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Sorryyy That The Requests Have Been Closed And I've Been Lacking In Writing. Here's A Treat

Sorryyy that the requests have been closed and I've been lacking in writing. Here's a treat <3

"I don't care"

Raian Kure x Afab!Reader

Sorryyy That The Requests Have Been Closed And I've Been Lacking In Writing. Here's A Treat

Content: 18+, Reader is on their period, Messy cunnilingus, Vaginal Fingering, Dirty talk, Blood play, Raian being himself

Didn't use a word count, but it's most likely 1500+ words. I didn't double check for errors either hehe

Sorryyy That The Requests Have Been Closed And I've Been Lacking In Writing. Here's A Treat

It was the second day of your period, which also happens to be the worse day of the cycle in your honest and humble opinion. Without the help of acetaminophen, you probably wouldn't have been able to go on a date with Raian. You had been going out with him for around two months, despite knowing him for years. It was a long story

Dates with Raian are a pain in the ass at first with his attitude, but it's always rewarding hanging out with him anyways. Despite feeling like a water balloon, you hobbled out the door. Looking the best you could in your current condition.

Raian was waiting for you infront of your apartment complex, staring down at his phone with a resting bitch face. If you weren't dating him, hell if you didn't even know him, you'd turn in the opposite direction. It looked like if anyone talked to him he'd snap in an instant. Lucky for you, that wouldn't actually happen.

"Raiaaan" you sang weakly, hoping he heard. His head raised and turned in your direction. The moment he laid eyes on you he smirked and shoved his phone in his pocket.

"Hey there" he said amused "Hope you have all your shit with you, because when the day is over you're coming to my place" your face slightly dropped. Did you have enough pads in your bag? You'd have to break the news to him somehow that you couldn't stay over. Or in other words, have sex.

"What's with that look?" His smirk dropped into a slight frown. "Nothing" you mustered a smile for him, and he hummed. You latched onto his arm and looked up at him, hopefully pleasing his ego a little "Let's go"

He rolled his eyes, and the two of you began to walk to your destination.

It was an active day to put it simply. It was a lot of walking, a little more than what you could handle in your current condition. It was mixed with window shopping, sightseeing, and eating. You were finally sat down and waiting for you food at a restaurant. Feeling almost too exhausted to even eat, and your feet were extremely sore.

Raian was talking about how the village was doing, including the recovery of Ohma which he probably shouldn't talk about in public. Fatigue washed over you as your eyes felt droopy, nodding along with his stories.

Unbeknownst to you, Raian had stopped talking completely, but you kept nodding and humming. Your eyes widened once you realized that you were responding to air. His face was littered with confusion, his white pupils staring you up and down.

"Okay, what the hell is going on with you?" He asked sternly, sitting up and crossing his arms.

"What do you mean?"

"You know damn well what I mean"

"I'm just tired Rai, that's all"

"I can see that, but you've been acting off all day. Is there something you're not telling me?"

"It's not something I should say in a public setting"

Raian gave a grin, clearly he thought you meant something else by that. "Oh yeah? Well it's not like anyone's listening"

It was the first time your cycle had ever landed on a date with Raian. You were extremely lucky to have avoided that for 2 months. But this time you weren't so lucky. You'd only piss him off if you held off telling him any longer.

You curled you finger, gesturing for him to lean closer. He chuckles and leans in with a playful look glazed on his face.

"I'm on my period"

The playful look he had turned into one of realization. He sat back in his seat and sighed "That explains it"

Now you were the one confused "huh?" Your eyebrows raised.

"I grew up around women. Dunno why I didn't see the signs beforehand" he rested his head on his palm while looking at you. "Plus your scent is different. That's a dead giveaway"

You were taken aback by that comment, almost flustered. He laughed and pointed at you, shaking his head.

"The look on your face is fucking priceless" his pointy teeth showed through his laughter. You pouted and looked away from him in embarrassment. So he could smell you? But you had taken a shower the night before and put on fresh clothes.

