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will pt 3 of what fate decides ever be posted or will it be patreon/paid exclusive?
hi! it'll be posted on tumblr, don't worry <3 i just started it on kofi, which is why all the chapters are posted there :)
hello, how are you these days?
ahhh hi! i'm doing much better these days :))) got a bunch of workload and short responses to do, but we're trying to thrive lmao.
hope you're doing well!
Hoax pt 2 when :(
don’t know the exact date ): I’m 6k in part 2, still got lots of edits to go unfortunately 😭
Fuck Ari! Like literally fuck him and fuck Sharon!! He doesn’t deserve reader’s love.
honestly... he's entering on a long path to redeem himself haha
can't wait for the sight on him on reader's knees begging to let him take care of her :")
Hey there!
You hoax series is damn good.
Just wanted to appreciate your work.
Btw hkw many parts are you planning to write?
ahhh hiii! and thank you! i think as of right now, hoax might have 4-6 parts to it. we're in the midst of all the angst right now, but hopefully it'll get better from here! (at least after a bit more angst at least...)
You write sadness very well! ☹️ I literally felt everything the reader goes through emotionally 💔 I hope she doesn’t give in to Ari’s cheap redemption. I hope she’s emotionally strong to not give in too easily
HONESTLY SO TRUE !!! there's no way she should forgive Ari right away, and i think that they both need to grow a little more - reader needs to learn to love herself, while Ari needs to learn to love her, and that there are consequences to mistakes, you know? profound ones, too.
ahh and thank you so much! i was so scared updating that it wouldn't be angsty enough... haha
super excited for the next part when the unrequited love is essentially switched hehe
just when i thought i could not love anything more than hoax pt 1 you come in with pt 2!!! the way you write angst is so heart-squeezingly realistic. you have a gift for making external conflict so painfully internal. your brain is so big, beautiful, and shiny hehehehe!!!! have a good day mwah!
STOPPP YOUR COMPLIMENTS ARE MAKING ME BLUSH HAHA, thank you so much! you're so sweet!
i think it's because i'm the type to internalize pretty much anything (believe me, it's not great) but i'm so glad you enjoyed it! i love getting right into the thick of it as we all suffer lmaooo
YOU HAVE A GOOD DAY, MWAH <333
can i… possibly ask for a drabble of the hoax characters having sex that’s super angsty but you can see ari slowly having feelings for the reader?
think i wrote more than a drabble lmao, but AHHH i can just imagine reader being so oblivious while ari is like feral over her. and she's still hurt and then he hurts because of what he's done, but can't stay away from her.
anyways :"))) drabble under the cut:
“Fuck,” Ari pants against your skin, nibbling on the underside of your breasts. You quiver when his mouth reaches its way up, harshly sucking on your nipple. “You going to give Daddy his milk, baby?”
“Ah!” You cry, grabbing his biceps to steady yourself. His tongue swirls around the bud before he gives it a harsh suck, swallowing all the liquid coming out of your breast. He’s different today, his dominance over you much more gentle, sweet. Since he brushed your hair to the side and started kissing down your neck, ripping your shirt in half, your gut clenched with need.
And so did a certain area—somewhere you can’t say without blushing.
Remember, you tell yourself, this doesn’t mean anything to Ari.
Ari notices the lust in your eyes, the pink in your cheeks, your small squirms beneath him as he allows his weight to give you a sense of security. And fuck if he doesn’t want to devour you. He’s already thrown away your pants somewhere else in the room, leaving you bare with just your panties on.
And he’s struck. How hasn’t seen how adorable you are? How you’re so perfectly made for him?
“Ari, I don’t—oh!” Your hips buck when he slaps your ass, nose pressing against the last shred of fabric covering you. He groans at the thought of eating you out, having to press you down because you’re too dumb, too gone to stay still. Maybe he’ll edge you if you don’t listen, have your whimper and screams fill the room. Maybe he’ll insert his finger in to see you clench around him, desperate for his cum. Maybe he’ll just slide his cock in—you’re drenched already—and let you feel every. Single. Inch.
So when he shoves your panties to the side and starts devouring you, you lose control. Back arching and hips bucking against his face, you release a wail when Ari circles your clit with his thumb. Legs hooked around his shoulders, you’re helpless when an arm presses down on your stomach to stop your movements.
“What’s my name, baby?” His voice is hoarse against your pussy. Almost inaudible in the lust-filled haze you’re in.
“Come on, baby. You’re not that far gone, are you? Not too dumb to call me by my proper name? Hm?”
You moan at the vibrations inside of you. “Please—”
“Please what?” There’s a teasing lilt to him.
“Please, Daddy!” You cry. “Please please please please—”
He thrusts into you in one go, and your head thrashes against the pillow.
Fuck, you’re so tight, Ari doesn’t want to leave. With your head in between his arms, he groans. Lifts your chin so he can kiss you, sucking on your tongue, your bottom lip, you.
“You’re mine,” he snarls. Grinds against you, then thrusts. The rhythm is too fast, you’re reduced to broken moans. “That’s right, baby. Cry for me. Because no one will get to see this, you hear me? If you show this side to anyone, I’ll tear them apart.”
“D-daddy,” you whimper. “I’m—”
“I know, baby,” he cajoles. “I know everything about you. But we’re not done after one round. You want to please me, don’t you? Make me happy? Let me worship you?”
All these words aren’t what Ari usually says. They’re new, and when he kisses you and lets his hands roam and raises you so he can thrust just right, you can’t analyze anything.
“You can’t come until you answer, sweetheart,” he mocks. “I can do this all day.”
