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PLS Help With Dialogue!?
PLS Help with Dialogue!?
Ok, i need some help here.
I am at a small standstill in my novel, “The Painter Next Door”, and i have got to a point where i realized, that i didnt keep one of the most important aspects to my villain that i needed: He is a quirky, insane, asylum escapee.
I kinda forgot about the insane part. Sure, i gave him the evil painter aspects, using painting and art related weapons, using paint and art related terms and nicknames, and even killing those who claims his paintings are bad.
But i didnt give him his insanity.
So, i am planning to go back through and add some things, but i am only going to do that once i am “done” with the storyline, meaning, the end chapter is done.
However, the insane lacking part is still giving me active trouble as of now.
So, i am trying to find dialogue for this scene, more or less Charlie’s rant, i am having trouble finding proper dialogue.
So, the scene is this:
The villain is using the MC as his canvas, and the cops have recently just figured out that the car that the villain stole has a GPS in it, so they track it.
They DONT tell the news people about this, but the newspeople still evesdrop on the police station, and get the information anyway, and stupidly decide to broadcast the news, and the villain now knows.
He does into a frenzied rant, breaks the radio, and goes all insane. Kinda broken angry insane, but still capable of speech.
I need some help with the dialogue.
Do note some things here:
He is an evil painter, and he uses art/paint related terms
Whenever he talks about people who want to stop him, or his typical victims, he terms them as “Art hating critics” or something along those lines. He might use “rescuers” or “cops” in certain situations, but i think in this rant he would term them as “art hating critics” or something along those lines.
He is angry, he is pissed off. But he is also kinda frantic.
Why is he frantic? There is too much snow outside for the car to run.
I need help with DIALOGUE! Pls help!
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