Can You PLEASE PLEASE Do More Of Your Season 0 Kaiba? I'm In LOVE With How You Write Him!! Can You Maybe

Can you PLEASE PLEASE do more of your season 0 Kaiba? I'm in LOVE with how you write him!! Can you maybe pick up where you left off? Where Kaiba loses to Yugi and goes into his coma, and then the reader ends up falling in love with him somehow? Thanks!!

Warning: Mentions of kidnapping, possible stockholm syndrome

Lets actually say Yugi didn't win...I think it would be more interesting this way.

You try your hardest to free yourself from the guards as Kaiba orders them to grab you. Yugi and your friends are distraught, fighting to try to get to you. Kaiba however, laughs as you're knocked out and taken away.

When you wake, you're chained to a bed in some unknown place, but the room looks nice. Kaiba enters your room and chuckles. "You're awake."

"Kaiba, let me go! My parents will come looking for me!"

"I already took care of them." Kaiba looked off to the side.

You thought he killed them and started to wail. Seto, alarmed, quickly came to your side. "My love, I merely used money to keep them quiet."

That calmed you down a bit, but you still cried. You thought Yugi would win. You thought you could be free. As you sniffled and wiped your tears away, Kaiba held you against him and you wanted to hit him and run. Maybe throw up. But he continued to hold you, shushing you and rocking you gently. "It will take time for you to get used to this life, but I'm sure you'll learn to love it and me."

Would you? Would you ever? You were chained to a bed, likely in the Kaiba mansion. Did his father know? Would he break you free and have Seto arrested if he found out? You hoped so. Before you could think anything else, Seto gave you a kiss on the forehead.

"I love you, my dove."

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Another short one, but I'm really starting to like where this is going.

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Ok so let's get constructive then.

Saber would not let you use the wish that way and even if you managed to do it : 1 she wouldn't be happy about it. 2. The grail doesn't work that way.

You can't make her a character that's like "uwaaaaa no not for me!! ~~" when she is clearly not. Due to her role she has dehumanized herself to the point she sees herself only as a tool. When Shirou sees her naked she doesn't react because she doesn't see herself as human let alone a woman. She wants to use the grail to get a better king destroying everything she's done because that's how self-sacrificial she is.

The fate route is not about her getting feeling but her accepting them. She only smiles at the happiness of others and only at the end of the game does she smile for herself. Her end is not her getting a new life but accepting her death and finally coming to terms that she did what she could and that that was enough.

The other stuff about her becoming a glorified housewife is something I don't find in character but can write off as personal opinion.

I have not watched the anime because I haven't heard good things about it and I see why. I don't want to insult you. I want there to be more Fate writing but it bothers me when the characterization of such an interesting and deep character gets butchered. I can understand not having time to read a VN but please at least read the wiki a bit. I don't expect you to delete the post but I hope you improve your writing in the future.

Alright, I read your whole thing and I wanted to clarify a few things.

1. The whole “wishing her to become someone new” that I wrote was meant to play off her wish in Fate/Zero to destroy everything shes ever done and let her become someone else.

2. It was not my intention to make her a “glorified housewife.” In Grand Carnival theres a joke where she really likes food. I incorporated that as she really likes to cook, and in the original legend she was a peasant before becoming King. She would know how to garden and make her own food and she wanted to share it with the reader/her master.

3. I always actively try to improve my writing. My Artoria piece was my first ever time writing for her so I can understand if I got a few things wrong. I will take what you said into consideration now that it is constructive criticism, but allow me to give some of my own constructive criticism. Maybe lead with your CC instead of just insulting someone, yeah?

4. I encourage you to actually watch the anime and gather your own opinions. I thought it was good. It is definitely NOT the best Fate show, however. I believed Zero was way better.

5. This is FAN fiction. Not all of the rules have to apply to me if I do not want them to. Sure I could make all of them apply to me, as I have done with other fandoms in the past, thats what makes it fun. But if I want to put my own spin on something (that SOOO many other authors do in so many other fandoms) I should be allowed to do so as well.

6. I understand if my writing is not for you. You can give me CC, but please refrain from coming straight for the throat next time, or simply just block me and move on if you do not like me that much.

Hope this helps <3

Alucard feeding off the reader??

Content: Alucard x fem!Reader

Warnings: Blood, vampire feeding

Notes: You didn't specify gender, so I just went with a woman reader. Also apologize if this is ooc, this is my first time writing Alucard. I also got some devastating news about a family member halfway through this which may have clouded my judgement on if this was good enough to publish on the internet

You always liked Alucards fangs. The way they gleamed in the moonlight, the way he'd use them to scare enemies off, the way they'd flash at you when he smiled. He smiled a lot with you. He adored you.

Even after his friends left him, and those twins betrayed him, he found room in his heart to give you a chance, and it evolved into a beautiful relationship where he practically worshipped the ground you walked on.

Two lost souls come to find solace in each others arms, passionately loving each other until the end of time. Alucard felt his love for you grow with each and every day - and so at some point he vowed to never hurt you. That included feeding if he ever needed to, and you appreciated that.

Until tonight.

Alucard hadn't fed off of blood in so long, he began to dim. His normally bright yellow eyes now stuck to the floor, dulled and dark. His bright blond, wavy hair, stopped being washed. He felt sluggish and depressed. He knew not feeding wouldn't kill him, but it made him feel better. But he would never feed off of you, he told himself.

After seeing what no blood does to him, you offered your neck up to his fangs. He vehemently denied your suggestion, but gave in the more you insisted.

Now you lay helpless in your nightgown, your lover crawling over you. The moonlight shining through the window reveals his eyes to you, those dim yellow orbs telling a tale of concern. His hand moves under your chin and slots your head to the side, giving him better access. He looks at you one last time.

