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What about the character who thinks that they're going to die and closes their eyes in preparation, only to open them a few seconds later, confused, to see that another character dove in front of them and saved them at the expense of their own life.

When a character doesn’t realize they’ve been, like, shot or whatever and they hand brushes against their side and comes away wet with blood, and they’re just staring at it like wtf is this and then their knees just totally give out on them and they sink down, maybe gasping a little as the reality finally hits them. That’s good stuff.