"Don't dwell on it now sweet cheeks, the foods here"

~~~~~~

"You don't have to come back to my place y'know. What I said before doesn't matter anymore" his eyes darted to the side to look at you while his hands were in his pockets. He wasn't one for handholding, unless you asked.

"It's fine Rai. You did this all for me" it seemed awfully selfless of him to resend his words because of your period.

Raian had his own smaller residence on the Kure clan property. It was all his, and it was lucky that it wasn't attached to the larger portion of his father's. Let's just say the lovemaking between the two of you was rather...thunderous on a good day.

A small part of you thought that he'd still ask for something in return. Like a blow job, a hand job if you really felt lazy. You wouldn't mind it, it's not like he was picky about touching yourself infront of him.

" 'M gonna change, do whatever you want to get settled" Raian slid open the door and kicked his shoes off before entering. He headed straight to his room, leaving it up to you to decide what to do.

'I should change my pad again' your cramps started worsening after dinner, the pain relievers had worn off slowly but surely. You headed straight to the bathroom. Once there was a fresh pad attached to your underwear, you rummaged through your bag for more pain relievers. You opened the bottle to find that there was none left.

Swearing under your breath, you mentally face palmed as you looked in the mirror as yourself. "What shall I ever do with myself" you said dramatically. You were here now. At your boyfriends house. With no way of soothing the aches that grew stronger by the minute. Maybe you could ask the family if they had a heating pad of some sort.

You trudged out of the bathroom to Raians room and slid open the panel. He had already set up the futon, except he had placed black sheets over it. Your lips curled into a smile at his thoughtfulness.

"You're sleeping in those clothes?" Raian leaned on the door frame in a grey tank top and sweatpants.

"Uh- I didn't bring any pajamas with me" you bit the inside of you cheek while looking at his muscles. Fuck. You could never get over how effortlessly hot he looked in those. It almost hurt to look because you actually just wanted to lay down and cry because of the discomfort you were in.

"Just use one of my shirts. Not like I give a shit" he opened a drawer and grabbed whatever was in there and tossed it to you. Shrugging, you turned around and took off your clothes.

The Kure raised his eyebrows and sat down while watching. The shyness you had previously of stripping infront of him had vanished apparently. You were desperate to get your clothes off anyways, spending the whole day in nice clothes was almost a sensory overload.

The only thing you had on now was his shirt and your underwear. You felt so free that you felt like frolicking through a field of dandelions. Until you realized that you just stripped infront of Raian.

"Why'd you stop? It was just getting good" He licked his lips while leaning back on a pillow.

You groaned and plopped down next to him. It wasn't worth it to fight back now. Cuddling into his side, looking for any heat that you could. Half of your body was on top of him, pressing some of your weight down to relieve all of the tension you built up.

Raians muscles tensed at your touch but eventually relaxed. His hand landed on your lower back, softly rubbing it in circles. He slightly lifted the shirt to feel your skin against his hand. It was warm, you could feel his callouses brushing against your flesh.

"Have you been cramping the whole day?" Raian asked bluntly, but in a softer tone of voice.

"Kinda"

"What about now?"

"Yeah...I'm out of medicine for it"

He looked down at you with a hardened gaze. "You didn't take or bring any?" His fingers tilted your head to look at him.

"I did, but I ran out tonight" you could tell he wasn't angry, moreso concerned. His eyes softened in understanding. Your hands rested on his abdomen, feeling him breathing in and out. You felt the butterflies in your stomach as you looked his body, your eyes tracing from his neck all the way down to his crotch. You could see the outline of his cock in his sweatpants.

He's done so much for you today. Might as well. Your hand wandered to the bulge in his pants and began stroking it softly, trying to get it hard. He jumped at the sensation and grabbed your wrist.

"What are you doing?" Raian huffed in your ear. You looked at him as innocently as you could.

"I just wanna give you something in return. I feel bad for making you carry my weight for the most of the day"

"The fuck are you talking about?" he moved your hand away from his crotch, not letting go of your wrist. "If I wanted something in return I would've asked. You don't need to force yourself to do anything"

"I know but woAH-" before you knew it, Raian had flipped you onto your back. Not roughly as you would expect it to be. His hands rested on you hips as his face hovered over yours.

"Don't think I haven't noticed how you've been looking at me since we got here. Even on your period you're still so needy" he said in a lower, more seductive tone. "Let me take care of you then if you need me so bad" his lips pressed into yours. You whimpered into his mouth as you felt yourself throb with want.

He parted from your lips and lowered himself down to your own crotch, his fingers pulling on the elastic of your underwear.