"Are you sure?"

"I'm sure." You give him a smile.

He wouldn't feed from you.

But he lowered his head and bit down anyway.

He wouldn't feed from you.

But he drained your blood from you.

He wouldn't feed from you.

But he pulled away, his brightness returned to him, and you winced as he pulled his fangs out of you.

Adrian fought himself the entire time he drained you of your blood, tried to reason with himself that there must be some other way. But Alucard reasoned that you wanted this, liked it even, and who was he to deny you of that?

He looked you over as he pulled away, his mouth and teeth smeared in your blood. "Are you okay?"

"Never been better." You joked, though you now felt weak.

"I'll go get us some things to clean this up with." Alucard carefully moved off of you. "I didn't take too much, did I?"

"No, no. Just grab a cloth or something before my blood gets on your bed." You shooed him off.

Alucard returned with a cloth, a bandage, and some water for you. He kissed you, wiped up the blood and kissed the wound, then carefully put a bandage over top to make sure it didn't bleed anymore. He handed you the water for you to drink, and then climbed into bed with you.

"I love you." He mumbled into your ear.

"I love you too." You set the water down on the table next to the bed, laid with him, and slept the night away.

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Hi!! I've been binge watching TFP, as I've recently just stumbled across it. And already wishing I've seen this show eariler!

May I request TFP Ratchet realizing he's fallen in love with a F/human ally? Honestly just love 'grumpy, gruff hero falls for sweet, caring love interest. But denies it at first till something happens' trope. Can be fluff/smutt. Anything you're comfy with 😊

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Oh my God I literally love Ratchet so much, thank you for this. Finish the show and then watch the movie! I was lucky enough to watch it when it was coming out - I loved it as a kid and I love it now as an adult.

Content: TFP Ratchet x Fem! Hum! Reader

Warnings: None!

Notes: I wrote for Ratchet a lot on my old Wattpad account, or at least what I can remember of it. If anybody wants to see my cringy old writing, my username on there is the same here, Multifandoms27. I also have a four-part TFP Megatron series if anybody's interested. Also I apologize if this is shit - this is my first time writing for Ratchet in literal years so uh, hope you enjoy lol

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Ratchet usually didn't bother with the whole romance thing. He was too old for that. Even when you came into the picture, he didn't pay much attention to you. He thought humans were weak links - something that didn't belong in his world.

But through your own effort to get to know him, he slowly warmed up to you. He thought you were one of a kind - smart, funny, understood him in almost every capacity...he loved you. But he would never admit it, not even to himself.

You had been nothing but nice to him, even in the beginning when all he did was snap at you. Thats what softened him, made him draw closer to you. How could something so tiny be so kind to something so...large?

And then, when the children came and he had to grow accustomed to them, then to June and Fowler, he had realized that you had made him so accustomed to humans and made him believe he could finally...no. No, he did not love you.

...At least, that's what he told himself. Until you got hurt.

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Optimus had walked through the groundbridge, his servo raised and, for once, a solemn face. One of their own had been hurt, and Ratchet feared Miko finally had gotten hurt from chasing after Bulkhead. But, when Optimus showed him his servo, his spark nearly extinguished.

"(Y/n)! Oh, Primus, no!" He carefully took your unconscious form in his servos and called for June.

Optimus felt responsible for your state, and so he went to lock himself in his berthroom. Ratchet however, tried to assist June anyway he could. But June eventually grew too stressed trying to dress your wounds and assure Ratchet, that she finally snapped on him and told him to get out of the room.

Ratchet went to find Optimus, to ask how you had gotten so hurt. He was angry. He was so livid. How could this have happened to you? To his favorite human?

He knocked gently at first on Optimus' berthroom door. When he got no response, he began to pound on the door. "Optimus, I know you are in there!"

Slowly, the door opened. Optimus stood, staring down at his medic and long time friend. His gaze was quizzical, but he said nothing. Ratchet was even more put off by that. He began to speak. "How did she come to be like that?"

"She must have snuck through the groundbridge when none of us were looking, and-"

"Just tell me how she got this way, Optimus." Ratchet pleaded.

"Megatron was not so kind to her...that is all I'll say, for your sake." Optimus spoke, sadness lacing his tone.

Ratchet grew enraged. "And you couldn't protect her?! Primus, Optimus! You have had more than one chance to defeat Megatron, yet you stand here, sad as an Earth puppy who got kicked, while my (Y/n) is getting torn apart by the most tyrannical Cybertronian in our history! How could you?!"

Optimus sighed and looked off to the side. "Goodnight, Ratchet. We will speak in the morning."

Ratchet protested, but the Prime had already shut himself back in his room. Grumbling, he turned to find all three children staring from around the corner, accompanied by Bumblebee. He grumbled more. "What are you looking at?!"

Bumblebee whirred that you were awake. Ratchet blinked and rushed back into the medbay, where sure enough, you laid there awake and groaning in pain. June looked up and saw Ratchet once more.

"I administered some pain meds just now. She should be okay in about twenty minutes. Her wounds are all dressed." June backed away. "Do you want me to uh..."

"Yes, please." Ratchet waited for June to leave before kneeling next to you. "How are you feeling?"

"...Could be worse." You laughed, then cringed in pain.

"I'm not sure how much worse you could be. I hear you survived Megatron. Well done, sweetspark."

"Sweetspark? That's a new one." You chuckle this time, careful not to create a big pain response like before.

Ratchet blinked in surprise. "D-Did I say that? I meant-"

"It's okay, Ratch." You grinned and placed a hand on his large servo. "I know what you mean."

Ratchet stopped, then slowly and softly smiled down at you. Yes, you always understood him in some capacity...but not every one. You could never pick up on how much he loved you.

Yes, he loved you.

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