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This is a story idea that originated from a paragraph I wrote a few years ago about Ichigo not starting off with such a horrible, murderously-inclined relationship with his hollow until the fight with Byakuya and the hollow's forceful takeover. I took the idea from that paragraph and turned that into over 1,000 words of an awesome Bleach story idea.
When breaking into Soul Society to save Rukia, Ichigo himself is saved multiple times by a mysteriously appearing hollow mask. He considers it a good luck charm, but Hanataro freaks out and throws it away whilst scolding Ichigo, and Yoruichi is highly disapproving of the mask as well. Ichigo, being the intelligent high-school student that he is, picks up on their wariness and mistrust. This affects him, and the blossoming fear is cemented when Shirosaki doesn't explain himself in his attempt to help Ichigo.
Thus begins Ichigo’s less than stellar relationship with his hollow. What if Ichigo spoke to his hollow before being affected by the intense hollow prejudice? After the battle with Renji, Hanataro doesn’t bring up the mask… or at least, he doesn’t violently hurl it into the sewer water. Ichigo is curious, and goes into his inner world to find answers there – well, so maybe he needs a little guidance from Hanataro on how to do it, but Ichigo figures it out soon enough. (*Grumbles...* crazy growth rate... scary kid... this is nothing.) [If he can’t make it into the inner world, or Zangetsu decides he isn’t ready, he learns after his fight with Kenpachi. That’s when Ichigo is on the best terms with his hollow spirit: Ichigo hasn’t denied the ghostly figure, the Hollow acknowledges Ichigo as his partner (which he turns to mocking after being denied? Does he even call Ichigo this again?), and the hollow helped Ichigo to win his fight.] When Ichigo confronts Zangetsu, the sword spirit admits that he is not the sole inhabitant of Ichigo’s soul. Zangetsu’s cloak fragments and dissolves into the negative of Ichigo, who is actually rather calm and pleased that his presence has been acknowledged. “Nice to meet ya’… partner.” Ichigo is confused but not yet defensive, so that’s already an enormous plus when compared to their canon meeting.
Ichigo asks if the mask that has been conveniently blocking would-be fatal attacks can be attributed the pale figure, and worries if the white spirit got hurt (in his odd, Ichigo way). The hollow is pleased that Ichigo noticed and gave him the credit he’s due (he’s desperate for attention), and brushes aside Ichigo’s concern. He does deride Ichigo for being weak enough that he needed to step in. Ichigo just gives the random person in his soul a light scowl before responding. The substitute soul reaper points out that he was completely clueless to this Shinigami business less than 3 months ago, and that he had once again been forced to be a normal human less than 3 weeks ago, and that he’s doing pretty decently for lacking a good century on the youngest of Soul Societies upper echelons.
Shirosaki insists that what he once was is no excuse; he needs to be stronger if he wants to protect his friends, no matter how or why. Ichigo spirits, which had sank slightly when he realized that he was recently just a (mostly) normal human (as far as he knows) and yet was facing down Shinigami far more than 10 times his age, revive as he responds. “That’s why I have you and Zangetsu, right? To help prop me up and save my skin while I find the strength to co continue – and if I can’t find that strength, then I’ll just have to make it myself.”
Zangetsu is pleased with Ichigo’s conviction, and Shirosaki is smug about being relied upon, even if Shiro’ is a bit put out at essentially being called a crutch for Ichigo while the human(ish) boy improves. Ichigo isn’t finished yet, however, and asks them both for help in becoming stronger. Zangetsu promises to lend his strength to Ichigo, but Shirosaki claims that he’ll train Ichigo until he’s strong while standing on his own two feet – and absolutely monstrous in ability and power when the 3 work together.
