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Thank you Zofija

Some of these are a little underwhelming (have I mentioned that I want to rewrite the first chapters yet)

Bella: "Dad! I...can't...breathe!"

Freddie: "Who the heck are you?"

Zach: "You finished early. Did something happen at work? I thought I was walking home today."

VH: “It’s not that big of a deal. It’s fine, really.”

Nala: "Hey, are you okay?"

Fera: "'m fine. It's just the usual.

Tagging(no pressure) @pagesofcursive @writing-is-a-martial-art @pretend-im-normal and anyone else who wants to!

First Lines Tag

Thank you @teasenpaiwrites for the tag!!

Rules: post the first spoken lines of the main characters (however you define that) of your WIP

(I give no context whatsoever.)

Silver Sterling: “I don’t know what to do”

Ira: “You’ll figure it out. You always do.”

Captain Black: “Oye barbarians! We’re gonna change paths!”

Ironside: “Well, Black, the nearest port is a day’s journey for here. Unless we decide to go back.”

Braveheart: “We all have trauma, Soberski. You’re not special.”

Canta: “Aren’t you supposed to be working, Soberski?”

Forester: “He’s a pig. I would know. I bunk with him.”

Soberski: “Ay, Captn’! You sure we don’t got enough food? I’m gaining some weight!”

Tonya: “Why?”

Lakoma: “I’ll stay behind.”

Desmond: “Silver Sterling, it has been a while.”

I like this tag game! I’m just now realizing that each of their first lines really represents their personality. 

Tagging (with no pressure): @a-completely-normal-girl @baguettethebooklover   @cryptid-s-wips @apocalypsewriters @47crayons @vivian-is-writing @writing-valentines @talesofsorrowandofruin @loopyhoopywrites @scmalarky @kryskakikomi @annlillyjose @rhikasa @cadmusfinch @sheyshocked @a-cosmic-elf @just-a-coincidence @fayoftheforest @mel-writes-with-her-dragons