I Know I'm Having A Lot Of Problems But For Some Reason When I Edit The Current Chapter It Won't Save

I know I'm having a lot of problems but for some reason when I edit the current chapter it won't save the damn thing so it will be slightly delayed. Srry.

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Choke me as if you hate me:Chapter 1 -part2

WARNINGS:mentions of sexual abuse,PTSD swearing, Hisoka's thoughts

Third person POV :

Hisoka wasn't expecting this. This is his second time participating in the hunter exams but there weren't as many pushovers as the previous time, or he's on the wrong boat and all of the strong people are on another boat. That's what he guessed. He turned to face his newfound toy companion, Gittarakur, simply to be dismissed. Something had caught his interest. Hisoka's head turns to what Gittarakur assigned his focus on and my God was he proven shameful for taking in a second look.

Such a flavorful aura.

"Hello? may I help you?"He raises a question without really knowing what he was doing. The woman breaks free from her trance of boredom and turns to show nothing but what appears to be a glowing halo above her. Hisoka was perplexed, he was drawn to her because of her vigour, not her charm. Gittarakur eyed her but not because he saw her the same way Hisoka did, no. He wanted to eradicate her. Despite the fact of her auras size, it was dominant.

"It's just... you seemed to be looking at something that wasn't there, "Hisoka's lips voice. 'Why am I saying this.' he thought.

"I'm just a little bored that's all, thanks for asking though,". Hisoka's eyes attended to her rosy lips as they forged the words uttered to him...

You've poisoned him. He saw your aura and wanted to break you, slaughter you. But now he wants to pin you down and ravage you. His mind flashed portraits of you as he proposed a seat next to him. As you sat next to him, he saw you underneath him putting up with his cock.

"Hisoka you ok? Or are you just bored like me?" You smiled. His eyes watched your lips again and he began hallucinating your eyes tearing up as you take his shaft down your throat and gagged. A small whine erupts from you as the tip of his cock abuse the back of your throat. His fingers latched onto your hair, tugging on it before thrusting your skull back into his pelvis. His eyes roll back as he releases in your mouth and it was attended by a smothered moan.

Gittarakur, unlike you, wasn't ignorant enough to know what Hisoka was thinking and despite his unbroken complexion, he felt violated just breathing there, seeing the man with who he had constructed a give-and-take relationship less than five minutes ago, get a raging hard-on for a girl he just met.

She's trouble.

"Hello Mr...?" she queried flapping her hand around in his face.

"Huh?"

"You spaced out," she sulked after being excluded for fifteen minutes." sorry yes, anyways. Where are you going? There are some dangerous people here you know that will do vulgar things to an...inexperienced girl like you, " Gittarakur gave up because it's absurd how he's the person who would do both in whatever order he chooses. He isn't that difficult to read.

But you...

So far you've displayed traits of being gullible, childlike as well as polite. However, your aura implies that there is something about yourself that maybe you don't even know.

"What?"

"I said that there are some dangerous people that will do very unpleasant things to- "Hisoka halted his words as his eyes were now attentive...

on your quivering hands.

"What's wrong with your shaking?"He interrogated, his face displaying trouble and yet his gaze was predatory. You were a little bunny perfect for a magician, who was a wolf in sheep's clothing.

You blinked before turning your attention to him and merely answering," nothing!" you giggled. That's what he told you every time.

This is ever so simply nothing.

That voice was one you loathed. You strived to remember his face, but all you recall is what he did and what you called him.

"If you don't mind me asking, how old are you exactly?" finally Gittarakur speaks.

"You can't ask a woman her age!"

"Why not? Is she even a woman? She looks young."

"Of course sh-"

"I don't know,"

The two squabbling men gaped at you. Hisoka is the most stunned about what you just said, as far as you can recognize because Gittarakur was entirely unfazed. "What do you mean I don't know?" Hisoka asked his curiosity peaking to its climax. "I don't know because of my body's manner of looking much older or younger than my exact age. I don't know, the only person who knows is my late mother." Hisoka gawked at Gittarakur in disbelief. Right then and there they knew you were either dense or suffering from a kind of amnesia."However, I know that I am between the age of sixteen and twenty-three"

"Told you she's not a woman,"

"Gittarakur there is less than a thirty percent chance she is under eighteen. Does it matter?"

"Yes."

"No."

"Of course, it wouldn't to you, knowing your tastes."