“Yes!” You don’t even know what you’re agreeing to. “Yes, yes, yes!”
“Don’t even know what you’re saying, do you? Don’t even know you’re chaining yourself to me, letting me take care of you—”
Skin against skin. You’re so wet, you can hear it as Ari pounds into you.
“Come,” he grits out. “Now.”
You do—black dots your vision as you almost pass out, the most intense orgasm washing over you. You pant, trying to catch your breath, barely even able to open your eyes. Drowsy.
Ari notices this—and the trail of his cum mixed with yours slipping out of you. He slips his cock back in, and you moan because you’re too sensitive.
“Shhh,” he murmurs, voice gentle. Sweet. He brushes some of your hair back from your forehead. “Just making sure my cum stays inside you, baby.”
“Want to sleep, Daddy,” you whisper thoughtlessly.
“Go to sleep, baby.”
“Will you be here when I wake up?” Another thoughtless question. He’s usually gone when you wake up, even before that. You often see him leaving before your eyes close, before you can ingrain the memory to mind.
Everything about this is different, from the way he slipped his cock back in to the soft kisses on your neck, where your pulse quickens.
You must be hallucinating, but you swear his breath hitches.
“Yes, baby. I’ll be here from now on.”
What a good dream.
Did Ari read her diary? 👀 since it was open and she doesn’t remember opening it
👀👀👀
yes haha, Ari did! i initially wrote a scene where he found the diary in his pov, but then decided to remove it because i wanted the angst to hit so much harder.
That’s also why you see some subtle changes in him after, that regret hit him hard and will CONTINUE to hit him hard 😌 also, he pretty much sucks at communicating (with real talk at least and confessing that he's wrong, because you know that he's proud), which is why he communicates by making sure that the baby is okay, bc if the baby is fine then she might be fine, too...?
anyways, time to make him suffer a bit yknow
https://at.tumblr.com/moonlitinks/im-on-my-second-read-through-of-the-second/26duauseqaw8
second i read 4 times like obsessed
[reference to this ask]
and oh my gosh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoy it, though i can't imagine reading it that many times without wanting to punch ari more and more... i swear he'll turn into a completely different person and possibly suffer (like... what's worse than losing your loved one?)
Hey!💗 I'm just soo in love with your fic hoax that can't even being to tell you like I don't even know where to start it is just so mind-blowing🤌🤌✨😮💨 and had touching like in some fics it takes time to connect to characters and it happened real fast in this fic with me🥰 and the✨✨angsttt✨✨ it just so good and hits me right in my chest where it hurts the most and I loveee you💗 for it🥹
Spoilers below-
So i read your ask where you revealed that baby won't be dead that means obviously reader will live this accident too so here's a scenario what if reader is at her workplace and she has started showing her baby bump🥹 so everybody knows she is preggo and takes extra care of her expet his husband like he does care in his own way but because of his big ego he just doesn't express it that much . So one day she just feeling really nauseas or maybe some a ache or something and she wants to go home so now maybe there is a special someone or not so special someone who is her co worker or maybe he can also be her frnd he offers to drive her but she refuses obviously our sunshiney reader but he insists on it so she agrees because she isn't sure if she could count on ari to pick her up or even care enough to send someone. So when reader arrives home with this frnd he helps her out of his car by like holding her and giving support so that she could walk or something and ari is watching this scene from the balcony. And gets furious(the man who literally has an engagement ring for his girlfriend 🥲😵) and asks questions like who is that and why was he like..... where this argument will go to....
See I don't want Ari jealous that is obviously a bonus point I just want him hurt that his wife who is preg with his child can't count on him for anything like he has pushed to this end that she won't even ask him even if it an emergency and so on...like really ansty stuff🥲
BESTIE the way I ran to answer this ask HAHAHA. honestly, one of the first few scenes I wrote for hoax was a similar (if not almost exact) scene you're talking about!
I really love how separated the reader's two worlds are. With Ari, there's a lot of self doubt cast upon herself and her abilities, but at work, she's praised and desires to succeed. Bridging these two very different worlds will definitely be disastrous, and I can't wait.
and I came completely imagine in: the way Ari comes up to the man and starts an argument with him, reader calming Ari down and even siding with this "coworker" (ahem, Andy). and he's like genuinely pent-up and also beating himself up, like why don't I even know where she works? why won't she tell me these things? why can't I protect her? and he just demands that she stops working or at the very least, he'll pick her up and drop her off.
in hoax, i was thinking about this similar confrontation but on more angsty terms... reader will suffer again but the angst will be worse because by then, it won't be ari's job to take care of her, but she will have to take care of herself, you know? since she's going to grow out of her shell hehe.
then his bodyguards come into play soon hehe
anyways, yeah. lots of development and character growth coming for the both of them with their own separate time needed.
thanks for the ask! i always love long ones and reading your scenario really got me an extra few hundred words or so to this next chapter haha.
In hoax, will reader die like the original au? I know it's a major spoiler, you don't have to have answer it if you don't want to.
But if there's a tiniest chance I can get to know I'll try asking this. My little heart can bear this thought 😭😭 You literally made me cried like a baby......
i honestly do think it is a major spoiler, but i also currently don't know what to do with her fate yet!
if it helps, i do love happy endings though... angst doesn't exactly need to end with death, right?
but yeah sorry i can't answer this properly! nooo it'll get better i promise <33
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Hi I’m not sure if it’s just me but I can’t use the link for your masterlist?
helloo! i took it down to make changes to it, should be up soon :)