And What Would The Painter Be If He Was In My Mythological AU?

And what would the painter be if he was in my Mythological AU?

Why, a Jackalope of course!

Well, not exactly an “of course” statement, it just felt right to say. 

And yes, he is very floofy. And he is proud of it. 

VERY PROUD OF IT... and he will cuddle with others to show and prove just how floofy he is.... 

Mythological AU Caesar has come out during the nightmare moon and has decided to abduct Ferret-Bee-Taur me back to the Nightmare realm, after gathering some fruit and berries. 

Probably not the worst individual to be abducted by tho... he’s actually pretty sweet if you manage to look past the terror, the nightmares that you are inadvertently going to be experiencing regardless, and the black goop that rains down often.

Just try not to fall asleep or stare into the wall eyes. 

P.S. His hairstyle is actually really difficult to get right at this angle. He does NOT have a bowlcut... it looks like he does, but he does not... *wow i need to focus more on his hair than i do*

Hi, i need some assistance of rewriting a line for my novel, the context is this: 

I have just bumped into The Painter for the first time, by accident on both of our parts, although we were technically going the same direction. 

He eventually ends up trying to subtly accuse me, (through question), of being the one who called the cops on him, (as there are cops in the lobby, although for a different reason that he does not know). 

Although i have a base dialogue, which was placed only for placeholder back in the chapter SCRIPTING phase, as i am in the process of writing the official chapter, the official dialogue needs to be written. 

However, i dont know how to word it in the right context.

Before showing off the line, (as to not put it directly in the middle of the post, where it could get lost), I must clarify some things. 

- Although he shouldnt be accusing me of being the one that the cops are here FOR, as he doesnt really care, unless i committed a crime against him personally, he also shouldnt give the vibe that HE is the one that the cops were for either. 

- It should be SUBTLE! But slightly accusational. Still, although, not too overly intimidating, because the MC must be able to somewhat trust him by the end of this, and the phrase, “emotional turn on the dime” would be accurate. (I dont like the idea of sudden firey rage, to positively quirky and silly). 

- I do not specifically know what is wrong with the dialogue that is the one i need revision. Whether it not having the right words that fit the vibe, grammatical errors, too many or too little words in general, or just... wrong for some reason.  

The Line is: “Do you know anything that might have caused the cops to be here?”

Just asking for something that means the same thing, but fits the criteria. if anyone need some more specific info on the context, pls ask. 

Again, the MC wont know that hes the antag at this point, and should relatively trust him, at the end of this. (Not like BEST FRIEND, but also not suspecting what he ends up doing in the future scenes)

Writing help?

Hey, writers of tumblr, i need some help in writing a scene. 

So, i am writing my next novel, called The Painter Next Door, and i am having trouble balancing something that is mysterious, while still trying to keep the flow away from going too fast. 

So, lets just call him “Mysterious Individual”, or MI for short, keeps dodging out of rooms at the last second, whenever the MC comes into the room and “sees” him. 

How do I write this happening in which it isn't obvious that this guy is actively trying to hide, for malicious or not reasons, but also definitely never showing his face? Or at least, not clearly? 

The MC must think its a little odd, but not think it is some kind of criminally insane individual rummaging around the building yet. 

This is beginning to occur in only the second chapter, which is why i need to make sure that it isn't going too fast. 

If any of the writers of tumblr, or ANYONE for that matter, has any tips or tricks on writing this kind of thing, pls let me know. 

I am really wanting to publish this book in the end, and for it being the first one, i want to have it be a good start to everything. 

Thanks so much in advance! 

All and any suggestions and tips are welcome!

An unfinished lineart for my OC Caesar, in the form he takes, or one of the forms he takes, in my Mythological AU. (I needed to post SOMETHING today, and didn't feel like starting a new one)

He does not take this form in his original story. Just my mythological AU. 

All of his character information will come when i post the finished product. Which is probably going to be tomorrow. 

Although i can say that out of all my antagonist OCs, he is the one you’d probably want as a boyfriend/lover, if you had to chose one. 

:)

I just couldn't finish it because whenever i looked at his furthest leg, it kept looking smaller and thinner than it should be and it felt like i had to tweak it a thousand thousand times. 

*Sigh*… it took around an hour to figure out how to fix it... 

I wish my pet would be like this to me... This is adorable...

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