"Wait!" You shouted in protest. "I'm bleeding, we can't-"

"I don't care" he pulled them down, sliding them accross your legs and throwing it to the other side of the room. "I like the taste of blood"

You didn't know if you were disgusted or turned on. But your body yearned for him, and there was no stopping Raian when he wanted something carnally.

Raians hot breath over your aching entrance made you squirm. His arms were hooked under your thighs to make sure you stayed put. His mouth pressed into you as his tongue began to play and lick at your folds. You could feel his nose press into your clit as he began eating you out like a starved man.

You softly moaned, grabbing both sides of his head. His tongue pushed its way into you, causing your fingers to tug on his hair. He made sure to lap up every drop of blood he tasted. The taste made him hum in satisfaction.

Biting your bottom lip as you felt the vibrations of his voice shoot through you, you couldn't help but squeeze his head with your thighs as your vision got blurry. Raian chuckled and sucked your clit, holding your hips down whilst the sounds of his mouth along with the sensations of him ravaging you made you come closer to your orgasm.

"Rai...fuck...Rai ph-please" you whined.

"Fuck" he groaned into your pussy, feeling his muscles flex. His strong arms holding you down with his lips latched onto you. By this time his nose and mouth was covered in your juices mixed with blood. It was repugnant, but it felt too good. He looked absolutely mesmerizing with his eyes closed, obsessively eating you out like there was no tomorrow.

At this point your cramps were an afterthought. His tongue made you spiral in delirium. The coil inside you was going to burst, and before you knew it-

"Raian!" You screamed his name as you orgasmed, bucking your hips the best you could to ride it out. He gave your folds one last lick before separating himself. He was ignoring the boner straining in his pants because of his craving to see you get off as many times as you could tonight.

"We're not done" Raian wiped off his mouth with the back of his hand before straddling you once again. His left arm caging your face in to look straight at him. He took pleasure in the erotic look you had on your face while you panted.

"Look at you, what a lewd expression" his right hand slid between your legs to rub at your swollen and abused clit. You whined and pressed your palms into his chest. "I'm going to make you forget that your period even exists. You're going to wish you begged me to do this before"

His middle finger pushed its way into your entrance. You had forgotten how big they were compared to yours. You whined as you felt it curl inside you.

"What? Too big? Come on now, it's just a finger, not the real thing. Take it like the good slut you are" his palm pressed into your clit as he slid it in and out. Slowly accelerating the pace and which he did it.

Your back rolled with the movement of his finger, searching for as much pleasure as possible. You mewled and writhed under him, squeezing your eyes shut.

"Look at me. Open your eyes" he assertively stated while grabbing your chin. You obeyed, tears of ecstasy filling your eyes whilst your pupils looked into his.

"That's it. Look at me while I make you cum again. Your tight little pussy fucking soaking my finger. You wanted this so bad" he grumbled while stroking your g-spot. His finger thrusting into you at an intense speed. You could hear how wet you were, the sounds echoing through the room.

Everything about this was smutty. It only made your spine twinge with thrill and your nails dig into Raians chest. He groaned, his nose touching yours while watching your expressions twist. The animal in him only wanted to ravage you until you were a complete mess. But tonight was different. Tonight was about you this time.

God you were close again. Your back arched as every thought left your head. "Fuck-" you managed to sob as your thighs trembled.

"Gonna cum? Yeah? Your wet cunt can't handle any more. Cum for me" the thrusts of his fingers got shorter but rougher. His thumb rubbing circles around your clit. "You like me fingering you and eating you out. Making you helpless beneath me. I wanna shove my cock in you so bad"

"Fu...ck. .uhn...Yes- Rai....gonna-" You were cut off as his lips crashed into yours again. You moaned into him as you came on his fingers. Gasping for air as your hips shook. He pulled his finger out of you, circling your sweet spot for good measure before licking all the fluids off of his hand.

Rendered speechless, you weakly smiled at him as your back collapsed back onto the futon.

"Shit. You're a mess" he sat up and wiped off his forehead. He rolled his eyes watching you stupidly smile. "Let's get you cleaned up" he hooked his arm under your knees and shoulders and picked you up with ease.

Raian carried you to the bathroom to wash the both of you off. He wasn't very experienced in aftercare, but it'd be nasty to leave blood all over his face, hands, and between your legs.

"What about you?" You asked as you sat on the bathroom counter as he used a wash cloth to clean off your inner thigh.

"Huh? You can worry about that later. Now shut up and let me work" he huffed. You ruffled his hair and lazily sat back, completely exhausted. Atleast you weren't cramping anymore

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9 months ago

