At This Point I No Longer Care If Author Continues To Make Jiwoo Win, I'M JUST BEGGING HIM TO MAKE A

At this point I no longer care if author continues to make Jiwoo win, I'M JUST BEGGING HIM TO MAKE A MORE NUANCED PLOT

Please,,,,just something beyond "Jiwoo fight, Jiwoo win";"Kayden fight, Kayden win"

Add SOME kind of real world implication, ANY larger than life problem. PLEASE GIVE JIWOO MOTIVATIONS AND AMBITIONS instead of just "brhhhg fight"

You might say "oh, but eleceed is a wholesome slice of life story, real stakes will ruin found family"

WRONG

People who want to see good action+found family , GO READ FAIRY TAIL RIGHT NOW.

FROM WORLDBUILDING TO MOTIVATION TO FOUND FAMILY ITS EVERYTHING ELECEED WISHES IT WAS

Anyway Natsu dragneel/Lucy heartfilia could eat 10 Jiwoo seo for breakfast.

Finally got around posting another Eleceed fic!

What is it about, you ask?

Well, here's the summary:

For years Kayden has coveted power, known nothing beyond it. A life now, where he doesn't have to fight to survive, where he can rest his head, is as unfamiliar as it's comfortable.

Or, Kayden's relationship with his power stands at odds with his relationship with Jiwoo and Kartein. He finds himself oscillating between extremes.

Note: Has Kayden/Kartein as a ship

Every!!!! Single!!!! One!!! Of!!!! These!!!

The way Jiwoo has ZERO trauma response from both neglect and torture absolutely baffles me! Like?? Yeah it's a webtoon, but that's not exactly hard to write into the story! Even a single panel could address his trauma!!

Eleceed in the first 100 chapters was so interesting because you could see the moral scaling and gray undertones of morality in Wooin, Jisuk, Kayden and Kartein. Heck, even Jiwoo showed more personality back then

Reading eleceed now is like reading about an overpowered Wattpad mc now WITH HOW BORING JIWOO'S CHARACTER IS.

Things that I think Might Give Nuance to Eleceed aka I complain

how the fuck has Jiwoo not shown more attachment issues with other characters, like I know he does has at one point with Kayden but it's so infrequent that you forget this kid has basically been neglected his entire life

Can I get a chapter on just his eating habits? Like we don't know much about him other than that he's an overpowered bean. Like can he cook or does he even do it? Does he just live off of takeout and shin ramyun for the majority of his life?? I WANT ANSWERS!!

+ to point 2, failed chance of environmental storytelling but hey if u gotta pump out a new chapter every week that's at least 40 panels I would skip it too.

LET THE BESTIE FUCKING HANGOUT OMFG! never in my life have I seen a friend group as underdeveloped as Subin, Wooin, Jisuk, and Jiwoo... Before u come for my ass I know I'm right because do u remember ANY chapters where their dynamics were explored... and I mean just them I'm srs

Shakes u aggressively The fucking entirety of the payoff of the Jiwoo gets kidnapped and core fucking obliterated arc? Like how the hell is he fine and dandy after that shit? NO, I DO NOT CARE HOW GOOD OF A HEALER KARTEIN IS I WANT TO SEE SOME ANGST!!!

slams papers THEY INTRODUCE CHARACTERS AND SUDDENLY THEY'RE FUCKING DEAD. The fact that some arguably pivotal characters to the plot and world-building cough Sucheon, Arthur, Iseul, etc, etc. cough have not appeared in over like 150 ch tells me WAY too much about the current development and I DO NOT LIKE IT!! Let's explore Sucheon and HIS REACTION TO THE KIDNAPPING THING? Iseul can talk to animals, cool but kayden is a human who basically transfigured into a cat... maybe there is more to those awakened animals... OR FUCKING ARTHUR?? MY GUY HAS NO HARM AND WITNESSED FRAME KILL HIS CLASSMATES AND WAS BETRAYED HOW TF DID THAT FLY UNDER THE BUS

u know what pisses me off is that they aren't actively developing Amyeong (dark) and Jiwoo's relationship and Amyeong's ties to Jiwoo's mother. Also, PERSONALY, I think Jiwoo and his mother should be more awkward around each other considering her job and I've seen videos that the lack of time spent with a parent can rlly just make them a stranger to a child. Plus Kayden knows more about Jiwoo than his mother anyways let me SEE it.

In the end, I just complain out of a slight love for the series, these are things I just personally want to see out of the webcomic that's all. Also, I might have more, I kinda stopped reading it in order after ch 200 something.

Once in a while when I wake up I find myself crying. The dream I must have had I can never recall. But…  the sensation that I’ve lost something lingers for a long time after I wake up. I’m always searching for something, for someone.

Kimi no Na Wa

You know I adore all the characterisations of the usher family but you know who I really really loved from the family , who I think about after it all ?

Juno , butt of the families jokes about Wills and inheritance money and ' it's talking whys it talking?'.

Juno who confessed to Tamerlane of all people that she wants to be wanted , to be part of a big family not for money but for the bonds for the belonging.

Juno who's clearly suffered in the past with some kind of chronic pain related to her amputation , who's been through poverty and hard times like the young Ushers had. Who may have suffered from addiction and is putting her foot down to change.

I adore her , showing up for Tamberlanes presentation/launch inspite of her treating her like absolute unwelcome shit.

Juno who witnessed the steady destruction of the family she so wanted to be a part of, who got turned on by the man she loved who saw her as PR proof the highly addictive drug he's peddling isn't just that. She's a piece of good publicity a symbol of his success at pulling the wool over the world's eyes.

Juno who unlike any of the other Ushers (excluding Lenore she's our angel) had the strength to walk away from all of it with her soul intact and head held high.

Been thinking about eleceed as usual, and you know what I noticed?

Kayden was dad-coded even before he met Jiwoo. Allow me to elaborate:

1. His relationship with Amyeong:

The most obvious one, of course. The Kayden we knew before Jiwoo was a 'lone wolf'; he wasn't someone who cared for company. Yet, this same guy seems to have an extended relationship with Amyeong. Despite not caring to have an apprentice, Kayden teaches Amyeong to use his power efficiently and advises him. The flashbacks all show him speaking easily with Amyeong and given the fact Amyeong considered himself Kayden's apprentice, it's easy to see that their relationship was clearly over a long/significant period of time

What I'm trying to say is, Kayden, despite his insistence to work alone, was pretty fond of Amyeong, taught him to make the best of himself and spent considerable time with him.

2) His familiarity with Roist

Okay yes, I know, he rejected Roist as his apprentice too BUT BUT, that does not mean they did not have a degree of familiarity between them.

We've seen Kayden with people who he regards as a threat to Jiwoo; they don't exactly see the next sunrise. YET, when Roist shows up in the WAA, he's irritated yes, but not antagonistic. The way Kayden speaks to Roist, allows him to meet Jiwoo is more like indulgence over anything.

His words too are gentle, not cocky, just stating it as it is. What do I mean? He's talking to Roist like he'd talk to a kid! Chastising, but not mean!

And then ofc we know his relationship with Jiwoo so I'm not gonna elaborate on that

It's just interesting that Kayden is actually borderline gentle and almost helpful with every kid he meets. Teaching them, indulging them and non threatening.

It seems to me that he's always had a soft spot for lonely kids :') such a dad even before he met Jiwoo