They Were Supposed To Be Murdered Off Later Into The Story But My Teacher Told Be It'd Be Too Long :( - Tumblr Posts

I just wrote a short horror-story for a Spanish project that was supposed to be half a page long but ended up being six-and-a-half pages long

I lowkey wanna post it but I'm not sure if I should because I'm too lazy to translate in :(

For context the story title is "La Mansión Donnafritz" which would translate to "The Donnafritz Mansion"

It's about a catrin (can't remember the word) named Javier Mackglovio that get's called in by his distant aunt to take care of her and her wife since they're supper old and unable to take care of themselfs.

Once he gets to the mansion, he finds how unkept it is, the thing basically falling apart

If I were to post it, I'd probably do a few changes - add on what I found fit best and/or just write what I truely wanted to write, not just a short-simplified version of the 'complex' and hopefully gut-wrenching story I wanted to write.

Idk, should I write it?