One Helluva Night

Raian Kure x GN Reader Raian Kure x Reader

Synopsis: You are a married woman with a man who is nothing but a piece of trash to you. You barely know him due to the fact that it was an arranged marriage. He has a dark secret that could cost him his life. He's being hunted down by a skilled and primal assassin who was given the mission to annihilate your husband.

Warning: ⚠️ blood, gore, Explicit, violence, angst, brutality, trash husband, Brutal Raian Kure, profanity, rough sex, rough kissing, unprotected sex, M and F oral, breeding, trigger warning

MDNI 18+ only

Side note: some of the stuff on the warnings won't come until later but I'm letting you know what the story will have. And I'm trying to make this one really long at least. It's Raian bro! He needs to shine!

Gif Credit: @hoe4rairai

One Helluva Night

Word count: 1,707

You got home and saw your husband Kevin kissing another woman in the living room. It was his secretary Nina. "Kevin! What the fuck!" You Bellowed with rage.

Kevin looked at you and rolled his eyes in annoyance. "What!? Am I not allowed to have fun at least!?" He says as he glared at you. You weren't shocked at the response he gave you because you already knew the type of person he is. He was always trying to justify his actions even if they were wrong.

Nina just mockingly laughed at you and smiled smugly as she hugged Kevin tighter to her. You only sighed heavily in annoyance and rubbed your head in frustration. You never let anyone know what type of person you really are. And Kevin and Nina are this close in finding what your other side is truly about.

"What can I say.....you're fucking boring you wear the same shit everyday....you don't even excite me! You never had! You're just a money maker for me! Your family is rich and I'm just taking their money!" Kevin laughed wickedly as he sips is whiskey. Nina joins in laughing mockingly at you.

"So that's what it's about....you think my parents are the ones who are rich?" You begin to laugh hysterically. "What's so funny? Huh?" Kevin replied annoyed.

"do you want to know why I never told you anything about me...about my identity...who I truly am? It's because I knew one day you would do something as stupid as this." You say with manic laughter.

"What the hell are you bitching about-" he doesn't finish his sentence as you send him flying to the wall with a powerful kick to his head.

Nina screams as she falls off of Kevin's lap and hits the floor as he sees Kevin get sent flying towards the wall.

"WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!" She bellows in disbelief

Blood comes out of Kevin's head as it drips down his face. you then smile wickedly at Nina who tried to crawl away. You grab her by her hair and pull on her hair hard. you slapped her violently across the face discombobulating her.

"You really thought I was a push over huh....well you thought really wrong Nina. The next time you try to mess with me.....well......I won't just slap you.....I'll make sure you'll never see the light of day...do you understand." You growl with fury as you slam your fist through the concrete wall 2 inches away from her face.

Nina flinched and nodded her head fervently in fear. Kevin slowly got up but he seemed discombobulated. You punched him once more in the face in which he then laid on the ground knocked out with two black eyes.

"You can have him Nina...I don't need him nor will I ever need him. Trash goes together with trash. Besides once he's finished with you he'll move on to the next bitch and you know it. I bet he has another side piece right now." You say to her mockingly as you show her pictures of Kevin with another woman.

Nina stays quiet. "You actually thought he cared....oh how cute.....you really thought he gave a fuck....you really are pathetic." You laugh mockingly at her seeing as the tables have turned for Nina.

"Moral of the story....don't fuck with me." You say as you laugh in amusement and walk away. You walked out of the apartment complex with your head held high and a triumphant smirk.

Unbeknownst to you that someone in the shadows watched the whole thing go down. But it's not like he was there for you anyway. He was on the hunt for your now ex-boyfriend.

He kicked the door down violently breaking it into tiny pieces with his unbelievable strength. "Who the fuck are you!" Growled Kevin with rage as he stood up all wobbly and off balance.

Raian's grin grows even wider as he looks at Kevin and grabs him by his throat chocking him. Nina screams in horror and tries to run away but Raian closes off the exit by throwing the coffee table her way.

"That woman from before did a whole number on you. I'm a little pissed that she didn't fucking let me beat you up first but....I'd say your ass is already far gone.... you're one sick bastard!" Laughed Raian as he began to choke Kevin.

"STOP IT! YOU'RE GONNA KILL HIM!" Screamed Nina in horror but Raian continued to laugh wickedly as he continued to choke Kevin.

Nina tried to hit Raian with a glass bottle on his head but that didn't work and Raian didn't budge. Raian with that sinister grin of his was eager for the fact that he was going to have fun with Thai hit. He slammed Kevin down to the floor and through the wooded floor.

Raian cackled sinisterly as he violently punched Kevin in the face multiple times giving him no mercy.

