It's Been Awhile Since I've Read Nexus But From What I Remember It Was A Little Bit Hard To Follow. The
It's been awhile since I've read Nexus but from what I remember it was a little bit hard to follow. The flashbacks are good with building the backstory, it was just a little jumpy(?) at times to really follow the emotion from the flashbacks to the present. But its not anything major, like if you hadn't asked I would still read it just fine even if I had to back to read a paragraph here and there.
I don't know if I made any sense with that and honestly it could just be my take bc I'm a little slow to pick up on stuff when I'm reading sometimes šš but it's definitely really good as is if you didn't want to change anything. You're one of my favorite writers and so far I haven't read a fic of your that I didn't like so I am ready and willing to absorb any content thrown my way. š
THANK YOU SO MUCH! <3 i really really appreciate this and YES okay that is so good to know because upon rereading it I felt the same way. im trying to read other fics and books to understand how to build solid foundations and background without using too many flashbacks and honestly i totally feel you, i can also be slow to pick things up when reading so i wanna make it easier
you are so sweet and kind <3 thank you for your support :,)))))))
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hola amour are we getting a dv update soon? its almost been a yearrrr
hola
yeah i know im so sorry, i really am trying! <3 thank you for your patience i know how frustrating it can be!
Kara bestie, I love how you made nexus and I think youāre doing amazing so far! I donāt know if it was your intention to, but I feel like your kind of building up with ocās back story with little flashbacks and references here and there. I really like it.
Besides that, i am starting to wonder if Jin is actually dead or if itās bluff?š§ I need a confirmed dead body. You know even then you canāt be sure.
ily <3
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BESTIE! thank you so much for sending me this <3 yes i was hoping to just do flashbacks but am worried it was too hard to follow and piece together since im leaving clues from the get go....but if you like it thats good!
well as for jin's death, let's see what our trusty detective jeon jungkook is able to find out!
what kinda vibe are the nexus!tae scenes gonna have? honestly canāt waitttttt
controversial question lmao (youll find out why eventually, promise)
lets just say...he changes over time ;)
Have you seen the summer I turned pretty? I kinda think Jin Namjoon and nexus OCs love triangle is like that where Jin is Jeremiah and Namjoon is Conrad

yessss omg ok so
nexus!jin is fs like jeremiah in his flirty but charming and respectful fuckboy bisexual king energy and he openly dotes on oc too
but i wouldnāt really say nexus namjoon is like conradā¦he was always mean to nexus oc when they were younger not like sweet but she just thinks heās the hottest ever and craves his approval. feel like belly liked that conrad was nice to her yk? namjoon and oc are much more e2l energy. namjoon is jealous of oc for a lot of his childhood and resents her. does that change? has that changed? hmhmgmgm š
but yes, jeremiah and belly do somewhat resemble jin and oc !!
AWWWWWW YEEAAHH!!!! Absolutely fantastic, as usual!! This series is AMAZING!!!! Itās that one story that you just hope that will go on and on and onāPart 246? Yes!! PLEASE!!!!
I honestly donāt know what I enjoy moreāthe brilliantly faceted characters or the major twists and turns or the SOOO GOOD slow burn (no pun intended, lol) or your writing style!! However, it all comes together to create this MASTERPIECE!!!!
I know this last installment had to take quite a bit out of youāPLEASE REST, RESTORE AND RECHARGE!!!!
We will ALL be happily waiting!!!!
THIS IS SO NICE šš it makes me so happy you enjoyed it so much :,)