Ichigo is a little disturbed at gaining enough power to be ‘monstrous,’ but he accepts the two’s help. The hollow (er…Ichigo was told a little about who and what this guy is a while ago? …eheheh…) suggests sparring and training in Ichigo’s inner world. Zangetsu admits that he can drastically increase the ratio of time Ichigo can spend in his inner world from 1:1 to about 100:1 at the cost of a tremendous amount of Zangetsu’s energy. (I know the ratio sounds ridiculous, but virtually no time passed when Ichigo retreated into his inner world while fighting Kenpahi) The actual amount of time is dependent on how much energy is put into it, how much focus Zangetsu can spare on the technique, how much the technique is effecting Ichigo’s body (spiritual or physical, both take extra effort, though less so for the spiritual), and how helpful Ichigo is being – lending his own energy and bringing himself to his inner world under his own power, and not Zangetsu’s.
Ichigo and Shirosaki start to spar frequently, with Zangetsu teaching Ichigo to control and refine his reiatsu while the two rest between bouts. Ichigo grows stronger mostly in just his spirit and mind, unless Hanataro or someone else is there to heal Ichigo during the spars, in which case they have the practice actually affect Ichigo’s body.
When Ichigo is training for bankai in just 3 days, Shirosaki pops out as well, and helps out both Ichigo and Zangetsu. Yoruichi is instantly on guard, but by the end of the few days she finally accepts that the hollow won’t randomly attack her or Ichigo. Renji, when he pops by, doesn’t even notice/realize Shirosaki is there/a hollow for a while, and then freaks out before calming down and accepting him as a reluctant ally in helping rescue Rukia.
When Ichigo faces down Byakuya, he tag-teams the man with Shirosaki’s help (and with Zangetsu supporting them both). It’s still a pretty rough battle, but it’s much, much better than the canon’s battle and the nameless hollow’s forceful takeover and retreat.
/*The hollo admits to Ichigo that the human gave parts of himself to his hollow side when he regained his powers. If Ichigo hadn’t accepted the hollow side of himself, he would have completely lost a small portion of who he was to his other half. Oddly enough, one part that the hollow gained from Ichigo was abstract logic and reasoning, the cause of his constant riddling and Ichigo’s difficulty at solving it. He also received a sizable portion of Ichigo’s ability to forge his own way (he kind of starts to follow everyone else’s plans for him just a little, doesn’t he? Or is that just my imagination?), as well as a generous helping of Ichigo’s battle-drive, and almost all of his bloodlust. (Not that Ichigo had much bloodlust to begin with, but he really beat up a lot of those bullies in Karakura town with no mercy…) */
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...So, what do you think? I bet cywscross (who does amazing Bleach fanfiction) could do something awesome with this... but I doubt that author would ever notice this. *Sighs* Tell me what you think? I have difficulties actually writing, but I love coming up with story ideas. I might have missed a few key points, and I haven't actually watched Bleach in a few years. but cywcross' story Sight brought me back around to the Bleach fandom...again.
My Queen --Bleach version--
Anime: Bleach
Rating: M
Pareja: Hichigo & Rukia
Sinopsis: Se odió a sí misma al corresponder todo cuanto ese demonio hacía con ella, los besos, las caricias... estaba haciendo el amor con el hollow de Ichigo. (Adaptación de mi fic de Zenki).
Advertencia: (NSFW) Lemon.
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Por: Maeda Ai.
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Entró sigiloso. Si en ese momento él fuese un simple shinigami, ya se hubiese acurrucado junto a la mujer, dispuesto a dormir.
Pero esta vez era diferente, esta vez estaba libre. . . esta vez no era un shinigami, ni un hollow, solo era él. . . la versión más fuerte y despiadada.
Se acercó al lecho, posando una de sus manos sobre el seno izquierdo de la pelinegra, apretándolo sin la más mínima delicadeza.
* ¿Qué. . . qué haces?. * _Rukia despertó entre gritos al darse cuenta de las "travesuras" de su compañero._ * I-Ichigo. . . tu mascara, ¿cómo es que?. *
Las dudas y miedos de la joven se quedarían sin respuesta o alivio, pues el hollow la empujó de nuevo contra el futon, inmovilizándola y desgarrando todas sus ropas.
* Ahora, shinigami, haré contigo lo que él no se atreve. *
* I-Iaa !!. *
La pelinegra se retorció desesperada, más nada podía hacer contra la fuerza de ese demonio.
