Who Cares If I Want To Mentally Live In My Daydream Universe While I Physically Rot Away. That's My Business

who cares if i want to mentally live in my daydream universe while i physically rot away. that's my business

Don't be afraid to jump ahead in your story.

I was struggling with this scene, a rather gruesome, exhausting scene. I get to a point where the scene's point is made and then what's left for me to do is to write the set up for a narrative shift in the scene. This set up is what's known in filmmaking as "shoe leather": the mundane actions (sitting down, saying "goodbye" on the phone, walking inside a room) that don't provide much to the story besides them being things that the characters do to get them to the juicy stuff.

I was not looking forward to chewing on that shoe leather until I got an idea:

why not just cut that boring stuff out and jump ahead to the things people actually want to see?

And so, that scene was divided into two, and a little time jump where the shoe leather would have happened was placed in between scenes.

As everything, this tool is a case-by-case thing, but just knowing it's there can help remind ourselves of a couple of very important things that are often forgotten when we're so cycled on our writing:

Not every single thing needs to be spelled out, the audience can infer a lot of things with enough clues.

Giving screentime to a thing is giving importance to that thing; is describing the way they open a door relevant? Only you can know.

You're here to write what you want to write. Some parts (action scenes, my god) will always be a bit more of a slog, but the important thing is that they lead to your enjoyment of the whole work in the writing process, which quite likely will lead to the audience's enjoyment in the viewing.

The Outbursts of Everett True was a comic strip that ran in papers from 1905 to 1927, wherein the aforementioned Everett True regularly beat the everliving shit out of rude people as a warning to anyone else who might consider being rude. Men have not only been taking up too much room on public transport for about as long as public transport has existed, but the people around them have been irritated about it for at least a hundred years. The next time someone tries to claim that manspreading is a false phenomenon, please direct them to this strip so that Everett True can correct their misconceptions with an umbrella upside the head.

so embarrassing when i forget im checking someone's blog and i start scrolling through and liking and reblogging shit as if it's just my dash. it feels like wandering into someone else's apartment and not noticing and making myself lunch

Thanks for the tag, @louwhose !

here's a sentence (well really 2) from chpt 18 of my fic I'm working on atm.

The two women looked over at the two teenagers brushing hands as they walked. They shared a knowing smile, reminiscing about young love when they spotted the knight and princess taking each other’s hand, interlacing their fingers together. 

I'm just gonna tag some other disa loving peeps but no pressure! @precariousrelic @xqueenybee, @psychicbluebirdmiracle

Last sentence tag

RULES: Post the last sentence you wrote (fanfic / original / anything) and tag as many people as there are words in the sentence

thanks for the tag, @bahbahhh!

here's some shink I've been working on I guess

They decided that they really couldn’t justify paying for yet another game on their poor stretched college student budgets, so they just headed back to their apartments afterwards.

oh dang it I don't even wanna count how many words that is let's just go with no pressure tags for @linktheacehero @aheavenscorner @whogirl2011 @pikayay213 @pastelsandpining and. um. whoever else wants to I can't think of anyone else off the top of my head.

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