You sighed to yourself. As you gazed at the now finally unhidden sunset beaming at you. You have never been out at sea but despite the thunder and the squabbling men and birds, it was quite lovely when the sky transitioned from day to night. Even though this will presumably still be quite a long voyage, it will be much more bearable if you saw the sun and the boat wasn't weaving.

Besides, you are not bored anymore.

You have two ignoramuses by your side now because one will find a way to drag the other to you.

Billy hargrove headcannons

Billy with an S/O who came from the upside down.

So when coming into a world that's like Upside down, but way warmer you are on a cliff and on underneath the cliff is the lake.

And you jump.

A human would have perished but since your half Demogorgon and half human(demo human I guess) you only get knocked out.

You wake up to find yourself wrapped up in blankets in a place you don't know.

You were comfortable but back to phase one.

Unlike your family from Upside down you can take up to 11° C but anything above that you sweat like mad at 18°C and there are already 3rd degrees burns on you. However, when you go upside down they disappear as if nothing happened rarely leaving scars.

Anyways, the moment you rip off the blankets from your body a large hand put them back on.

You growl at the owner of the hand only to see it attached to the young adult you will soon know is Billy Hargrove.

He tells you that you need to stay warm but you understand and get off the bed.

That's when he realizes you have a temperature that is about 30°C and yet you sweating and bad.

He ended up finding you after hanging out with his group.

When you get off the bed you are in a white gown to his surprise you try to rip it off.

He starts calling nurses trying to stop you from climbing out the window and is trying to figure out if you came from a loony bin.

But after he's pulled out of the room the doctor tells him that your completely fine despite the cold temperature and that they don't have your medical history because there is nothing about you.

He's then asked if he knows your parents and he doesn't.

Right at that moment, the nurse runs out with a hyperextended elbow crying and the nurse starts to question what you are.

She says you have a temperature which you should be dead at you sweating like a mad man despite your temperature and you should have died from the drop of a cliff.

This throws the loony bin idea out of the window and colours him curious.

He comes back into the room and he tries to talk to get some info out of you like why you jumped off a cliff, why does nobody know anything about you, and Why you were naked.

Your reaction is confusion as you don't understand him, however, he finds it cute you are dense.

After that, they plan at keeping you at the hospital and let me tell you this. You spiked his curiosity and now he's coming every day to the hospital with a simple book with lots of pictures trying to teach you how to speak.

The one time he doesn't come is because he had a hell of a hangover. You are livid.

Billy had always left the book he was reading with you at the hospital so you could practice on your own until he came back the next day to help you or came back with another book.

So when he didn't show you wondered why? Did he not like you anymore? Did something happen to him?

Billy is in his room still trying to get out of bed and overcome this headache to see you.

He does see you.

Outside his window.

He straight up fucking yells when you appear out of nowhere and that my friends is how Max found out.

She was downstairs and she hears billy scream out of nowhere she wanted info.

When she comes in the room she sees you on Billy's lap cuddling him while he's still dazed by what's going on.

You see her and you instantly go defensive.

You start fucking glaring at her like you're about to pin her down and tear out her throat.

Max seeing you were trying to find out why Billy was the one who screamed and not you.

But her curiosity flies out the window as you say your first word

Mine.

As Billy tries to deny and convince you he's not yours, Max scoffs and turns a heel toward him going for the skateboard just fine causing you to do something.

After that, you're following him around like a lost puppy cause technically you are lost.

Somehow his dad hasn't found out that he is being followed around by a random girl from the hospital.

Anyways when you follow him it is everywhere, basketball, English, one time when he was the only one in the showers you followed him.

Outside girls were gaping at him drooling like the bitches they were until they saw you waddling behind him out of the showers.

The silent ones are the most dangerous.

Max's mother ended up finding out about you when you were coming out of the ice bath Billy set for you.

She didn't tell Billy's asshole of a dad because even though you didn't speak often you understood the danger of Neil finding out.

So you placed a clawed finger to your lips and hushed her.

Since you were no longer returning to the hospital they set out a manhunt as you were their most violent patient by far.

Now he can't be seen in public with you and you won't take no for an answer. He goes out and buys you a large sun hat along with a white bouffant dress (it's bloody summer).

He then gives you them along with a pair of black heels Susan never wears.

And my god seeing you out of that hospital gown was a sight for sore eyes.

His excuse was a new student. If the boys could get Eleven in he could get you in.

You are now much more fluent with speaking but mostly stay out of adults' sight so it's not a problem.

Even though she doesn't associate with you much she asks if you and Billy are a thing

One thing Billy didn't tell you about was romantic language. So you don't know what sex is, kissing, marriage.