Nina did everything she could to stop Raian from hurting Kevin but it was no use. Kevin's face was squashed with Raian's brutal punches. And in a matter of seconds Kevin was dead.

Raian was covered in blood and panting heavily grinning with satisfaction. "It's your turn now bitch!" Replied Raian with his corrupt expression with a creepy sing song tone.

Nina shook and trembled with fear. She cried and begged him not to kill her too. "Please! Have mercy!" She cried in fear.

However Raian didn't let up. He grabbed her by the collar of her shirt and he kneed her in her stomach fiercely. It felt like her insides had exploded as she coughed up blood.

With one last bloody murder scream Nina realized it was over for her as Raian stomped down on her chest breaking her rib cage as bits of bone struck her heart killing her instantly.

Raian couldn't hold back his Malevolent laugh. He soon got his phone out and called his grandfather Erioh.

“Oi, i'm done with my hit. Send someone to do the clean up. I'm out-”

“All the clean up crews are busy. you know how to clean a scene. Do it yourself.” Replied Erioh dryly.

Raian growled in annoyance as he began to clean up the abomination he just got rid of.

“This guy and his wench don't even deserve to get a proper burial. Fucking bastards stole money from the Kure Clan, are traffickers, they were a whole lot of shit and the person who asked for this to happen was someone who wanted revenge for their girlfriend. So annoying!” Yelled Raian with rage as he broke the mop in half.

Soon Raian finally finished cleaning up and he left, leaving the two bodies to burn in the fireplace. Raian jumped out of the window and climbed to the rooftop of the apartment complex.

He cackled wickedly as he inhaled the air into his lungs. He soon begins jumping from rooftop to rooftop heading back home when he suddenly notices you looking outside your window noticing him.

Raian’s face was serious at first, but as soon as he saw you looking at him his face grew with straight up amusement. He began to grin sinisterly, showing off those pearly white teeth which meant business.

“What the fuck?!” You exclaim in shock as you see Raian heading towards you. You shut the window close but that wasn't enough to stop the almighty Raian Kure. He broke through your window like nothing.

Not a scratch was on him as he broke through the glass. “Shit! Who the hell are you?” You exclaimed as you got in your fighting stance.

Raian slowly walks towards you with that Malevolent grin of his. You throw blow after blow, punch after punch, kick after kick. Some blows did land but he was mostly dodging them or stopping them with a counter attack.

“You suck! And you were the one who did most of fucking damage to that Kevin guy!I don't believe that! You can barely land a blow on me!” Laughed Raian in amusement as he continues to grip both of your wrists tightly.

“AUGH! What are you talking about? How do you know my ex-boyfriend?! What the fuck is going-mmph!” Was all you could speak as Raian smooshed your cheeks together making your plump red lips pucker.

“Do you know what kind of person your ex-boyfriend was….I bet all that time you were going out with him you didn't realize what he was doing besides fucking his secretary.” Replied Raian with a sneer.

You look at him with wide eyes trying to escape his grip. Raian leaned in close to you, his hot breath tickling your neck and ear.

“Your ex-boyfriend and that bitch secretary Nina were involved in some pretty fucked up shit. I bet you didn't know you were dating a corrupt evil bastard.” He whispered in your ear still with that vile sneer of his.

You just stood there shocked with your eyes wide open. Raian pulled back and let go of your face. He eyed your red plump lips, your neck, your collarbone and your big cleavage.

He grinned devilishly as he cupped your chin lifting it up so you could look up at him. You begin to blush as you never had a man cup your chin and force you to look at him like that.

Looking at him closely. He wasn't bad looking. Though intimidating and crazy….he looked fine as hell to you. Your heart fluttered, and a chill ran up and down your spine as the excitement began to give you butterflies in your belly.

“I've decided. I’ll take you with me back to my clan. You’ll be of good use, well to at least get someone off my back.” Cackled Raian wickedly as he threw you over his shoulder like a sack of rice.

“Oof! Wait! I haven't agreed to anything yet! I don't even know who you-Aaaaaahhhh!” You scream in bloody murder as he jumps out of where your window used to be three stories down to a tree where the two of you disappeared into the night.

To be continued: ......


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9 months ago
Let's Scare Your Readers!

Let's Scare Your Readers!

Combine the techniques below with the techniques for building suspense to give your readers a palm-sweating sensation!

Darkness

If absolute darkness doesn't make sense in your story, aim for semi-darkness: dusk, a single lantern/candle, heavily curtained windows, a thick canopy of trees, etc. Flickering lights that create confusing shadows can also be effective.

Let the darkness pool gradually around your MC. Show the night or fog rolling in, the camp-fire subsiding, or the candles burn down one by one.

Examples:

The candle sputtered. The light wavered.

The lamp cast its smoky light on the brick walls.

