The Melting Man From The Ringleaders Circus Crew!

The Melting Man from The Ringleader’s circus crew!

He is representative of the MC’s memory of seeing the aftermath of the fire swallower’s failed act while she was leaving the circus as a child. 

And yes, the lower right arm is melting away from each other in halves. 

A Drawtober piece i did yesterday for Dread Drunk and the MC, (his daughter).

The Dread Drunk feeds off of and uses MC’s disliking of her mother and siblings to his advantage, even though, by that time, the MC has seen that she HAS misunderstood some of her family members, (other than her uncle, who was an asshole), tries to convince her that he is the only one who loved her, and that her mother threw him out and tried so hard to get back into the family. 

He claims that the reason why he got drunk was due to the depression of not being let back into the family. 

This is, in fact, NOT true. He is a narcissist, and an evil bastard. Tricky. Although he might still have some smidgen of love for her, as he does sometimes protect her from certain actions of the main villain… although that might also mean that he has his own plans which could contradict some of the main villain’s…

This is one of the scenes where he is trying to persuade the MC that he is the only one who loves and cares for her. While still being drunk about weird about it.

And the reason for the digital bits in the dialogue? I didn't center the picture in my phone correctly, and only noticed it after transferring it. 

If you can’t read what it says, it says: 

“Oh, Butterscotch, what’s wrong? Whatever it is, you can tell me. Here, I know, why don’t you sit down and have a drink? You’ll feel better afterwards, peanut butter.” “Why do you resist me? Trust in me, [nickname], I just want to help you unwind.”

The issue is not her age, she is of age, she can drink, but you do not want to drink any kind of alcohol that this man offers, even if he is genuinely trying to be nice to you. 

If you are not his daughter, if he offers it to you, just run... if you can.

PLS Help with Dialogue!?

Ok, i need some help here.

I am at a small standstill in my novel, “The Painter Next Door”, and i have got to a point where i realized, that i didnt keep one of the most important aspects to my villain that i needed: He is a quirky, insane, asylum escapee. 

I kinda forgot about the insane part. Sure, i gave him the evil painter aspects, using painting and art related weapons, using paint and art related terms and nicknames, and even killing those who claims his paintings are bad.

But i didnt give him his insanity.

So, i am planning to go back through and add some things, but i am only going to do that once i am “done” with the storyline, meaning, the end chapter is done. 

However, the insane lacking part is still giving me active trouble as of now.

So, i am trying to find dialogue for this scene, more or less Charlie’s rant, i am having trouble finding proper dialogue. 

So, the scene is this:

The villain is using the MC as his canvas, and the cops have recently just figured out that the car that the villain stole has a GPS in it, so they track it.

They DONT tell the news people about this, but the newspeople still evesdrop on the police station, and get the information anyway, and stupidly decide to broadcast the news, and the villain now knows. 

He does into a frenzied rant, breaks the radio, and goes all insane. Kinda broken angry insane, but still capable of speech. 

I need some help with the dialogue. 

Do note some things here:

He is an evil painter, and he uses art/paint related terms

Whenever he talks about people who want to stop him, or his typical victims, he terms them as “Art hating critics” or something along those lines. He might use “rescuers” or “cops” in certain situations, but i think in this rant he would term them as “art hating critics” or something along those lines. 

He is angry, he is pissed off. But he is also kinda frantic. 

Why is he frantic? There is too much snow outside for the car to run.

I need help with DIALOGUE! Pls help!

Alistair expressions! Will color sometime soon...

The Squid Enemy from Twisted Shore.

Yes, it is more like a mix of Manta ray, crab, and squid, but i am naming it entirely off of the tentacles. 

He is part of the zoo section of the story

I WILL!