successful' and experienced writers ALSO feel like this sometimes, so you're in good company. It's just part of the art, bruh.
Read this: Why writing is scary (and why that's a good thing)
Read this: Beginning a story - what stops us starting?
And also this: Get out of your own way
8. The dreaded blank page
Oh godddd the blank page. It should be an exciting palimseset of possibility but is somehow also the most terrifying thing known to humankind. You wanna write something but where to start? HOW to start? You type that first line and immediately delete it. You watch the cursor blinking at you—taunting you—until you just give up and shut your laptop again. It's probably tied up with a bunch of things we've already covered so far: perfectionism, imposter syndrome, fear of failure, maybe a lack of planning or faith in your story or whatever. But it doesn't have to be this way. A blank page IS exciting and full of possibility. We just have to get over ourselves and learn to embrace the unknown...
Read this: Don't fear the blank page
And also this: The moaning method
9. Not enough time/energy/motivation/gnuuuughh
Dude, same x 1000. But you don't have to get up at 5am, do hot yoga, drink a kale smoothie and write a thousand words before sunrise to be a Proper Writer. You don't even have to write every day. But what you can do is hack your writing brain and figure out when, where, how, and why you write most effectively. Then tweak your schedule, your habits, and your attitude to ensure you're making the most of your time. Productivity is a big ol' lie but finding the secret to getting in your own personal writing zone is actual MAGIC.
Read this: Maximise your writing time
And also this: Get in the writing zone
And also unto this: The Writers' HQ Guide to Productivity
10. You're just fucken stuck
Got the writing morbs? In need of some literary sudafed? Stuck as a pig in a poke? Writing is a whole puzzle of a process—and to be honest that's what makes it so fun and exciting and addictive, because your writing brain is hardwired to both create AND solve the wordy puzzles within your story. Sometimes the answer is time. Sometimes it's a second opinion or a fresh eye. Sometimes a totally different approach or just a hefty kick up the bum. But whatever the problem, there IS a solution. You just gotta keep going and trust that you'll find it...
Read this: Troubleshoot your writing - why are you stuck?
And also this: Break through the writing blockage
And also also this: Write yourself into a pit (and then dig your way out again)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Alright, that's it for today. Now go write, you flithy animals.
(And if we missed anything, stick a question in our ask box or check out the rest of our shit here)
How would ROs react to a Mc who is off in their own little world just playing with the ROs' hand before slotting both their hands together and holding it, just looking happy with themselves and not noticing the ROs watching them?
This is the early romantic relationship stage (you just started dating).
💛 Marcel
Marcel's eyes looked at your hands, entwined as you looked at the window display, unblinking, and Marcel chuckled at how you were lost in your little world. He tried to hide a smile as he watched you; his body was calm like this was to be expected.
He was not new to your daydreaming and even found it endearing—the way your facial expression would change while you were deep in thought. Marcel often had to fight the urge to kiss you silly to see how long it would take you to notice his lips on yours.
He brought your hand to his lips, watching your eyes come out of a daze while he kissed your palm.
"You are a treasure." His voice was low, and his eyes were trying to divulge all his endearment in one action.
🧡 Margaret
Margaret often fell victim to daydreaming, so she didn't notice for a long time before she broke out and saw your hands in her own. Margaret's nerves would shoot up, and her face got hot with a blush. She would try to look anywhere but at your locked hands, trying to remember how this happened. Did you hold her hand? Or did she just reach out on instinct? Were you mad?
Margaret glanced at you from the corner of her eye, her forehead sweating to see your expression. She was surprised to see you looking out into space, much like she imagined herself only a few moments ago.
Although you weren't angry, her nerves would not calm down at all, and when you broke out of your daze, she would blurt out.
"I like holding hands with you!"
❤️ Owen
Owen's body was tense as he looked around. He didn't like PDA, and the feeling of someone seeing how much he cared made his teeth clench. If you were in private, Owen wouldn't hesitate to pull you onto his lap; his lips would already be on your neck as he whispered what he wanted to do to you.
You broke out of your daze, and feeling how tense Owen was must have brought you out of it. The happy expression left your face, now crossed with embarrassment, you looked down at your locked hands before you started to pull away.
Owen felt like an asshole.
Owen caught your hand, needing that happy expression to go back on your face. He wanted you to be happy with him. He locks your hands in a hard grip, making you gasp in surprise.
"Let's go."
Owen continued walking, your hand warm in his own.
💙 Rosemary
She blinked in surprise; her hand was intertwined with yours, and she felt herself melt a little. Your touches were so gentle and soft, and the feeling was so new to her in a way that left her breathless.
Rosemary looked at your face, laughing to herself when she saw that you were in your recurring daydreams and that this wasn't even a move that you were trying to make on her, but pure instinct. With a teasing smile, she stopped you, watching as your confusion turned to surprise when she brought your lips to her own.
"You're sweet as ice cream, you know that, Dollface/Angelface/Handsome?"
🩵 Tai
Tai forced himself to keep his resolve, trying not to focus on his own hand.
That didn't go as planned.
He thought of how soft your skin was and how the warmth consumed him so that he could hardly breathe. Tai usually would hate that you were daydreaming; the thought of somehow you tripping or walking out in the middle of the road because you were in la la land put him on edge. Now he couldn't be happier that you were too busy in your own head to witness Tai's mental battle.
Tai fought to keep himself calm as he pretended everything was normal. He wasn't going to ruin the moment, not when he had you so close.
💚 Zane
Zane felt the warmth, and his eyes traveled to your clasped hands. His shiver went down his spine. He couldn't help but stare at you in surprise, his eyes locking with your own glassy ones.
Ah, you were in your daydreams again.
He found it odd how you could let your guard down so often. How could you let it down with him? It was a daily mental battle for him to reassure himself that this was real. You cared about him in a way that he never thought possible. These soft touches of affection made his heart beat out of his chest, and he saw a shadow at the corner of his eye, giving him a knowing look.
Zane shook off the feeling, a cocky smile crossing his face as he pulled you closer, his arm wrapping around your waist.
Zane took control of the situation, his lips biting your earlobe as he whispered, a deep growl coming from his chest.
"Don't tease me, little lion."