By max asking you these questions, you unlocked a new skill.

Billy had grown an interest in you, how you loved horror movies so much and yet you always jumped in his arms by a small sound, how he could hear you giggling as you tried to swim in the shallow waters of the bath, how you somehow smelled like ginger and cinnamon.

So when he saw you marching your way to him surprised by your inhuman speed, he wondered what pissed you off.

At that moment, you grab him by the wrist out of the school push him against a fence and kiss him.

It was messy, needy, and inexperienced and it all made him falter.

He began grabbing at your ass with one hand, the other hand guiding your nape in the direction of a proper kiss.

After that, you ask him why he never told you and his reason

He didn't want anyone else to have you.

All while Max is facepalming thinking that she doomed you.

🥳NSFW🥳

Let me tell you this he wants you all to himself.

He's like a child suffocating himself with candy trying to smuggle it out of the candy shop because he can't pay. You are the candy.

He's trying to ease you in but my god the silent ones are always the most dangerous.

He goes slow and can't get a reaction out of you.

So he goes from 0-100.

Thick cock battering your womb to nothing.

This boy will toss your ass like a salad through one position and to the next experimenting with which one you are loudest during.

He loves doggy style and pulling your hair.

BUT HE FUCKING WORSHIPS ANVIL

The way how your legs go all the way up on his shoulders for him.

The way how he can tease your thighs, playfully smack your ass, smother his face in your bouncing tits and watch as you lose your mind on his cock.

He purposely wheres extra clothes when you have sex because he always takes you somewhere cold knowing you'll heat up too much.

Speaking of place he didn't does it in the bedroom. But he will also ruin you against the wall of the showers at the pool, against his locker when everyone's in class, this man will drive up a hill, lay you down on his car bonnet and fuck you if not he's ruining the leather on the inside with your slick.

Man is fucking feral.

Menace to society.

Sitting next to him at the back in your new class proceeds to slide over to you and make you sit on his lap.

You find this a kind gesture as the person sitting in front of you is extremely tall.

Until you find his breath against your neck and his fingers pressing his way into your lace panties he made you were.

Literally chuckles to himself as you try to suppress any noise.

Whispers in your ear how much of a dirty slut you are for him and how he's going to punish you when you get back home for making him this hard.

As he aggressively thrusts his hips against your flushed cunt you let out a small but barely heard whine.

The teacher looks at you and asks if you feel alright since he heard that noise come from your direction.

Billy that sneaky bastard tells him your burning up.

No shit.

The teacher dismisses you two to the infirmary as he came to like you and my god if only he knew that he played as judge, jury and executioner to send your ass to the demon who will break your back.

And well the nurse was on her hour break and it was on the floor(imma write for this one say pray it ain't bad)little shit planned this out.

You feel your ass begin to bruise as the love of your life pushes you to the ground."You know, you have a lot of nerve, teasing me with that cute little ass, pressed against the chair when it could have been pressed against me."He groans."don't worry though Billy's gonna take good care of that tight pussy of yours." You whimper as your boyfriend's strong hand pins your arms above your head as the other slips your breast out of the scoop necklined dress. His tongue rages war against yours as he entered your mouth; a war he flawlessly won without effort. His desperation and annoyance that you (his baby)had paid him no attention during the lesson. He was going to make you pay.

Or maybe it wouldn't be considered punishment.

"Rip off!" You sob

He heard you, but he needs you to know how he felt when you ignored him."You say something?"

"Rip off please!"Your voice gives way to the moan the moment Billy grinds his knee against your pussy."Turn around, face down, ass up." Your eyes are teary, lips puffy from the bruising kiss and clothes are off as a hand strikes your plump ass. You yelp as you feel the sting of the sudden sensation barely being able to process the tug on your hair as he hammers his hips against you." you like that, don't you doll," he moans" only tight for me and my cock, god so fuckin tight".His cock was inside you so fast you don't even know when he undid the zip on his tight Jeans "please be good!" you choke out.

"You'll be good?"

"Yes papi!"

"Papi now huh?"

You lose yourself to the ecstasy as he fucks you raw. You would have collapsed if not for him holding you up by the waist and directing you to another kiss that made you drunk. "Inside please, "you whine yet again as your face flushes, and you tighten around his cock like a vice." taken me so well baby" he mumbles against your lips as he reaches out for a warmth you never had before.

Sorry for the long wait on the second part of chapter 1. I will be posting headcanons from time to time so if the next chapter isn't out I will post headcanons if it's taking too long.