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EXACTLYYYYY
I NEED THEM CRYING, BEGGING, DESPERATE TO HOLD ON FOR JUST ONE MORE SECOND, TRYING TO CONTROL EVERY LEAK AND NEVER EVER WET THEMSELVES IF THEY CAN HELP IT (although they REALLY will not be able to hold it in). I NEED THEM DANGEROUSLY FULL, SO FULL THAT IT HURTS THEM, THEY’RE SUFFERING FROM HOW MUCH THEY HAVE TO GO.
When I read pee desperation, I don't want to see a character needing to pee. I want to see the character more desperate that they've ever been in their life, they're bladder so full it's almost bursting. I want them to suffer because of how bad they have to go, to feel impotent against a need so simple and so strong they can't believe it is really happening. I want the need to be so strong the character has to do everything in their power to hold it, they even have to remind themselves that they CAN NOT just let go, no matter how good would that feel. I don't care how it ends, but I want them fighting until the last second.