It Just Needs A Litte Shaping (complete Re Wright Of Act 1&2) - Tumblr Posts

Like the thing is, the concept isn't bad! I'm sure it will be good on stage! But I'm worried this will be a good play despite the script. Like the actors can for sure bring the character in (because it's not in the script), BUT THEY SHOULDN'T HAVE TO, the point of the script is to give characters so the actors can Expand opon them, they should not need to do the work a character driven narrative can't.

Was just at a script reading (unfinished)

I didn't like it! I get the message and all, I do, but uhg it's so boring? I guess?? Like the message is "the people in control will never fix suffering and the climate! WE have to do it TOGETHER"

But that message was mostly delivered by the vegan power girl™ and the literal soviet cosmonaut, the other 4 characters did NOTHIN and one of them kept having a complex about it ("we wrote this character to be autistic") and in the end they had had an epiphany that they are valued and it's fine to be shy, but that never showed up on the script until the end song??

ANYWAYS excited to do jazz- funk bas for this :D