I Remember My Whole October Was Waiting For Pt 2 Of Hoax And Now Its Here!! Thank You Sooo Much!!!!!

I remember my whole october was waiting for pt 2 of hoax and now it’s here!! Thank you sooo much!!!!!

omg no thank you for waiting! i didn't even realize how long i took to update until i saw the date, haha

Did Ari read her diary? 👀 since it was open and she doesn’t remember opening it

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yes haha, Ari did! i initially wrote a scene where he found the diary in his pov, but then decided to remove it because i wanted the angst to hit so much harder.

That’s also why you see some subtle changes in him after, that regret hit him hard and will CONTINUE to hit him hard 😌 also, he pretty much sucks at communicating (with real talk at least and confessing that he's wrong, because you know that he's proud), which is why he communicates by making sure that the baby is okay, bc if the baby is fine then she might be fine, too...?

anyways, time to make him suffer a bit yknow

https://at.tumblr.com/moonlitinks/im-on-my-second-read-through-of-the-second/26duauseqaw8

second i read 4 times like obsessed

[reference to this ask]

and oh my gosh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoy it, though i can't imagine reading it that many times without wanting to punch ari more and more... i swear he'll turn into a completely different person and possibly suffer (like... what's worse than losing your loved one?)

i really do need to make a hoax masterlist 💀

traits turned sour

honest - insensitive

persuasive - manipulative

caring - overprotective

confidence - arrogance

fearless - cocky

loyalty - an excuse

devotion - obsession

agreeable - lazy

perfectionism - insatisfaction

reserved - aloof

cautious - skeptical

self loved - selfish

available - distractible

emotional - dramatic

humble - attention-seeking

diligent - imposing

dutiful - submissive

assertive - bossy

strategic - calculated

truthful - cruel

Hey!💗 I'm just soo in love with your fic hoax that can't even being to tell you like I don't even know where to start it is just so mind-blowing🤌🤌✨😮‍💨 and had touching like in some fics it takes time to connect to characters and it happened real fast in this fic with me🥰 and the✨✨angsttt✨✨ it just so good and hits me right in my chest where it hurts the most and I loveee you💗 for it🥹

Spoilers below-

So i read your ask where you revealed that baby won't be dead that means obviously reader will live this accident too so here's a scenario what if reader is at her workplace and she has started showing her baby bump🥹 so everybody knows she is preggo and takes extra care of her expet his husband like he does care in his own way but because of his big ego he just doesn't express it that much . So one day she just feeling really nauseas or maybe some a ache or something and she wants to go home so now maybe there is a special someone or not so special someone who is her co worker or maybe he can also be her frnd he offers to drive her but she refuses obviously our sunshiney reader but he insists on it so she agrees because she isn't sure if she could count on ari to pick her up or even care enough to send someone. So when reader arrives home with this frnd he helps her out of his car by like holding her and giving support so that she could walk or something and ari is watching this scene from the balcony. And gets furious(the man who literally has an engagement ring for his girlfriend 🥲😵) and asks questions like who is that and why was he like..... where this argument will go to....

See I don't want Ari jealous that is obviously a bonus point I just want him hurt that his wife who is preg with his child can't count on him for anything like he has pushed to this end that she won't even ask him even if it an emergency and so on...like really ansty stuff🥲

BESTIE the way I ran to answer this ask HAHAHA. honestly, one of the first few scenes I wrote for hoax was a similar (if not almost exact) scene you're talking about!

I really love how separated the reader's two worlds are. With Ari, there's a lot of self doubt cast upon herself and her abilities, but at work, she's praised and desires to succeed. Bridging these two very different worlds will definitely be disastrous, and I can't wait.

and I came completely imagine in: the way Ari comes up to the man and starts an argument with him, reader calming Ari down and even siding with this "coworker" (ahem, Andy). and he's like genuinely pent-up and also beating himself up, like why don't I even know where she works? why won't she tell me these things? why can't I protect her? and he just demands that she stops working or at the very least, he'll pick her up and drop her off.

in hoax, i was thinking about this similar confrontation but on more angsty terms... reader will suffer again but the angst will be worse because by then, it won't be ari's job to take care of her, but she will have to take care of herself, you know? since she's going to grow out of her shell hehe.

then his bodyguards come into play soon hehe

anyways, yeah. lots of development and character growth coming for the both of them with their own separate time needed.

thanks for the ask! i always love long ones and reading your scenario really got me an extra few hundred words or so to this next chapter haha.