This Is A Script I Wrote A Long Time Ago But Recently Found In My Docs The Story Is Called The Cresent

This is a script I wrote a long time ago but recently found in my docs the story is called The Cresent Moon tell me what you guys think.

Crescent Moon

FADE IN:

EXT: Oak forest, dusk.

Two werewolves are hunting in the woods. They need to find food soon or their pups could die. The two wolves (Mackenzie & Maxine/Max) shift into their human forms to track a deer.

 Mackenzie: We won’t be able to find enough meat to support ourselves let alone the pups for the entire winter if we keep this pace. Let’s move to a more prey-filled area before the first frost sets in then we…. Max. Max, what are you doing?

Max grabs her knife and starts to growl and stalks toward Mackenzie.

Max (Snarling): Something I should have done two years ago. GoodBye Mackenzie.

Max pounces and slashes at Mackenzie’s chest and face and leaves her for dead.

10 minutes later a saber-tooth werecat (Vanessa) comes across Mackenzie’s dying body and takes her into her home to help her heal.

INT: Vanessa’s house, morning

Mackenzie wakes up on a couch bandaged up in Vanessa’s house the next day confused about where she was and how she got here.

Vanessa walks in from the kitchen with a cup of water.

Vanessa: Good, you're awake.

Mackenzie: Where am I and why am I here?

Vanessa: You’re in my house. I brought you here to help you heal. You’re lucky I found you in the woods when I did or you could have died.

Vanessa points to the bandages on Mackenzie’s chest.

Vanessa offers Mackenzie a cup of water. Mackenzie takes the glass and takes a few sips

Vanessa: I don’t want to hurt you more than what you already have been through. I’m Vanessa.

Mackenzie: I’m Mackenzie and thank you for saving my life.

The crescent moon mark on Vanessa’s shoulder begins to glow a faint pink

Vanessa: I should go get some venison. Are you hungry Mackenzie? 

Mackenzie: Not really but I’ll try to eat something.

Vanessa (puts hand on Mackenzie’s shoulder): Hey you don't have to eat if you really don't want to but atleast try to eat something.

Entertainment at its finest 👌

In other words I wish that them fighting over Julia was the whole episode

alternate title for the egyptian decryption caper: carmen and devineaux fighting over julia for 20 minutes

Taser Spider

Oh my God 🤣🤣🤣🥲

My brain flipped me off and ran away now I have way to many Rayaari au ideas and I don't know what to do with them

I hate this reason for quitting a route on Lovestruck the series was Starship Promise the route was Nova "the Superhuman"

So I was reading season 8 and I was on episode 2 and the scene was getting a little spicy 😳😏 and then I got absolutely blindsided by a line from the Mc (I named her McKenzie Ursa) it was just creepy and felt out of place. Nova's script was choppy and it felt off.

That can't just be me

This is me it fucking hurts my writing when I am trying to work on a project that I have loved working on for a long time.