Fractured Virtue - Chapter 10

Fractured Virtue - Chapter 10

Seeing Malfoy wearing a Death Eater mask for the first time, was like witnessing a transformation. The mask obscured his features, hiding whatever expression might have lingered on his face. It was as if a barrier had been erected between them, further emphasizing the divide between their worlds. In that moment, Malfoy seemed less like the boy she once knew and more like a stranger. Malfoy seemed to dissolve into his attire. The black robes, paired with the black trousers and boots, the thick belt, and the form-fitting black top, transformed him into something almost unrecognizable. Like a soldier in full gear, ready to wreak havoc.

“I just...I need you to understand," muttered Draco hesitantly, pulling in a deep breath. And then he began. "I'm never going to be a man who tells you how lucky I am to have you, even though I know I am. I'm never going to be a man who tells you that you're beautiful everyday, even though you are. And I'm never going to be a man who tells you I love you everyday, even though I do. And I really do, Granger."

"I know you do," she said. "I know.”

Isolation by Bex Chan

That word for word plagiarization of Les Pelerins is still up. I commented on the fic letting the author know I'd seen it and asked them to take it down, and reported it to AO3 months ago. Not sure what else to do. Anyone have experience with this and advice on getting a resolution? I know they're a volunteer staff and swamped.

DRACO POV

I'm currently writing my fanfic, Fractured Virtue, and it's becoming evident that Draco is planning something right from the start. To portray this, I'm incorporating his POV or memories about everything, which will be revealed in later chapters. This way, if Hermione sees something in a certain way, readers will later experience it through Draco's eyes as well. However, it's quite challenging, so I'm curious if you, as readers, would appreciate this approach?

Unsubscribe

As my hits, kudos and subscriptions are growing, a few times I realize that I lost a subscription. It kindof botheres me, so if you ever unsubscribed from a story, could you pls tell me why is that? Did the story not go according to your expectations or what could be the reason? I am really interested in your opinion.