chronicallyonlinewriter - Ipso facto, shithead.
Ipso facto, shithead.

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Summer

Summer

In a dizzying instant she was splintered across realities - sitting with him on the edge of the bed while she nestled against him on her back porch, voices ruddy with cheer and laughter mingling with the ringing in her ears, her family gathered obliviously at the fire pit on a mild summer evening as the world fractured around her.

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10 months ago

How dare you do this to me before I have even had my coffee.

Pedro/Old Man Joel WIP

Pedro/Old man Joel WIP

He grew his hair out for me, personally


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10 months ago

My word is green 💚

Joel only half-registered Amos' rambling commentary, the other man's hand sweeping across the dashboard as he pointed out the long, straight lines that were the city greenhouses, the sprawl of farms to the west, the bright glow of the electrical substation to the east. 💚


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10 months ago

I always end up cutting scenes out if I don't think they're working - it's why I have a sixty page document just full of cut scenes. I never throw anything away - and sometimes I am able to fit things in at a later time, so I'm glad for that!

One of the best writing advice I have gotten in all the months I have been writing is "if you can't go anywhere from a sentence, the problem isn't in you, it's in the last sentence." and I'm mad because it works so well and barely anyone talks about it. If you're stuck at a line, go back. Backspace those last two lines and write it from another angle or take it to some other route. You're stuck because you thought up to that exact sentence and nothing after that. Well, delete that sentence, make your brain think because the dead end is gone. It has worked wonders for me for so long it's unreal

10 months ago

"The game lovers all know what these aspects are, and I think we can all agree."

I can assure you, we do not.

This is not a Game Lover VS HBO Lover thing, anyway - this is simply a "don't call a twenty-year-old girl ugly, share memes comparing her looks to that of a fictional monster, then try to pretend the next day like you never did any of those things" thing.

I think some of the words shared about Bella yesterday were extremely cruel and uncalled for, and it's very disappointing to have to point that out to actual adults who should know better.

Okay, so ever since the pics of Bella and Isabela on a horse came out, I've been receiving some hateful asks about the actresses (rude comments about their appearance, acting skills, etc.) and the show itself too. I won't be answering those.

I am not here to hate or demean. I never said I hated the show, Bella, or any other actor. I never said that Bella looks ugly or is a bad actress either. I never said anything hateful about anything related to HBO Tlou.

What I've recently stated was that (from the pictures we've seen) the actresses seemed to look too young in comparison to the original characters. There was nothing hateful about it. It was just thinking out loud because every game fan wants the show to stay true to the original in every aspect that can be implemented. That's understandable, right? It doesn't mean that when some of us point out something, we're being hateful.

For example, we all know nobody can make the actresses taller, so only a dummy would complain about that. But at the same time, we all know that there are make-up artists that can make them look older, so why not do so to stay in tune with the original? That was literally everything I meant, and I don't think it was a bad thing to vent about.

I guess a lot of people confuse straightforward opinions and honest insights with hate or rudeness.

No one said that Bella or Isabela looking young was their fault (people be throwing arguments about how they are adults in real life too), of course they are; nobody's blaming the actors for looking young. We are blaming the creators if the final result will give people a reason to shame the show for a lack of realism due to this matter. Keep in mind that not everyone watching the show will be aware of Bella or Isabela's real age. What we want is to prevent the haters from hating on the show even more after they watch two young-looking girls making out, slaying everyone throughout Seattle and then settling down on a farm with a kid. Because remember my words—if we really have Ellie and Dina looking too young and adorable in the final result, it's going to be a feast for the assholes that have wanted to shit on the show since day one.

Anyway, I shouldn't be even justifying myself, but since I'm already typing this… I've always appreciated the show, even though there were many aspects that made me highly disappointed (I said it so many times in my past posts). The game lovers all know what these aspects are, and I think we can all agree.

One of the reasons I always liked the show though, was the cast. I fucking love Pedro for Joel. Bella wasn't at all a bad choice either (sure, people will still bitch about their appearance, but for me, it's the way a person performs, not the looks). Bella is a great actress, and they've dealt with what they've been given with grace. Also, I admire Bella and Pedro's dynamic and bond behind the cameras. This is a huge plus for the relationships they should have as Ellie and Joel, just like Ashley and Troy back then.

So no, I won't hate. I know a lot of you would enjoy me trashing the show, but I am not going to do it because I don't feel it. I may have opinions that are considered negative for the hyped HBO fans (even though I perceive them more as a form of venting to the game fans), but I mean no harm with those. After all, they are just opinions, and people don't have to agree with them and can move on.

I will still be answering asks about the show, even if you send opinions that are not at all positive. I will still comment on them, or just post them so you can be "heard." But I won't share those that I consider unnecessarily rude. I'm not going to participate in this kind of blogging.

After all, I'm 99% of the game blogger anyway :)

Okay, So Ever Since The Pics Of Bella And Isabela On A Horse Came Out, I've Been Receiving Some Hateful
Okay, So Ever Since The Pics Of Bella And Isabela On A Horse Came Out, I've Been Receiving Some Hateful

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10 months ago

I have never wanted to write skater Ellie before this, and now it's all I want to do.

Very Rough Skater!Ellie In The Helmet Joel Definitely Insisted Upon

Very rough skater!Ellie in the helmet Joel definitely insisted upon

Bonus WIP:

Very Rough Skater!Ellie In The Helmet Joel Definitely Insisted Upon