Hichigo sonrió victorioso, mientras sus grandes y toscas manos iban y venían por la pequeña y frágil figura de la mujer, tocando, delineando, reconociendo la silueta femenina y memorizándola.
Sus pequeños pechos fueron objeto de salvajes y bruscas caricias así como de succiones y mordiscos por parte de los ardientes labios de ese ser.
Gruesas lágrimas mojaron el rostro de la shinigami, en un extraño contraste con los débiles gemidos de placer que por más que quiso, no pudo retener.
* El rey siempre está contigo, ahora es mi turno. . . *
Hichigo liberó su pene ya duro, sin necesidad de despojarse completamente de la shihakusho.
Un grito desgarrador se escuchó en la oscuridad de la habitación, mismo que se ahogó entre los labios del hollow.
Rukia se odió a si misma al corresponder todo cuanto ese ente hacía con ella, los besos, las caricias, el vaivén de sus caderas.
No supo cómo o en que instante, pero la ojivioleta se hundió en un hermoso y placentero trance que solo Ichigo podría darle.
““Y él es Ichigo. . . aunque su hollow lo esté controlando.""
Pensaba.
Para cuando se dio cuenta, la joven se hallaba lanzando las caderas al encuentro del pene de aquel hollow.
El roce de su sexo, la intensidad y la sensibilidad, todo, terminó en un fuerte orgasmo donde la vagina de Rukia apretaba deliciosamente el pene del hombre, haciéndolo venirse dentro de ella.
El silencio que de pronto envolvió la habitación, solo fue interrumpido por un suspiro de la chica cuando su amante salió de su cuerpo.
* Ichigo, ¿por qué?. . . *
* Yo no soy Ichigo, lo vencí. . . ahora yo soy el rey. *
* Mentira !. *
* Ya no queda nada de él. Y tú no significas nada para mí. *
* N-no. . . yo sé que no es así. . . *
Le decía ella con una mirada suplicante.
El hollow chasqueó la lengua.
* Tonta !. *
Dijo y salió apresuradamente de la habitación. Alejándose para someter al rey, quien clamaba por salir y recuperar a su reina.
Con cierta tristeza, la shinigami se abrazó a sí misma. Tal vez Hichigo quiso hacerla sufrir, pero al final él también terminó disfrutando de aquel acto. Porque por mucho que lo negará, el formaba parte de Kurosaki, y por esa razón no podía evitar desear y querer lo mismo que Ichigo. . . y eso la incluía a ella.
* Él siente lo mismo que Ichigo, lo sé. *
Una triste sonrisa se dibujó en el rostro de Rukia, porque ella no podía odiar a Hichigo, como decidió llamarlo.
Y es que ella amaba a Ichigo y lo aceptaba tal cual era, incluso con su hollow interior que a veces tomaba el control del shinigami y la poseía de forma violenta.
Tampoco podía odiarlo cuando, en medio del caos del éxtasis y sin darse cuenta, él la llamaba "reina mía".
Totalizado.
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Cuando quería adaptar este fic, no sabía cómo hacer que Ichigo se comportara tan. . . malvado. Y Shirosaki, que me encanta, fue la solución.
Me gusta esta parte oscura del alma de Ichigo, lástima que nunca aparece ante Rukia ¬¬' .
Lo que si tuve que cambiar fue el título (y el final ¬¬'), ya que Hichigo no es precisamente un guardián 0w0 .
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Este fanfiction fue escrito por MAEDA Ai y es material de “Paradise”.
Totalizado el 13 de Diciembre de 2019.
Versión Zenki= Totalizado el 01 de Mayo de 2009.
La dama del Hentai: Maeda Ai.
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"Ichigo, sabe dizer qual a diferença entre um rei e seu cavalo ?...A questão é a forma, habilidade e poder ! Como se os dois a certo ponto pudesse a vir a ser um só ! Mas um deles se torna o rei e tem o controle da batalha! Quem sobrar vira o cavalo, emprestando a sua força ao rei ! É dessa diferença que eu falo ! A resposta é só uma...INSTINTO !"