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Ooh mysterious! I love how you describe the goat before she knows what it is. I'd imagine it's a hard balance to strike when listing it's basic elements without giving it away. And drawing attention to the fact that the King doesn't show his feet is super cool too

A Gust of Rising Wind | The Raven King

Phei has landed on the Surface, making her way through forests and hills looking for someone to show her the way. But the fields are big and empty. Only after days of walking does she stumble upon a small town, the buildings empty, the windows blocked by rotten planks. But she must go on.

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Walking has become harder too. The ground that had been so soft and lush before is now bare, dried up cracks instead of grasses decorate the top, Phei’s talons unable to dig into the earth. With the city within earshot she ensures that the sleeves of her coat are covering her feathers and her cloak hides her talons. Satisfied with her disguise, she presses on.

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