The night was silent, but for the dry rustling of leaves as the wind whispered through the trees.

Sound

Of all the senses, the sense of hearing serves best to create excitement and fear.

the clacking of the villain's boots on the floor tiles, the ticking of the wall clock, a dog barking outside, the roaring of a distant motor, a door slamming somewhere in the house, water dripping from the ceiling, the chair squeaking, the whine of the dentist's drill, the scraping of the knife on a whetstone, a faraway siren wailing the heroine's own heartbeat thudding in her ears.

When the surroundings are dark, your MC will grow to be more aware of the surrounding noise, even if it's not relevant to the plot.

Chill

Make it uncomfortably cold for the MC, and your readers will shiver with them.

powercut cutting off the heating, nightfall naturally bringing in lower temperatures.

winter, evening, a cool breeze that chills everything, survivors running our of fuel, the ceiling fan is over-active, stone builindg/caves/sbuterranean chambers tend to be cold.

Describe how the cold pinpricks the MC's skin, stunting their thinking and making them shiver.

The opposite can also be effective: turn up the temperature using a stove, an overheated motor, or the sweltering sun to make the MC sweat.

Isolation

This is a common technique: let the MC face the monster alone with no external help. It's also easier to limit the resources and escape routes available for the MC.

an abandoned factory, remote mountaintop, the depth of an unexplored cave.

It can also be more everyday locations: a construction site, the sewer, a malfunctioning bathroom.

Meet the Monster

When describing the threat, spread out your descriptions so that (1) the scene has constant action (2) you have material to build up later.

Good details to show:

hands, fingers, nails, talons, claws

the sound of the voice, growl, roar

the smile, teeth

the texture of skin, fur, scales.

Get Visceral

Never tell your readers that the MC is scared. Describe the fright using these physical effects:

the skin crawling, breath stalling, scalp pricking, clenching of the chest, stomach curling, heart thudding, sweat tricking down, clogged throat, pulse in the ears, cold sweat, chills up/down the spine, stomach knotting, breathless, etc.

The Gory Bits

Instead of describing everything, limit yourself to particular details, keeping overall description short. Non-stop gore doesn't shock - its bores.

Create a contrast: the child's mutilated corpse still clutches the doll. The brains from the baby's plt skull spill across the fluffy pink blanket.

Use similes, comparing gruesome buts to something from ordinary life. The intestines look like spaghetti in tomato sauce. The blood spilling from the mouth looks like lipstick.

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9 months ago

I still laugh at this 😏

I Still Laugh At This
I Still Laugh At This
9 months ago

One Helluva Hunt Part 2

Raian Kure x GN Reader Raian Kure x Reader Raian Kure x female reader

Synopsis: You are now trapped in Raian's grasp as he took you with him without hesitation. Where is he taking you? Why did he take you? What y'all's destination....only the Devil himself knows.

Warning: ⚠️ blood, gore, Explicit, violence, angst, brutality, trash husband, Brutal Raian Kure, profanity, rough sex, rough kissing, unprotected sex, M and F oral, breeding, trigger warning

MDNI 18+ only

Side note: some of the stuff on the warnings won't come until later but I'm letting you know what the story will have. And I'm trying to make this one really long at least. It's Raian bro! He needs to shine!

Gif credit: @hoe4rairai and also clideo.com: if I got this wrong please let me know so I can fix.

One Helluva Hunt Part 2

Word count: l,202

Part 1 ⬇️

One Helluva Night
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Raian Kure x GN Reader Raian Kure x Reader Synopsis: You are a married woman with a man who is nothing but a piece of trash to you. You bar

You were still being carried like a sack of rice and Raian cackled wickedly in amusement.

“Um….sir…..Mister….where are you taking me?” You say still confused as all you could see was a vast range of forest and dirt and his walking feet.

Raian says nothing as he handles you roughly. “Hey!” You say a bit annoyed as he continues to carry you like a sack of rice.

You notice his ass, firm, and very enticing. You begin to blush. “God he has a fina ass. I want to touch it…it's probably firm.” You think to yourself as you gulp down some saliva and look away from his ass.

“Can you at least tell me your name?” You say pretty irritated.

Suddenly Raian drops you on your bottom in which you land hard on the ground. “OW! HEY YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE! AT LEAST HAVE THE DECENCY TO TELL ME THAT YOU'RE PUTTING ME DOWN!” You Bellowed with rage as you rubbed your butt to soothe the pain away.

“SHUT UP!” Bellowed Raian back with a wicked sneer.

“MAKE ME YOU SON OF A BITCH!” You yell back, getting in his face.

The two of you growl at each other but Raian seems to be enjoying the interaction seeing as he kept laughing with an amused wide grin.

Suddenly your stomach growls and you back away feeling a little embarrassed. Raian laughs at you as he then gets up and walks away. You wonder what the hell he's doing.

He brings back some wood and starts a fire. “go hunt for your food I ain't no one's babysitter especially for a weakling like you!” replied Raian harshly.

