Reader Notes - Tumblr Posts

may i present my favorite notes from my only beta reader @glorious-destruction:

[scene is my mmc fighting a couple guys] note: kaz is the kind of guy that would break your nose and then be like "got your nose"

[scene is kaz and his bestie talking about how jiro is the 'ugly' one] note: they always say there ain't no such thing as two pretty best friends. sorry kaz you're the ugly one :(

["I won’t bite, I swear to you.”] note: it would be really funny if he did though. think of the shock factor

[people dying] note: WHY IS EVERYONE DYING ON ME