Ngl I Was Not Prepared For Where This Was Going

Ngl I was not prepared for where this was going

Unmute !

Matt: Nice work.

Peter: Thanks, Dad.

*Jess, Danny, Luke, and Wade all stop their conversations in their tracks and stare at Peter*

Peter: Why is everyone staring at me?

Luke: You just called Matt "Dad." You said, "Thanks, Dad."

Peter: What? No, I didn't. I said "Thanks, Man."

Matt: ...Do you see me as a father figure, Peter?

Peter, now panicking: No! If anything, I see you as a bother figure, 'cause you're always bothering me.

Wade: Hey, show your father some respect!

Peter: I didn't call him Dad!!

Matt: No, no, no, no, Peter. I take it as a compliment.

Danny: It's not a big deal. I called Joy "Mom" once!

Jess: I'm not going to touch that. But you calling Matt "Daddy"-

Peter: Hey, "Daddy" is not on the table here.

The goon they're interrogating atm: But you did call him "Dad," dude.

Peter: No one cares about your opinion. You're a nazi, idiot. Anyway, I did not call Matt "Dad."

Matt: I believe you,

Peter: Thank you!

Matt: son. Do you want to talk about it later over a game of catch?

Peter, voice breaking: ...I'd like that.

Great Power/Great Responsibility

This scene between Fury and Spider-Man is great. As much as joining a team/having oversight messes with Peter's lone wolf situation, Fury is totally right. I think it's really in character for Fury to offer his services to these heroes because it shows right out the gate that Fury has a heart and doesn't want these kids to die in the field. You also see how thorough he as a super spy seeing as he confronted Peter on Uncle Ben's birthday to better persuade him.

What I would change here is when Fury promises Peter results like Captain America and Iron Man, Peter should be like, "I don't wanna be like them. I wanna do my own thing. A friendly neighborhood Spider-Man type beat," to help to establish Peter's goal going in.

And this doesn't have to happen in this scene, it could be later in the two parter, or could even be a last conversation between Fury and Peter in the final episode. While they're talking about taking responsibility, Peter could say something about how he wants to take responsibility by himself and Fury would counter by asking Peter what would be responsible about SHIELD having all their assets, oversight, and abilities and watch as five teenagers try to figure out heroism alone.

USM!Doc Ock is my favorite variation of the character. Every other version of him I've seen looks really goofy and I think USM took advantage of how creepy he could be and I absolutely love how Otto is otherwise paralyzed if not for his appendages. It really adds to how he's a genius man who's trapped, not only by Norman, but his own body. Tom Kenny's performance as him is stellar. (Go check out the concept art for this dude, it's all so good.)

HARRY IS SO HOT I LOVE HIM ASDFDSJLKFFJELJF

Peter starting a food fight in the cafeteria did an excellent job of showing off his quick-thinking abilities. It held off the Frightful Four and bought him a distraction to change into his suit. Two birds, one stone.

JJJ being pissed at Spidey after the fight was good, but I think he should have pointed out that he didn't even try to lead the fight out of the school and away from the kids. Once Peter sees that JJJ has a legit critique, he'd begin to consider Fury's offer more.

The CAKE. The cake being the final straw was perfect. Peter literally saved the lives of his classmates, and had to check up on Harry in the hospital, but he still beats himself up over not having the bandwidth to pick up Ben's cake.

This is a little nit picky, but the sequence of Peter swinging in the rain to get to the Helicarrier needs to be void of his thoughts. Just watch this scene and hit mute when it cuts to him as Spidey. It has a more fitting tone.

HOW IS THE SPIDER CYCLE MORE EFFICIENT THAN WEBBING. THAT BITCH NEEDS GAS, IT ALSO USES WEBBING, AND IT TAKES THE SPIDER AESTHETIC OUT OF SPIDER-MAN GETTING FROM PLACE TO PLACE. NOT TO MENTION IT'S GOTTEN LOST/TOTALLED ON MULTIPLE OCCASIONS. BULLSHIT.

This moment...

is iconic; one of my favorite moments in the show.

Spider-Man claiming he can take on the Frightful Four by himself and only asking the rest of the team to clear civilians is super in-character. I just wish the rest of the scene showed how their help was desperately needed.

When Spider-Man is back on the Helicarrier, he sounded like he was joining the team because he thinks it'll be fun when he should be joining because he's finally tired of fighting alone.

I seriously love the idea of a fanfic where Peter is in a relationship with Matt and they meet Deadpool and Matt suddenly gets self conscious because Wade is able to make Peter laugh really easily and he seems a lot more comfortable with Wade then him so he starts to push Peter away but then Peter is all like “dude I love you” and Matt doesn’t believe till Wade tells him that Peter never stops talking about how awesome Matt is n stuff and then they become bros and Spideydevil prevails!

So cute. I love this.

day 9: Hanging out with friends  rad ex-girlfriends