Women Making Each Other Worse.

Women making each other worse.

That's the dream. That's what it's all about.

It's what gets me out of bed in the morning: the hope that I'll be able to give some nice lesbian the push she needs to do something unforgiveable.

All of this is intensely factual.

I am rarely of the school of thought that screams "I need MORE of this story" but in this instance I'll make an exception. I want to see Jupiter confessing! I want to see Becca continuing to Becca. I want to see predatory Doll Mode Amaranth and Becca! I want to see Celosia continuing to be a theatre dork! I want to see Lord Umbrae continue to be a giant plant dommy Vampire LARPer.

(And yes, Umbrae absolutely has had Berberi's core sample for Jupiter ready and waiting to go.)

There are many reasons why I can't get enough of this story, from the whole madcap caper of it all to the way everyone has secret agendas operating at seemingly cross purposes. (Except in the end, of course they're not!) There's mean florets, and shy plants, and digressions on the power of art and theatre, and a ridiculously cute cast of weirdos and outliers. All mixed up with constant erotic betrayal.

Also, Chapter 10.

@strangetree replied to your post “Minutes Since I was last in absolute fucking agony...”:

They're there for two weeks after the story ends! Two weeks of pure unbridled Becca taunting! I need this in my veins.

​Yeah like, in the epilogue chapter we learn that what happens immediately after the main story is Celosia is with Phoebe and Jazz in the maintenance deck for a long time, and when she finally carried them down she bumped into a LOT of people in the lobby who were VERY excited to see them all together like that because they INSTANTLY figured out what (finally) happened.

Several things very obviously must have happened after this point.

Becca Dextris teases them both RELENTLESSLY, especially Phoebe, and they all become friends

Jupiter talks to Berberi and admits SHE is ready to become a floret. She probably fucking begs to have her implant like the same day, and technically Cestro Umbrae is probably qualified to do it

There is probably also a LOT of very affectionate warm welcomes to PHOEBE ESPECIALLY at actually becoming a part of the Compact for real. Everyone loved her throughout the story. The entire hotel knows (as of Chapter 10) that she was basically made for this. She's a perfect fit for life as a floret, and EVERYONE knows it.

And they would eagerly and enthusiastically welcome her to it. Probably to a level that's a bit overwhelming and Celosia has to put her foot down and insist they give the poor girl some space, but I'd be willing to bet that BECCA IN PARTICULAR makes sure they stay in contact, and would be more than happy to help them get used to everything about their new lives.

And they DEFINITELY fuck.

Jupiter too, she was MAD horny for Amaranth in Doll Mode.

But GOD I really need to READ all of this happening instead of just imagining it, you know?

The story has such an incredibly HOPEFUL tone to it. This is the life Phoebe was made for. This is everything that's right for her. This is a life that's going to make her happy and fulfilled.

I just want to read actual chapters where we get to see the poor girl coming to terms with BEING happy. Learning all the stuff she didn't know yet about life in the Compact, and realizing she loves it.

And get that girl a goddamn MIRROR! She's been on Class Gs for days now, she NEEDS to literally SEE her reflection as a better, happier version of herself.

If The Grand Folia Hotel, as we have it now, is the story of Phoebe learning how to LEAVE her old life, I want a sequel where we get the story of Phoebe leaning how to THRIVE in her new one.

And I absolutely want Becca Dextris to be there to help her learn the ropes, because she was SUCH a good character and had such good chemistry with all of them.

And she was turbo thirsty for Phoebe. She would LOVE being able to bring out Amaranth.

I really want to see all of them just living together on the Phellos.

What if i give this game had a "Hit Em" OST

you! guy who likes fictional lesbians to the point of feeling a strange sense of pain! you can be a lesbian. but there are some steps you have to complete first

😈 You are not bound by the Hays code.

😈 You are allowed to have evil characters who are not punished by the narrative by the end of the story.

😈 You are allowed to have evil characters who win.

😈 You are allowed to have evil characters who make evil look fun and cool.

😈 You are allowed to make your fun, cool evil character the protagonist.

😈 You are allowed to glorify, romanticize and eroticize evil characters and villainous acts.

😈 You are not obligated to teach your audience a moral lesson.