“I'm not a weakling you bastard! And I know how to fucking hint and I don't fucking need a man to do shit for me! And why did you bring me with you anyway!” You retorted back at him loudly.

He continued to laugh in amusement as he got up and went deep into the woods to hunt for a boar. You just fumed and you went your own way to hunt for anything to eat, like a boar, a rabbit, a deer, and yes even a snake.

As you enter deep into the woods you see a boar. But what you didn't know is that it was the same boat that Raian was hunting. As soon as you lunge at the boar and so does Raian.

“I saw it first you jackass!” you growled as you pushed him out of the way. Raian just laughed and lunged forward towards the boar. You punched him in the face and kicked him hard on his side sending him flying through various trees knocking them down like Domino's and that still had no effect on him.

“You think that will stop me! You brat!” He growled as he lunged towards you and the boar. You quickly dodged his attacks and you decided to hide above the trees. Luckily you managed to gather some sticks and some rocks and what you could use as string.

“I’ll be damned if he gets that boar before me!” You grumble under your breath as you make a bow and arrow with what you could gather in the forest.

“Oh Angel cakes! Where are you?” Called out Raian in a chilling singsong tone.

“Tch! Fucking asshole.” You mutter under your breath annoyed. You look for the boar ignoring Raian and once you see the boar you take your aim and shoot the boar down.

You glide from tree to tree to claim your prize but Raian tackles you to the ground. “I found you! Angel cakes!” He growled with a menacing glare still with that vile sneer on his face.

“Oof! Hey you bastard! The boar is mine! I shot it down with my bow and arrow fair and square.” You spat with fury as you pushed him off of you. You hurried and took your prize. But he laughed as he showed you that he had caught many more boars and deers he had hunted down and claimed as prizes.

It was as if he was toying with you from the very beginning the hunt started. You glared at him and purposely bumped into him to move out of the way.

He devoured all of his prizes while you slowly ate yours. He finishes all of his hunts and then he puts out the fire and picks you up, throwing you over his shoulder once again like a sack of rice.

“Augh! Hey! You ass! Stop it! Let me go!” You yell as you try to get out of his grasp.

Raian continued to grin slyly as he smacked your ass with his right hand.

“Oh! HEY! WHAT THE FUCK! WHY DID YOU DO THAT! I BARELY KNOW YOU- AUGH!” You yell at him irritated by his personality. He then jerked her back a little on his shoulder making her grab onto the back of his black jacket tightly.

“What a noisy bunny you are.” He says laughing at you as he continues to walk through the woods with you over his shoulder. After a good while of him walking in the woods you start getting sleepy. Your eyelids are getting heavy and your whole body is going and limp.

You finally crash and your hands are swaying back and forth as they start patting Raian’s firm and hot ass.

Raian could hear you snoring so he pulled you backwards and carried you in his arms bridal style.

“Damn it! This stupid woman fell asleep ...how boring…..well at least she won't remember how to get back home since The Kure clan’s village is hidden near the mountains anyway. What a foolish woman she is.” Replied Raian with a heavy and irritated sigh.

The next morning you woke up in an unfamiliar place. There was no more forest. You looked around and saw that you were sleeping on a comfortable futon and a very cozy room with tatami flooring and a beautiful scenery of the veranda surrounded by the gardens and forest.

“W-we're am I?” You talk to yourself all puzzled.

“Oh good! You're awake!” Says a cherry voice. You turn to look and see a young woman with short black hair and the same Black eyes that Raian has. But she seemed much nicer than him. She had a tray of food in her hands.

“Um….hello there….good morning…um….where exactly am I and who are you?” You ask, still puzzled but smiling kindly at her.

“You're at the home of the Kure Clan. I'm Fusui Kure and your sister in law….it's so nice to finally meet my older brother's wife!” She bows respectfully to you.

“Huh…..*blinks rapidly.* Pardon me? Come again?.......” You are still confused.

“Welcome to the family! Sister in law!” She says with a bright smile.

You faint back on the futon as your soul leaves your body.

“OH NO! SISTER IN-LAW! SISTER IN-LAW! GRANDPA! RAIAN’S WIFE FAINTED! SOMEONE! HELP!” Fusui yelled as she quickly grabbed a hand fan and began blowing air to you.

“How….did I……end up in this situation again.” You think to yourself as you scream internally still unconscious.

To be continued: .......


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10 months ago

THE UNFORGOTTEN NIGHT

OHMA TOKITA PART 2

Ohma Tokita x GN Reader Ohma Tokita Smut

THE UNFORGOTTEN NIGHT

|⚠️ Warning: 18+| Smut| Fluff| Explicit| ⚠️|

Explicit content: |cream pie| one night stand| drunk| rough sex| unprotected sex| dominant| Fluff|

18+ MDNI

THE UNFORGOTTEN NIGHT
The unforgotten night
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Ohma cupped your chin as he leaned in to lick your lips once again. Your mouth parted slightly and he slid his tongue inside of your mouth while continuing to rub his huge shaft on your p****.

