SO IT HAS FINALLY COME TO THIS!

SO IT HAS FINALLY COME TO THIS!

The episode I have been working up to for 5 years…. Y’all aren’t ready like I was back then. So enjoy? >:’3

Mourning flower 🥀

It’s finally done :D

My longest deltarune vid to date and the most work as well.

Things like work and finding a better video maker held it back a bit but I had to get it out there so here it is.

hope you like :D

just 3 kids having fun under the sun!! <3

unfiltered verson + icons under the cut!

Apparently a lot of people get dialogue punctuation wrong despite having an otherwise solid grasp of grammar, possibly because they’re used to writing essays rather than prose. I don’t wanna be the asshole who complains about writing errors and then doesn’t offer to help, so here are the basics summarized as simply as I could manage on my phone (“dialogue tag” just refers to phrases like “he said,” “she whispered,” “they asked”):

“For most dialogue, use a comma after the sentence and don’t capitalize the next word after the quotation mark,” she said.

“But what if you’re using a question mark rather than a period?” they asked.

“When using a dialogue tag, you never capitalize the word after the quotation mark unless it’s a proper noun!” she snapped.

“When breaking up a single sentence with a dialogue tag,” she said, “use commas.”

“This is a single sentence,” she said. “Now, this is a second stand-alone sentence, so there’s no comma after ‘she said.’”

“There’s no dialogue tag after this sentence, so end it with a period rather than a comma.” She frowned, suddenly concerned that the entire post was as unasked for as it was sanctimonious.

red is the square you utter buffoon not a FUCKING CIRCLE

a circle is too lappy for red

yellow triangle blue square red circle

A SQUARE CAN'T BE RED