"mmmm.....haaa....." You moan quietly in his mouth as the two of you continue to kiss passionately.

Ohma grabs you by your thighs and he pulls you towards him. Ohma is beginning to breathe heavily as he inserts his huge shaft inside of you.

You let out a loud yelp and then you quickly cover your mouth. Ohma removes your hand from your mouth biting the palm of your hand.

Ohma begins to thrust his hips forward his voice hoarse with heavy breathing. "Mmnngh.....Ooh......ooh...." You moaned softly as Ohma gripped your waist tightly while thrusting himself deeper and deeper inside of you. Your insides tightening around his shaft made him get even more excited.

The bed began to creak, groan, and shake beneath them from intense session. *Squelch squish squelch* Ohma groans as he begins to rock his hips faster. Your mewls grew louder as you clawed at his back.

"AH....AH.....AH.....FUCK! OHMA!" You scream at the top of your lungs.

Ohma groans as he increases his movements. The bed shakes with Ohma's intensity. "Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh!" You continue to moan louder as Ohma continues to thrust faster.

Sweat droplets fell from his face to your body as his breathing got heavier and heavier as he continued to bury his shaft deeper inside of you until it was all the way in.

Your eyes get glossy and a few tears shed as your moans grow louder and louder because of Ohma's intense thrusts. "Ah Ohma....mmm..." He hushes you with a passionate kiss. Ohma then sits on the edge of the bed bringing you along with him as he sat you on top of him his pecker is buried deep inside of you still. "Ohma...." You called him quietly but Ohma gave you a sly grin.

You straddle yourself on him wrapping your legs around his thighs. You begin to ride him. you slowly bounce up and down on his shaft. "Mmm.....oh....ah....." You continued to mewl softly. Ohma chuckles at your soft mewls. He then begins to thrust upwards deep inside of you.

You mewl louder and whimper softly. "Ohma.... I'm gonna cum...ah.." You whisper softly.

"Not yet.....just a little longer..." Spoke Ohma with a low growl as he bites down on your bottom lip thrusting his hips upwards his shaft burying deeper and deeper inside of you.

Your soft mewls continue to fill the room. You were in paradise. You loved the way he made you feel. Even though you were drunk, you weren't going to remember a thing tomorrow.

After a few minutes Ohma sets you back down on the bed. "Get on all fours.....and stick your ass up." He whispers softly into your ear.

You look back at him from the corner of your eye with a sly grin as you do as he says. He slides himself inside of you and he begins to thrust erratically deep into your womb. You begin to moan and whine in pleasure. Your eyes are crossed, your tongue is sticking out your top body laying on the bed and your lower half sticking upward as Ohma's huge shaft dug deeper and deeper. Ohma's movements begin to get erratic.

Ohma grabs a fist full of your hair pulling on it as he thrusts primally deeper into your womb. "AH! AH! AH! OH GOD! OHMA! I'M CUMMING!" You Bellowed at the top of your lungs with pleasure.

Ohma says nothing as he looks down at you with intensity, his brows furrowed and his teeth gritting as he continues to thrust harder and deeper. His sweat dripping down with every movement as he breathed heavily with one of his hands gripping your hair tightly and pulling it and the other gripping your left hip tightly his finger tips digging deeper into your skin.

You let out a small yelp as you exploded your cum on his shaft. Ohma only grinned and he continued to move aggressively until he groaned reaching his climax. "Mngh!" Growled Ohma as he exploded bucket loads of his cum inside of you. He moved slowly pumping in and out of you until every last drop of cum got deep inside of you.

All of the cum oozed out of you and dripped out of you as you whimpered softly. He loved the way your insides tightened around his shaft.

Ohma lifts your head up tilting it slightly backwards so you can look at him. He leans forward and kisses you passionately as he slides his huge bulging member out of you spilling what little cum there still was coming out of his shaft on your back and plump, voluptuous, ass.

When he pulls back from the kiss he lets you relax your body. You lay down on your stomach breathing heavily trying to catch your breath. Ohma lets himself fall on the bed beside her. Without warning he pulls her close to him. You laid your head on his sweaty chest but you didn't care. You snuggled yourself on him.

Ohma rubbed your shoulder gently while looking down at you with a soft look. You never thought in a million years you would see Ohma showing his soft side. Ohma caresses your cheek gently. He brushes a few strands of your sweaty and sticky hair behind your ear.

"Your face is still red....are you okay? I probably.....went overboard-"

"No....you didn't..... I'm fine ....really...." You reply quietly as you smile up at him.

Ohma smiles back at you softly. He kisses your forehead with such tenderness that your body feels tingles of excitement as he shows you affection.

"sleep well..." He says in a quiet whisper as he kisses your lips once more Before the two of you fall asleep.

To be continued


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